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Diary Of A Student – CHAPTER ONE
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Dairy Of A Student
Chapter one
Dear Dairy,
Well, this is the first time I have a dairy, I am in high school in Belgium together with my friends and family we imigrated from America to Belgium, so I think I gonna begin with introducing all the people thad will be in here.
FAMILY
Father: Melvin Porter, 45 years old, homophobe, (big) cheater, Kit says he’s my hero.
Sister: Kathy ‘Kit’ Porter, 29 years old, Ex-drunk, Half-Sister actually, has a bar (the planet) just outside school.
Brother: Carey Porter, 17 years old, my twin brother, I was born first [ :D ], my best friend, thinks the fact I’m gay is super cool, we talk together about girls (thats kind of weird).
FRIENDS
Alice Pieszecki: 17, one of my best friends, ex-girlfriend, good kisser, funny, one of the gang, hates school
Dana Fairbanks: 18, Shy, likes tennis, good in sports, secretly in love with Alice, had cancer last year.
Shane McCutcheon: 16, lady-killer, not my type [ :D ], My best friend in the world, cool, relaxed.
Helena Peabody: 19, rich, arrogant, funny, party-animal, a good friend.
_01 september 2011…______________________________________________________________
At the Planet, after the first schoolday, 06.20PM
Alice: Porter, you need to date this year.
Bette: I don’t know. With school and all…
Alice: Shut up Bette. You are one of the smart girls. Youy don’t need to worry about your grades. You get 70% without studying. Really there are a lot of dykes around school.
Bette; Alice i don’t want a little flirt. I’m not into such a ting. I want somthing thad last longer. I know I’m just in high school and need to have fun and stuff. But it’s just not me.
A: Bette, There are a few girls who want the same as you. Just not the main ‘public’. But please, just look. You need to have sex soon.
B: ALICE! Sex is something I wanna do with someone special not with just a girl. And besides I have all the time for thad. The problem to find a girl around here is thad i’ just to damn ugly.
A: Thad’s so not true! You are drop dead gorgeous the only thing is … You don’t know it jet. You know what? I gonna do a make-over with you. Giving you a super look and make you feel good about yourself. What do you think.
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Keep writing what’s in your head and what’s in your heart. We understand them. ..Loved your first chap. Hope you can post again …soon!
Nog twee details: je bedoelt waarschijnlijk dagboek en dat is “diary”. “Dairy” betekent zuivel. En “thad” moet “that” worden. Je kan misschien een betareader nemen als je nog onzeker bent over je taal :)
Je bent 13, ik zou er niet mee inzitten. Let wel nog op de tijd, als je am en pm gebruikt, dan gebruik je de 12-uurstijdrekening. 17.30pm is eigenlijk 5.30pm. De Amerikanen zullen niet weten hoe laat het is :p
wll there are a lot of writing errors. I’m sorry for thad. I hope you understand what I mean. Please give me some advise.
Interesting Start.PPS.
This is interesting and funny, like it, can’t wait to see Bette and tina meet again. Please post more, thanks!
well I’m happy thad there are a few reactions. Hope you keep reading my story.