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    Something so right – chapters 126 & 127

    Story written on October 13, 2010 by allyemmerson.
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    The one where Bette plans a party and they share a shower…

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter 126

    　

     

    Bette arrived at the country club where Finn was the assistant bar manager. She climbed out of her car, put on her sunglasses and strolled round to the tables at the back of the club. Finn was standing chatting to a couple of female customers who were obviously drooling over him. Bette watched the women for a few minutes before she decided on interfering a little.

     

    “Finn – darling “ Bette said hurrying over to him and kissing him. Finn was slightly taken aback but he grinned at his future sister in law

     

    “Hello sexy “ he said

     

    “Hey handsome – oh sorry – but isn’t he SUCH a dish ?” she said over acting

     

     

    The two women exchanged looks and hurried inside. Alone Bette and Finn burst out laughing

     

    “You are going to get me into trouble “

     

     

    “Not the sort of trouble that they want to get you into – you are WAY safer with me “

     

     

    “I don’t doubt it “

     

     

    Bette looked at him – in dark trousers, a white shirt and smart waistcoat he looked good. Bette grinned

     

    “What ? You never seen a stylish man before ?”

     

     

    “I was just imagining you when we first met – you looked a little different “

     

     

    “I know “

     

     

    “Are you allowed to talk to the clients ?”

     

    “Its quiet and I assume that you are here to talk about my sisters party on Friday “

     

    “I am – Helena is meeting me here in 10 minutes “

     

    “Would you like a drink ?”

     

    “Just a fruit juice – what’s the food like today ?”

     

     

    “Pretty good – I will go and see what the chef recommends “

     

    “Tell the waiters not to spit in our food “

     

     

    Finn laughed “How is my sister ?”

     

    “She’s fine “

     

    “Does she have any idea what you are planning ?”

     

    “Hell no – I hope your mom hasn’t said anything “

     

     

    “No – I am picking her up tomorrow morning – Shane and I have been cleaning the house for two weeks “

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    1. HEY Ally, First I get Bette and FInn making the funnies then Helena joins in on the act and finally ALice has make the hugest of error by email rather priivate piccies to everyine she knows.Bette and Tina;’s shock and horror had my sides splitting. Tears are now rolling down my face as I try to respond to this hysterical chapter.Too good for words.Thanks you for the hilarious images and replies.Your Loyal Fan and Friend.

    3. Great one AllyE. Glad that Bette has worked things out for Tina’s birthday party and the engagement party for them. Tina will be so surprised to see her mother and all the others on Friday night when she was expecting a quiet dinner with her one and only love. Thanks for posting.

    6. This was cracking me up! Poor Alice….I wonder who did this to her. It sounds like they sent an email to everyone in her Contacts List. I can’t imagine she did this herself on purpose. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

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