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Dr.Porter, fix my heart (chapter 7)
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The Next Morning …
The brunette was standing outside the hospital …. resting her back on its wall ….
"Morning”
"Morning” replied the brunette ….
"Here” said the skinny white woman … handing her a cup of coffee …
"Thank you … I really need it” said the brunette … exhaling …
"so … decided what to do yet?” asked Shane … zipping her coffee …
"Keep avoiding her like a shy 12-year old with a crush” announced the brunette … shrugging her shoulders ….
"you’re her doctor …. you’ll have to deal with her at some point”
"no I don’t” the brunette replied in a childish tone ….
"that’s ….”
"shhhhh” the brunette interrupted … “Alice is coming …. The last thing I need now is her big mouth”
"Hellooo yooou” Alice greeted the brunette .. ignoring Shane … “My .. My… what do I hear … I guess her malfunctioning heart didn’t stop you”
"what are you talking about!” asked the brunette …. desperate to control her temper ….
"don’t act all innocent on me …… that blonde … you had you’re eye on her the minute she walked into the hospital” Alice continued … ignoring Shane’s attempts to stop her … “what! …. I’m just trying to congratulate her” said Alice … facing Shane … trying to make her stop signaling … “I knew you were good … but didn’t know you were that good! …. you nailed her in her first night here …. she is not even gay … she doesn’t look gay! … come on teach me how …. teach me how” Alice continued … poking Bette’s waist with her fingers ….
"FUCK YOU!” stated the brunette … holding Alice’s hand to stop her … she threw it away ….
"wait … Bette … wait” called Shane … following the angry brunette …
The brunette didn’t stop but she slowed down … allowing Shane to catch up …
"don’t let her get into you … she’s just … well .. Alice!” said Shane softly …
"It’s not Alice … It’s this fucking hospital … first it’s a date and now they say I …”
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i love this story! go get your girl bette and talk some sense into her. this is such a great story. love your medical jargon…soooo easy to follow. so great bette has found love. being in the medical field can be lonely in too many ways. bette has a chance at a life, love and happiness. can’t wait to read what happens next. did i mention i L O V E this story? thanks for taking the time to share with us.
PPS! I will die if they don’t kiss again soon…
To Author notes: Their relationship season six :)
Good chapter. :)
Bette deserved the pain.Great story.Thank you.
OOOO!!!know what you’re doing and I like it! Hope you’ll give us some nc-17;) This story’s great, just love it! please post soon!!
Get your woman Bette! Love the plot,what a fantastic story.
Lol, I’m cute? You’re cute! But I disagree, Bette didn’t deserve that she was just trying to do the right thing. I understand why Tina’s pissed off though. I just hope they can figure it outs… Thank you for posting :)
Hey thanks for another chapter!! :-) iamhappy to read this update though the story is sad, but I can see why Tina do that. Go Bette! Do something or Tina might be gone for good! :-(
Hahahaha!!!! yes this is short however, cannot stop myself. Bette and Tina need to talk and fast. I hope what Bette took from Tina’s file was her address. Go for it girl get yours back. Great post as usual. Thank you for sharing.
Dang Bette! Go get your girl!
Surgery is very serious, it is no joke. The patient must trust your doctor. I would not entrust my heart to Bette, not after what happened. Professionalism to part, more is need Bette to correct some private questions with Tina, so that Tina could trust her to do the surgery. MORRREEEEEE…
so bette wrote down her address.. thats what i think… lets hope bette can convince her to get the surgury… great chapter… pps
oh, a mystery note? pps!
Bette is so conflicted but hopefully she got Tina’s phone number and will call her.
I am basically a silent reader….and a paitent one at that. But….this story has motivated me to be both less silent AND less paitent…I’m hooked. PLEASE post as soon as possible….please!
Ha..Reading the comments are sometimes as entertaining as reading the stories. timid,your comments are cute, and I share your same sentiments. Thanks to imconfused for this interesting story, and please post real soon.
Thats good and now Bette go get your woman, let Bette and Tina talk. Please post more, thanks!
I feel so bad for Tina right now. She has a really tough decision to make and it seems like she doesn’t have any family or friends to support her. Bette really messed up big time with this entire situation. I hope she can make this right so that Tina. I think she needs to be honest with Tina about her feelings and help her make the right decision about her surgery.