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    Breathe Me * Chapters 5 & 6

    Story written on September 26, 2010 by scaf.
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    CHAPTER 5

    In a forty-five minute period, Agent Porter had transformed Conference Room B into a tactical command center.  A dry erase board outlined a timeline of the victims’ deaths, another listed possible suspects.  Her power point presentation was ready to go, the movie-like screen behind her reflecting a hazy glow. Porter looked up at the clock in the back of the room and waited for the detectives to show; though, there was only one detective whose appearance she was both anticipating and dreading.  She wondered if Kennard would challenge her in front of the other detectives, knowing full well that it was a distinct possibility.

     

    "Special Agent Porter, Detective Alice Pieszecki.  It is a pleasure to meet you."  Alice shook Porter’s hand vigorously and conjured up her absolute best come hither look. 

     

    Bette did her best not to laugh.

     

    "Detective Pieszecki, it’s very nice to meet you, as well.  You can sit anywhere you’d like."  Bette smiled and Alice was frozen to the spot.

     

    "Everything okay?"

     

    "Oh yes.  Okay"

     

    "You can sit down now," Bette emphasized.

     

    "Right. Ha Ha.  Of course."  Alice turned to find a seat, only to walk directly into forensics expert Dr. Dana Fairbanks.

     

    "Ooof!" 

     

    Fairbanks dropped an ipad, a notebook, and a plethora of pens.  All three women bent over to pick them up.  Much to Shane’s approval, Special Agent Porter’s ass was in her direct sightline.  Bette stood to find the much shorter brunette staring back at her with a cocky grin,

     

    "Detective Sergeant Shane McCutcheon," Shane introduced herself and stuck out her hand.

     

    "Pleasure to meet you.  You’re Kennard’s partner, right?" Bette brushed a stray lock of hair from her eyes, "And you must be Dr. Fairbanks?"  Bette turned to the other woman now at her side.

     

    "Yes on both accounts," Dana smiled goofily.

     

    Bette smoothed her skirt as the other women took their seats.  They were joined by one other officer on loan.  Officer Schecter introduced herself to the agent in charge and sat on the complete opposite side of the room.

     

    "Wow, she’s…..Crispay."  Dana snorted as she watched Porter empty out the contents of a box to the left of the table.

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    1. I really am enjoying this story. I opened this site up hoping to see this story posted and here it was. Thanks for the regular posts and the really good story. Can’t wait for another post.

    6. Good riddance to Mr. Eric. Sounds like Tina was not getting an relief from Mr. Dick anyway. How insensitive could he be. I hope that Tina opens her heart to get some strenght and help from Bette.

    9. Eric wait, there’s still a chance you and Tina can work things out ……………………… thanks for the awesome post scaf. I love a good thriller.

    14. I am glad that Tina ended things with Eric first, I hate cheating of any kind. So they are to Bette and Tina already. I was happy when Bette put Jenny in her place, and informed her that Tina, did not report to her and that she was actually her equal.

    15. I’m loving this story. It’s a good thing that Tina put ERic out. Even if she had had sex with him, it would’t have been his name that she called out, it would have been Bette and that really would’ve been hard to explain, not only to Eric but to herself as well. Wonderful chapter. Thanks for posting.

    17. “…Say hi to Tina for me. I’m sure you’ll be seeing her in your dreams.” :-))I’m liking very much your story and I also like Rizzoli & Isles but I’m especially looking for Ride Along as Jennifer.B said about her character that it’s Bette 100 times.

    19. Hey Scaf, I am totally addicted and entranced by this new story.The heat between Bette and Tina is intense and so passionate.I love that the rest of the gang are around and can see it even if Bette and Tina can’t right now.Good riddance to Eric as he was souch a pain and a hurdle to Bette and Tina’s romance.More please.Just wonderful.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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