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    Something so right – chapter 125

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter 125

    Bette stepped outside with the two cocktails and put them on the table and sunk back into her sun lounger. It was Sunday lunchtime and they were enjoying the laziest possible day before they went back to work. Tina was on the lounger beside her – she was wearing white shorts and a white bikini top – her eyes were closed. Bette smiled and took one of the ice cubes from her drink and held it in her hand just above Tina’s belly. It only took a seconds for the heat from Bette’s hand to start melting the ice and the cold water drip onto Tina’s stomach.

     

    “What   – shit Bette you mean bitch “ Tina said opening her eyes and catching Bette in the act. Bette laughed and popped the ice cube back into her mouth. She lifted her sunglasses and gave Bette a “ look “

     

    “I couldn’t resist “

     

     

    “Cow “ Tina replied smiling at Bette

     

     

    “Cocktail ?” Bette offered Tina one of the glasses

     

     

    Tina smiled “Isn’t 1 o’clock a little early in the day for a cocktail ?”

     

     

    “Not really – we have survived another drama filled trip to your folks – we have earned these and several more as well, plus – fancy a take away later or if we don’t drink too many of these we could go out for dinner ?”

     

     

    “A take away would be wonderful “

     

     

    Bette sat down and picked up her cocktail and took a sip  – maybe it was a little too strong !

     

     

    “I have noticed how much you crave non organic, junk food after you have been to  the farm”

     

     

    Tina sipped her cocktail  – a few more of those and she wouldn’t be able to find the phone to call for a take away  – oh well – it had been a long time since they had really let their hair down like this.

     

     

    “I might be a country girl but I am also an LA girl now “ Tina replied

     

     

    Bette put her drink down and looked at Tina

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    1. Hi Ally, a great couple of chapters.It was fun to have Willow being so different from her other siblings.I’m so glad that Bette and Finn were present as to stop Willow and Tina for coming to blows in a full-blown fight.Then the funnies continued as Tina attempted to get Bette to make some decisions about their wedding day.The best bit was Bette’s naivity in all things wedding. She did a good job for deflecting all the questions and putting off any decisions until another time.ALly, you always put such a big smile on my face as I read your words.Thank you so much for supporting this site and creating a brilliant tale of love and life.Your Loyal Fan and Friend.

    2. HEy Ally, It did make me laff that the ad following your story is “A Perfect location for your Wedding in beautiful Perthshire countryside”… Too funny for words.

    3. Boy oh boy, Ms. Willow is a pill. I think Finn is right, she is jealous of Tina and Bette being able to buy her father out. She after all, is the capitalist among them. She has not thought of the consequences if that doesn’t happen, Tina and Bette are trying to protect Sarah since she has worked so hard and Niall is off being an ass wanting to collect on Sarah’s hard work. She’d better watch out coming down on Tina and Bette so hard. If she needs help while she is in school, she won’t have anyone to turn to on the west coast if she alienates them and Finn, she will be all alone. Willow is very young yet, maybe she will have different feelings if she will just let someone explain what they are trying to do to help. On one hand I don’t think she needs to know all the info lest she go back and tell Nialls parents and they tip Niall off to what is being planned and that takes away the surprise and gives him more info with which to hurt Sarah and then he tries to buy her half and leave her and the children with nothing, which he is fully capable of doing. Then since he is not interested in working the farm anymore, he would be the one to sell to developers. Willow needs to calm the hell down and put her thinking cap on for a change. Sarah need not tell Willow any more of their thinking about the farm so she can’t tell anyone else, so as to protect Sarah. I guess none of them thought of that because they all are so upset with Willow. Niall’s parents are not on Sarah’s side in this and everyone needs to think of that. Great update AllyE. Thanks for posting.

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