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Out Of Time-Chapter 2
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I spent all day thinking about what I would wear on my date with Tina. I wondered if she’d wear something short and revealing or long and classy. Would the chemistry still be there? Would she spend the night? My thoughts were scattered as I finally began to get dressed. After much debate, I decided to wear a simple black dress. It was elegant yet form fitting. It would blow Tina’s mind.
*door bell rings*
I sigh nervously, and open the door. I’m amazed at what I see. Tina looks like a goddess. Her hair is long and flowing, her eyes are sparkling, and her dress is like something out of a magazine. Its fire red and fit her body perfectly. Every curve was accentuated.
And once again, I was faced with sadness. This beautiful woman was nearing the end of her life. That’s why she was here.
“Bette?” she says cautiously. “Is everything ok?”
I clear my throat. “Yes! Everything is fine. You look so beautiful that you took my breath away. Your smile, that dress, everything is just perfect.”
She smiled shyly. “Thank you. You look great yourself. Are you ready?”
“Ready for anything.” I strolled out of the door towards the car confidently. I don’t know where the confidence came from. I’m nervous, anxious, and terrified of what could happen tonight. What if all the old feelings came back? What will I do when she dies? How can I lose her again?
“Penny for your thoughts?” she says, interrupting my reverie.
“Sorry. My thoughts cost at least a few hundred.”
She laughs lightly. “Cute. But really, I know you’re probably worried about tonight. Don’t be. There’s no pressure. No obligation. Just dinner and conversation. If I remember correctly, you love to eat and talk so this should all be easy.” She smiles at me, and I find comfort in her words. We ride in silence the rest of the way. It isn’t an awkward, tense silence. Just two people who know when words aren’t necessary.
We arrive at the restaurant, and find it packed as usual. We walk up to the hostess, and Tina whispers something in her ear. Immediately, we’re being seated at the most exclusive table in the restaurant. It’s upstairs on the balcony; a balcony I never even knew existed.
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praying for a miracle… with the liver she could maybe use a living donor… like the others saud… its fan fiction
I’m already crying…literally…at the thought of Tina dying. I can’t stop reading this though. Somehow maybe she can live? I don’t need reality!
Very intereting new story. Enjoying it. But I really do hate to see either of them die in a fictional story. After all, it is fiction and anything can be written to change the future. Hopefully their rekindled love will be enough to vanquish the cancer from her body with continued medical treatments. And it will be such a cure and reversal of the disease that the medics will be astounded and the grim reaper will be foiled once again from claiming another life. Thanks for posting.
What about a miracle?Thank you,interesting story.
More please and soon. Love this
nice start. the premise is a bit sad but I’m curious to read about the journey. I agree with Dainty, love can move mountains, so…..
Oh my goodness; how would one process such a shock. I’m on board for the ride, thanks for the story
Very different story. I don’t really want Tina to die. Excellent writing. Thank you.
This straight forward Tina. Something both could have been without been pushed by one of them dying. Thank you LWordFan2009 for describing so well how we are behaving until we are fCing a lost. But please Tina cannot die. Not here. Bette and Tina are our life jacket. They are the proof that we can be happy. I love the story so much. It’s highliting whT is m the most important: LOVE.