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Dr.Porter, fix my heart (chapter 6)
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"you forgot something?" the blonde asked … Surprised to see the beautiful brunette again …
"no" the brunette answered quietly … Entering the room …
"my date stood me up" she continued … Faking a laugh …
Suspicious … The blonde asked "really?!"
"yeah" the brunette answered … Playing with her hair … "something came up at work and she has to stay late" she continued … Searching the room for nothing … trying not to make any eye contact …
"well … It’s her lost" commented the blonde … Smiling …
The brunette returned the smile ….
"Have a seat!" the blonde suggested … Pointing at a chair with both hands …
"no I should probably leave …. It’s late" the brunette replied … Looking at her watch ….
"no … Stay … Please …. I mean …. if you want to" the blonde insisted ….
"I guess I can stay for a while" replied the brunette … After pausing a while … Pretending to consider the offer …
Followed by the blonde’s admiring eyes … The brunette crossed the room …. Walking in high heels … The tight black dress showing her perfect figure … Her flawless skin … And Her slender arms and legs ….
She settled in the chair closest to the head of the bed … Closest to the blonde … Crossing her legs and resting her hands on the chair’s arms …
"you’re really beautiful" the blonde confessed softly …
"thank you" blushed the brunette ….
Breaking the awkward silence … the brunette asked "do you have any trouble sleeping?"
"no … I’m not sleepy … It’s barely 7" the blonde replied …. Confused by the question …
"no I meant when you sleep do you wake up needing fresh air or anything like that" the brunette asked again … Falling back into her Dr.Bette Porter character …
"nooo" the blonde objected in frustration …. "Don’t be Dr.Porter … Forget that I’m sick … Forget that you’re my doctor"
"that would put me in so much trouble!" laughed Bette … Imaging the scenario that could happen ….
"why?!" asked the clueless blonde …. Raising her eyebrows …
The brunette looked away … Trying to overcome the urge to tell why and what she would’ve done if only she wasn’t her doctor …
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Just caught up with this story. I’m loving it. Tina really doesn’t need this extra stress of dealing with Bette while she’s preparing herself for surgery. I hope Bette realizes that and comes in to talk to her.
I hope Helena doesn’t collect on her favour. Not like her to be nice to Tina for nothing.
“you don’t believe in love … you’re a heart surgeon for god’s sake!” – good one! :)
Hahahaha, I will never have enough chapter lol. But I am taking these with joy.It’s sad that Bette left after the kiss but it is still funny this story is. Bette stop running away assume lol.Tina is the love of your life dont mess about it.
Simply beautiful.
Wow, must have more.
How can you leave after this amazing kiss…? I’m such a hopeless romantiv, aren’t I…? Well, you are still a cruel person for letting Bette go away… And I can’t wait for Bette to kick some (younger) Peabody’s ass…
Just caught up. Thank you.
Don`t be scared Bette,go for Tina.Love your story,thank you.
Great update. Lizmar, we are all hopless romantics or we wouldn’t be on this site hanging on every word of two very special fictional characters. Bette should go and talk to her again and try to explain herself for leaving so abruptly. Her actions could lead Tina to believe that Bette is not interested in her after sharing such an intimate few moments and the kisses. She clearly likes Bette and Bette likes her as well but is afraid to go any further. Bette owes her a huge apology. Thanks for posting.
LOL i love your comment! “it’s a mistake to believe people ever grow up!” I will put that on my mind especially when facing some supposed to be adult person :-p anyway back to the story… So how come Helena knows? Hmm… And Bette…! Oh Bette! … How long is she going to avoid Tina?? If she wants to acts as if she’s still in kindergarten, then just face Tina as if nothing happened :-D (that’s normally what kids do right? Fighting for one moment then back to be best buddy in no time :p) LOL pardon me, I just can’t help myself want to see our favourite girls back on track :-) thanks for posting! PPS?! :-)
:( sad again… Bette is a coward! But I still love her… PPS!
Don’t be such a pussy Porter!!! You’re A lesbian &psycho-piratee-killer-surgeon with an army of heartless-zombies Doctor!! Thxxxxx and PPS
What you wrote about a novel’s story being about a man and a woman is how I felt about “The Notebook.” All I thought about “The Notebook” is I wish someone loved me that much.
This is sad and hope they will talk to each other and work thing out. Please post more, thanks!
Well, since I’m used to it by now and your story is so great I guess you can live with it…^^ But if you still do wanna kick that habit out I guess you can only take it slow. Baby steps. First, you are going to answer every comment I post WITHOUT triple dots. I’ll give you an example it’s not that hard: “Thank you so much JBtlw90 for your suppport and helpful comments. I’m on my way to recovery because of your wise advices.” :D lol PPS! ;)
Please please post soon. I’m hooked on this storyline!!!