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    The letter on the subway

    Story written on April 3, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 12

    Chapter 12
    Tina let the door close behind her and ran to the elevator at the end of the long corridor. She prayed for a quick exit.
    She repetitively pressed on the call button in a hope that the elevator would arrive quicker. The instantaneous high pitched chime followed by the swishing noise of the lift’s automatic doors alerted her that her escape out of the building was near.
    She entered the elevator, selected the ground floor level on the side panel and settled herself at the back of the small space. She looked up and through her tears caught a glimpse of the brunette down the corridor as the lift’s door closed over.
    **********
    Bette had been standing in her apartment in total disbelief. What did just happen? The evening had gone so well and the connection that she had felt for Tina was still as present as ever. 
    She shook herself out of this twilight zone she had fallen into and made a dash for the door. Surely she would able to stop the blonde from leaving.
    Her hopes were crushed as, as soon as she made it out of her apartment she was only able to see Tina’s form disappearing behind the elevator’s doors.
    **********
    The blonde finally arrived back down into the lobby, she ran past the concierge and into the bustling street. She stopped for a second taking her bearings and spotted one of the city’s yellow cab, its middle light sign of availability lit. She stuck her arm above her head and hailed it down shouting a very sharp and loud,  "taxi!".
    Ironically she thought that tonight was her lucky night,  as with complete disregard for the flowing traffic, the first taxi she hailed, drew to a stop in a sound of screeching breaks, to allow the blonde to step aboard.
    She was thankful for a clean passenger area as given the late hour she could have found anything and everything strewn in the back of the cab. She took a seat on the cold plastic covering the back and gave her destination to the driver.
    She sat back and tried to relax but the evening’s events kept replaying in her mind, fuelling further the constant flow of tears which seemed to escape from her eyes at their own free will.
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    2. I suppose heartbreaking was a pretty good way to describe it^^ Donc tu parles français?? That’s awesome, I’m feeling less lonely already, lol ;) You really are one lucky woman (talking about the ANote) SPB! (réflexion faite je pense que s’il-te-plait poste bientôt ca marche moins bien que PPS, tant pis)

    7. Thanks for explaining why Tina reacted the way she did. Your story is so romantic. Must be one heck of a love letter. I’m happy to hear you’ve found the love of your life.

    10. I really like the way you put things: “Even out the playing field”… Perfect! Clever chapter as it was probably necessary to describe both women’s states of mind before going any further. Hate de “lire” le prochain chapitre… Thanks for sharing your personal story, seems like fate had decided to play a happy little trick on you that night! Life… Anyway, good for you! And thanks a lot for the update. Kw

    11. Thanks for giving us another chapter of this wonderfully romantic and sweet story. Tina needs to get up and go back to work and apologize for running away. She started this mess by putting the letter out there to begin with, poor Bette just found it. Now they need to talk about the situation, nothing has really changed except that Tina now knows Bette has the letter. If she didn’t want to vulnerable she should not have left it in the subway because you don’t know what kind of wacko might have been watching her leave it and follow her. she got very damned lucky and one of the sweetest people on the planet find it and cherish it just as she cherishes Tina. They really need to talk badly. Great update. Thanks for posting. Texas. Forget to leave this with last chapter.

    12. Hmmmm, so Tina’s made a mistake by running and Bette doesn’t want to let her go! Please girls don’t let the other one go so easily! As for your story Kins that’s so sweet I want more details. How did you meet in one night after the letter was wrote very curious? As for Bette how is she gonna even the playin field??? A letter??? Ppvs

    13. I love that you wrote your own letter, hidden or not, and that you found your special someone the same night. Maybe not dramatic, but equally romantic. Thanks for sharing that tidbit as it makes the story even sweeter. As for the girls here, I’m hoping Bette reveals her own insecurities, hopes, and dreams to Tina… in a beautifully-crafted love note, perhaps…

    14. Wow amazing..You found your “Someone’s special” like in your story.. [but less dramatic] awesome!!!.. Now if Tina is like you?..Then Bette will have no problem at all?..Just saying?.. :>…pps [welcome by the way, the least we can do for you.]

    15. Your story is an accurate psychograph! I suspected the plan “even out the playing field” coming! So well balanced and so romantic! Thanks for not keeping us waiting too long.

    18. Wah.. Thanks for posting! Finally! Something new.. :-) … While reading, I still expecting Bette to run and trying to stop Tina, pity it didn’t happen :-p so how is Bette going to fix this? Writing down all her feeling, hopes, insecurities, and everything which made her vulnerable on the letter and let Tina read it? (or put it under the pillow as yours? ;-p ) BTW you might starting a new trend of “writing a letter to your soulmates” now ;-)Thanks Kins! PPS! thanks! :-)

    19. You know now you are going to have a lot of us writing letters and putting them under our pillows, don’t you? Writing mine tonight. :) Now I must go read this chapter.

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