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Awful
Tina was standing in her bedroom. “Pff, another art gallery. I so don’t want to go but if I don’t…’’ Suddenly Eric walked in the room. Dressed in a suit. Eric was a handsome man. He had blonde-brown hair and he had brown eyes. He was a little taller than Tina and everybody found him very sweet.
Eric: Are you ready, doll?
Tina turned around.
Tina: Yes.
Eric: Yes who?
Tina swallowed.
Tina: Yes, sweetheart.
Eric smiled.
Eric: That’s the spirit. Okay, let’s go. I called the nanny for Nathan… and Patricia.
It was always his son that came first. Eric had told Tina he wanted a son. When Tina finally got pregnant Eric was very happy. When he learned it would be a girl he was mad and dissapointed, like he never even tought about the posibillity that he could get a daughter. He even suggested abortion but Tina said she didn’t want to. Never. It was one of the first times she had ever dared to say ‘no’ to Eric. When Patricia was born Eric didn’t even want to hold her. He said Patricia was HER daughter and that he didn’t want anything to do with the girl. Tina was hurt but she didn’t even think about leaving Eric, she didn’t dare. Eric had never hurt her but he was so dominant it was scary and he expressed that verbally (never with violence) and sexually, then he was super dominant. After only 6 weeks Eric wanted to try to have another child. Now he wanted a son. Tina was hesitant at first but Eric somehow managed to get what he wanted and 8 weeks after that Patricia was born, Tina was pregnant with another child. The doctor said it wasn’t really healthy to be pregnant so soon but Eric didn’t care. He just wanted his precious son. When he found out it was indeed a son he was super happy. He wanted to call the boy Nathaniel, Nathan for short. Nathaniel means: God has given, gift of God. Tina had rolled her eyes when she had found out but only when Eric was out of sight. She had then searched for the meaning of Patricia. Nobel woman. Well, that was nice… She began to have more problems with Eric’s attitude towards Patricia. The girl was 4 and began to pick up that her Dad didn’t like her very much. He would do anything for the little Nathaniel (3) but when Patricia asked something it was always too much.
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(34 votes, average: 4.18 out of 5)
Wow! I have to say that it’s sad what happened to Tina and I want to see Eric in jail forever! He said that he loved her and he raped her… Monster! Love the story!
Wow what a story. It’s official, I’m addicted. I hope Eric gets what he deserves! I also hope Nathaniel gets to do ballet too.
I hope the WEHO dykes kick his ass and abuse him so he can know what it feels like. Put him in jail and throw away the key.
Brilliant story, well written. PLease tell me that Tina gets her son! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Its such a powerful plot line.
Wow, that was intense! I’m impressed! I feel so bad for Tina and especially for Patricia…
DAMMMMM.. that bastard… ok now lets nail his balls to the wall… will read on when i get some more time… (I’m at work…lol…)
Great story.Let Eric suffer.PPS.
What happened to tina and patty was a hard read. I would love to see Eric in every aspect of pain for the rest of his life and beyond that. Great job on the story. You got me.
Great story! Can’t wait to see how it’ll continue, sad that Patricia was molested, there’s nothing worst than that. Please post soon, again very interesting story!
What a tragic begining to a beautifully written story. Keep up the good work.