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Subtleties * Chapter 12
Previously…
"Good?" Tina asked hopefully. The tone of her voice coupled with her goofy grin melted Bette’s heart.
"That…was amazing," Bette tucked the blonde’s tousled hair behind her ears.
"You’re amazing. Your body, the way it reacted to me, what I was doing…"
"It’s powerful, isn’t it?"
Tina nodded, fighting the tears that threatened to fall.
"I think," Bette started, before forcing Tina onto her back, "that it’s time for this gallery owner to have some power of her own."
CHAPTER 12
Tina looked up at the brunette hovering above her. In Bette’s eyes she saw a pure unadulterated lust that was staggering; but there was also reverence. The blonde reached up and caressed Bette’s face,
"What is it?"
Tina smiled guiltily, "I want you…"
"What do you want me to do? Hmmm?" Bette nuzzled Tina’s nose with her own, then ever so slowly, dipped her head lower to nip at the blonde’s ear, drawing a hot, wet trail the length of her jaw toward her waiting mouth.
"Do you want me to kiss you like this?" Bette kissed her with a ferocity she barely knew she possessed. "What if I touch you here, do you like that?" Bette squeezed the blonde’s breast, tugging at a taut nipple. "How about I put my mouth here, and here, and here…" Bette moaned as she sucked and licked every inch of Tina’s body.
Tina trembled beneath her, sighing and groaning, tugging at the brunette’s hair and holding Bette’s head close to her aching body.
Bette could feel herself losing control. Her body was hungry for more and Tina laying open for her was far too intoxicating an invitation. Crawling back up the blonde’s body she begged for permission,
"I want to taste you."
Tina’s eyes closed at the statement, her back arching, her hips involuntarily lifting themselves up into the goddess above her, "Please."
The blonde barely acquiesced before she felt Bette’s hot breath on her inner thigh. Then there was the brunette’s tongue, and her fingers; Tina yelped and jerked.
So many times when she had sex, her bodily reactions were the result of cognizant thought. If I moan louder, he’ll know I like that. If I move my hips this way, maybe he’ll get the hint he needs to move a little to the left. But here and now. With Bette. This was different. Bette was hitting every pleasure point, and Tina’s body reacted in a way that required no thought; it was merely reacting to the torturous pleasure Bette was creating. Tina’s groans and urgings, the exaltations and cursing were more frequent and louder than any sane person would have ever allowed.
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(65 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Fantastic update. Love this story. Looking forward to more!!
what a great scene. I love this confident Tina. She’s more than able to stand up to Bette.
Hellllllloo!! That was awesome, as always Scaf! Love it!!
Hmmpff! That was great but small one. Anyway, have a happy New Year Scaf. Thank you for the post. Kisses
Very nice indeed, love the way the story is going not to much drama please.
Wow, what a night.
Nothing subtle about this chapter and their evening. So happy they are getting to know one another and liking what they find. Thanks for posting.
Ooh, I really loved this chapter, it was hot and it was fun, just the way I like it.
Awesome update – thanks for every update/story in 2010. Have a great New Year.
Yes can i come to your bed to Tina lol. that was hot and awesome and cute, love it. Please post more, thanks. Thank you my friend and Happy New Year to you too !
wow hott and i agree with ut i wouldn’t mind going 2 Tina’s bed lol
Thank you for the update,amazing as always.Happy new year.
Loved it, hope to read more soon.
Thank you scaf for the sexy post. What I would give to be in that scene with Tina ;)
Your love scenes are very very…interesting… And hot. And tender. A Happy New Year to you!
Excellent update. So love this story and great writing can actually picture the scene in my head! Thank you Scaf and Happy New Year to you as well. May 2011 bring you all that 2010 didnt!
Happy New Year! That was a great chapter. I love this Tina!
GREAT chapter!! I love this Tina too, you have got to post more often!!! Thanks
Fuck that was HOT!!! Happy New Year!!! Thank you Scaf!!! PPVS
Thank you for another great chapter. I love the interaction between these two. I was actually thinking of the verbal kind, though their non-verbal communication is pretty amazing too!! Happy New Year!