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Family Woman (Chapter 5)
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Bette awoke to a sea of giggles, and yawned before the smile took over her lips. When she turned, she saw Tina groaning on her side from the way Angelica had jumped onto their bed.
“Are you okay?”
Tina looked over and smiled, still holding her side. “Yeah yeah, I’ll live.”
“Ahh! Yay!” Angelica laughed, jumping on the bed between them.
Something came over Bette, and it was instinct as she reached up and pulled the little girl into her lap, laughing along with her. “You’ve gotta stop jumping or you’re gonna hurt someone.”
“Too late,” Tina chuckled, pulling herself up to sit as she watched Bette with Angelica. She seemed so much more natural today – maybe something had just come over Bette the past few days. She didn’t really understand, but she didn’t care. It was too early to overanalyze anything. “Uh … coffee. Strong coffee.”
Bette chuckled and got out of bed with Angelica still in her arms. It was like she took a strong breath of motherly air, capable of comfort with the child on her hip. The ease made her smile as she walked around and looked into the little girl’s adorably curious eyes. “What do you say for hurting Mommy?” She couldn’t help but smile as she was coaxed by the child to lean down.
“I’m sorry Mommy,” Angelica said with all the heart she could, placing her little hands over the comforter before Bette stood upright once more.
Tina melted at how adorable that had been. It wasn’t often she had such a sweet apology, and her smile was immediate. “It’s okay baby.”
“We have to make some coffee,” Bette smiled, enjoying the comfort she felt with Angelica as they made their way out of the room. Angelica smiled and rested her head on her mother’s shoulder, laughing when Bette tickled her side.
Tina could hear the little voice in the hall. “Can I make it?” And she could hear Bette’s laugh along with it, as she lay down once again. She didn’t know how, but Angelica’s knee felt even bonier than the week before when she had received a similar injury. She closed her eyes and smiled at Angelica’s clumsiness, and allowed herself to rest for another minute.
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This is obviously something Bette hasn’t felt before! Being turned on and at the same time having a deep soulful connection.
god, i love this story!! i’ve been pining for it for the last few days so im glad to read that you’re gonna have more time to write! really enjoyed this chapter and the fact that bette is beginning to enjoy living this life, being angies parent and most of all tinas partner…please post soon :)
I am so loving this story!!! I am glad Bette is openning up her heart to Tina and Angie. Thank you PPS
How would I like this story to end? With Bette and Tina happy and so in-love with each other and Angie, back in the world that this Bette came from. Thank you
While reading your AN I agree that I didn’t like the way the movie ended. If I remember correctly he left her with another man that she had married. Am I wrong. I don’t want to see that happen with our girls. I want to see them back together permanently with Bette’s mind and conscience clear. She has to know that she has an almost perfect life with the love of Tina and Angie and that she loves them too much to hurt them and herself by leaving them for someone else. Hope you can make it happen. It’s good to see that Bette is feeling a little better about being with Tina and loving her. She is beginning to see what her life could be with them and wondering why she ever left. It was never clear in the movie why they were apart. Would love to know why they were apart, if they were, in this story and what made Bette come back. I’d also like to know how she came to lose her memory of them and their life together. Thanks for posting. Great chapter.
Oooo what are you doing?? Huh?? Adding Candence..hope you’re not planning any accident with T and Angie? Well don’t!!:)) LOVE THIS STORY..just give it a happy ending and I’m happy;)Kinda see three ways to make it, but hope Bette will stay in this family world, knowing and understanding the values, think that’s it! Tnx for posting;)
I would cherish that gold star. I’m giving you five for this story. I am going to wait to see the movie. I wish you and your girlfriend the best of luck. Kudo’s to her for wanting to be an administrater, not an easy job. Just a little heads up to both you and your girlfriend– All I have to say is that the majority of the the kids aren’t the ones who frustrate me to the point of using that language. The kids are wonderful, the parents are the ones who cause most of frustration.
I love how they are getting to know each other although Tina already thinks she knows this Bette. I would love to see either Bette go back to her time but go back to Tina or skip forward to this time and stay.
