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Who’s Shane McCutchoen?
Carmen blindly runs out of the house for her dear life…she could not believe that she just killed a person….she runs across the huge garden until she bumps against someone.
she looks up to see Shane standing in front of her, no trace of any cut or mark of any struggle in Shane’s face…and she’s dressed up differently too…..how did Shane come out here…then who did she just leave behind in the house…..
"Shane"….that’s all Carmen managed to say….before sticking her fingers in Shane’s eyes….
"Ouch….what the fuck….who the hell are you?"
Carmen:"Shane….enough of your games….now get off me and stop going after my family….leave us alone"
"Who the hell are you-…..wait wait…are you Jordan’s wife?"
the name Jordan rings a bell in Carmen. She heard her dad absent mindedly mumbling about some Jordan before leaving for office the day he died, and she also say a passport with the name Jordan on it.
Carmen:"Who’s Jordan?"
"okay first assure me that you’re not gonna hit me…I don’t know what the hell Jordan told you about me…but you gotta listen to me…."
Carmen looks at the sincere green eyes and takes her chances.
"Look my name is Shane McCutcheon, I like in We-ho LA, I have a twin sister called Jordan….we were separated at childhood and she appears all of a sudden last year and takes me to this vacation…but she disappeared after she took money from me to get the place fare and my passport and my girlff…whatever…so after searching for her for a long time….I gave up looking for her….and then last week she called me to tell me that she got married and is settling down for good. But I know that she’s a pretty crooked person..the people she hangs out with are not too clean either. So I would say be careful, now I don’t know what your deal is with Jordan…but please don’t misunderstand me….I swear I am not anything like her. I already got into a lotta trouble because she borrowed money from people pretending she was me….I don’t know how to explain this. "
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CArmen’s POV:
CArmen:"I don’t believe you…" although I did believe this duplicate of Shane…wait not Shane, its Jordan…this is way too complicated. So I run into the room where Shane..I mean Jordan was with her girlfriend…..and this new person is running after me.
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whew what a turn of events, so glad that all the crapped pulled wasn’t by shane :)
Ok truth be told I lost faith in ya BUT hoiiiiiiii… Thank God for the Salvos…. Interesting – I thought you turned Shane into a physco killer. OK what next….
OMG!!! Now our Shane came back. whew~~You scared us shaney’scarm haha. Thanx for the update pps.