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Something so right – chap 132
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SOMETHING SO RIGHT
CHAPTER 132
　
“Hey Ti – look who it is – Alice Pieszecki” Bette said loudly dragging Alice from her hiding place and accidentally knocking her sunglasses to the ground
“HEY ALICE – Hey dude – how’s it going ALICE !! “ Tina instantly picked up Bette’s actions and mirrored them
“SO ALICE PIESZECKI – How the fuck is your day going ?”
“Will the two of you shut the fuck up “
“WHAT’S THAT ALICE – WE CAN’T HEAR YOU – SPEAK UP A LITTLE “
“What’s up Alice – something spoil your day ?“
“Will the two of you stop fucking drawing attention to me “
“WHAT WAS THAT YOU SAID ALICE PIESZECKI “ Tina said – so I am just marrying Bette for her money am I Alice ?
“Shut up SHUT UP “
By now they were getting by-passers looking at them – it wouldn’t take much for one of them to recognise the now infamous Alice Pieszecki.
“People will recognise me “ Alice said “So shut up “
“Why would anyone recognise you Alice – you’ve got your clothes on “ Tina said acidly
“For fucking fucks sake – shut up and get me away from here before I get a crowd “
“I thought you liked publicity – no such thing as bad publicity you always tell us “ Bette said
“For gods sake get me off the streets “
“Now there’s a request “ Tina looked at Bette – she could happily stand and make Alice suffer for many a happy hour but it probably wasn’t fair – but then again Alice hadn’t been that fair to them lately – there had been a lot of digs about why Tina had proposed to Bette. Tina was also in an unforgiving mood given that Alice was doing her best to spoil Bette’s surprise – what goes around comes around Alice and you have been playing with fire for a while.
“Come on Alice – where do you want to be dropped off ?” Bette relented – for now
“Can I stay with the two of you for a couple of nights ?”
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Hey Ally. Another perfect one! I think that they lost a lot of time with Alice. Let them take a break and have a nice evening. Thank you for posting
I have always disliked Alice and she is just jealous that Tina is with Bette and they have a good life together and she has no one special in her life. Well it’s her own fault for hooking up with the crazies of the world. Even if she is miserable she doesn’t hae to spoil things for Tina and Bette and I don’t blame Bette one bit for saying good riddance. She is acting like a 6 yr. old wanting someone to come get her and say everything is ok, we will play your games Alice and leave ours alone. Get over yourself Alice. Hopefully Tina will be totally surprised when she sees her mother and the car is another surprise that will just blow her away. She knows about the party but not the surprises and Bette will get real lucky after the party is over. Can hardly wait for the party. Great update. Thanks for posting.
Alice needs to get over herself
Thanks for the post. Alice appears to be extremely emotionally immature. She has a 5 year old’s perspective on relationships. Everything revolves around her and she gets her feelings hurt really easily because she can’t empathize with anyone else’s feelings. She’s really annoying but I find myself feeling sorry for anyway. She really does need a friend right now. I hope she doesn’t walk away from Bette because then she won’t have anyone.
Oh for f***’s sake!!! To hell with Alice! Why are they putting up with her annoying @ss anyway?!! I can’t stand her loud mouthed, nosey, childish behind! There is no way I would be ‘kissing’ her @ss and taking all the sh*t she’s been dishing out! She’s talking about cutting them out of her life! Hell, Tina should have asked her if she could start right then and there! Good riddance! SEEYA! Take yo @ss home and get over yourself! You are not THAT important! Now, on with the story. *deep breath* I probably should have calmed down before i posted; But it’s how I feel after reading that chapter. The story is great as usual. Alice is just not a character that I like at all.
Alice you are rude, Tina was very patient with you. / / / Huummm When Alice discover which Bette is already mounted in the cash, she will play more dirtier still with Tina. Drama Hahaha, very good.
Alice asked for.Thank you for the update and have a nice weekend.
excellent as always. Now they just need to go home and spend time together. thank you for this story.
Hey Ally, That was interesting. Bette and Tina attempted to be good friends to Alice. Although it worked for a little while, Alice hit out at Bette and then Tina by through back all of their empathy and kind words. yes, Alice has been made a fool of by Jenny’s vicious action however like a wounded animal striking out at those closest to you isn’t the best option. Alice really does have a bean up her ass about Tina’s place in Bette’s heart and life. Now is the time for Alice to grow up and sort her mess out and be happy for her best friend who has found the love of her life. I could take this better if Tina was taking Bette away from the gals however she has embraced them and their importance in her lover’s life. As always, I can’t wait to read more. Many thanks for the great update. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.