Wow! I thought that Bette was happy with the supposed life that was living. At least Tina had shown great love for his family. More for the way Bette was not very happy, and apparently was with other intentions, in flirting with Candace in the workplace. / / / Bette was if asking several times because left Tina years ago, maybe now she has the answer. “Bette could not be faithful for long”. /// I hope that somehow Bette has learned the lesson of their two lives and can be happy and faithful to Tina from now on. / / / Tina should not be in the dark of the whole situation, she should know what was going on with Bette and Candace. Maybe even Bette would tell, and show that this current Bette is totally different and really passionate about. I am saddened by Tina all these years thinking it was a harmonious marriage. /// I love this story, excellent writing.
this was so sweet. I hope Carmen does make trouble. Make that bitch slip on some black ice or something. lol. that’s mean. anyway….pps
Your story really make me smile. I love how Bette is so in her head…but comes out enough to try to figure out what is really go around her. I love how Tina just wants to be there for Bette…she knows something is up….but she is leading her gently. I love Angelica…she is just adorable. You’re doing a wonderful job and can hardly wait for your posts…please post again soon!
Ohhh and this story needs to end happily with Bette taking her menial job and the 2 girls she loves most in the world OVER her High powered business life. Or…she changes jobs…but keep her girls. They need to be TOGETHER! OK…I’m done. Thank you!
A happy tibette ending plus Angelica please including lots of tibette loving.I like to see Bette happily married to Tina in her previous life. There is no reason for both of them not to have successful careers and a happy marriage and family.Love to see Tina kick some Candyass!
Wow, I just caught up with this fic and I think it is absolutely wonderful. I don’t recall seeing the movie it’s based on but will try to look it up. I’mm glad Bette is taking it slow but I hope she makes sure Tina feels loved. So glad she didn’t go for Candy’s crap but I have a feeling she may show up at the party. Good luck on your test and post as soon as you can. :)
Eeew! Candance is in this story too.I hope she doesn’t mess up Tibette again.Your story propelled me to watch the movie ‘The Family Man’.With the sweet relationship Bette has with Tina and Angelica, I really don’t mind having Bette struck in Canada though she’s working in a hardware shop. Ha. Look forward to more of your tales irregardless of how you intend to spin them.Thanks.
i love this!!! and all yours stories but please post more soon
I am really enjoying your spin on this movie. I didn’t really like the ending in the movie so you can improve on this with Bette, Tina and Angie together and happy! PPS
”Bette smiled at the look on Tina’s face. It was the same blush she saw all those years back” – so cute – love this story :)
Oh yeah…take charge Tina is always hot! I love the connection you’re building up in Bette’s heart…not simply a lust for Tina but loving the whole person. That is beautifully written! I’ll PM you on my thoughts for the ending…saw the movie…blah on the way it ended. And the wig that Tea Leoni wore at the end…how fugly was that!!!?
I want it to end with a biissexi bang! But a simple renewing of vows would be romantic. Oh and a Candace a$$whooping wouldn’t hurt. I love this spin. You’re doing a great job and here’s another good wish for your last test but I’m hoping it’ll extend to when you graduate. Good luck kiddo. Thanks for the amazing update :)
Just absolutely excellent and I did get your response to my comments. THank you for this wonderful story.
That was great and love how Bette want Tina make her trouble mind go away. Hope you will make cancade go away soon so Bette and Tina can be happy and be a happy family again. Please post more, thanks!
Thanks for posting another great chapter! I didn’t have the movie ending, but I do think it lacks something. I’m going to have to watch it again though before giving an opinion. :)
Wow, I wasn’t expecting this Bette to be straying away from Tina with Candace. That is so sad. I guess we start to take people for granted when we’re with them every day. If Tina’s Bette is contemplating cheating on her I would like to see this Bette stay with Tina and Angie. The other Bette should be banished to the other life without Tina.
Woah Candace is here too?!!!…. Hope that Bette won’t be tepmted. [not again?…not on this story?] It’s such a shame that Bette would think, or consider of CHEATING? … [Had enough of Bette as a cheater.] And regards to your question?..which ending we want?…I didn’t really watch the entire movie…not a fan of Nicolas cage. But as i remember some of my friend says?…A crap of an ending!..but for me..I’ll just settle with them ..TOGETHER..HAPPY!
Love you story and of course we need a happy end.Thank you.
Just amazing. I am totally adicted to the story and I absolutely LOVE the way you capture Bette’s reverence for Tina and her confusion and intolerance for her own “presumed” behavior. Honestly…romantic and lovely. PPS!!