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Don’t Give Up #05
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That word even being uttered in my presence felt like someone may as well of slaughtered my inside, with a blender. That’s actually how my insides felt, my body ached and I was too scared to move.
"You want a what Tina?". I paused as I could feel my body wanting to scream and break something within my grasp, I knew that wouldn’t help the situation so I changed tactic.
"I hate that I let you down, and believe me I feel so ashamed about it. But I guess karma does comes back around because now I’m the one hurting. And I hate that I made you think that the trust we had was broken, I should never have done what I did but nobody’s perfect least of all me. Is this just your way of punishing me? Because, believe me I’m already dying inside Tina".
She sat there quietly and her face looked indecisive as she processed what I said. Tears were running down both of our faces freely, as much as I was hurting and angry. I knew this was all my fault.
This was the first time in about a year we had sat down and said exactly what was on our minds. As much as it pained me. We were talking.
"I’m not trying to punish you Bette, and yeah I guess you’re right about karma. You can’t go through life thinking there will be no consequences for your actions. For every action there is a reaction Bette you of all people should know that. This is not to get back at you in anyway this is about me. Not us. There is no more us remember. I don’t want to bring this child into the world with someone I can barely stand to be in the same room with. You were my family, you were the most single important person to me and now I’m not with you this little one is".
She looked towards her small bump something; I had been oblivious to notice I just assumed she put on a few extra pounds. You know what they say eat your pain.
"As hard as it maybe for you to wrap your head around I just think maybe we were both too cynical about raising a child together and hoping it would fix all our problems. I mean here I am pregnant Bette, and our worlds could not be any further apart".
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This is so sad. And so real.I guess the saying “Love is fair, It brakes everybody’s heart ” is true.
i’m really loving your story hope for another post soon.
Jesus,is really sad,but I love your story.PPS.
so sad… but bette need to respect tina’s wishes… and hopefully together they will come to some agreement… great story… pps
Really…..do keep my health at the forefront of your mind :0) they need to sort this out soon and experience the joys of motherhood! Being pregnant is the best feeling!
Great update! Bette needs a say in this. She may have been stupid to ever cheat on Tina but this,is her child and Tina isn’t the only one to decide if this child lives or dies. That’s all I got to say.
Really love this story. There is one line that keeps coming back to me in this post. When Bette says-“Is this your way of punishing me”-I kept thinking is it really Tina punishing her or Bette punishing herself. I read it three times before I decided they’re both punishing each other. Great story.
This is a great story full of love, pain and sorrow with the potential for great forgiveness and love strengthened. Tina’s actions when she said goodbye were not of those one would do when her mind is already made up and she still loves Bette. Bette acted wisely and very prudently especially telling Helena the job could wait and telling Tina that she is her priority. Great update. Thanks for posting.
Just caught up with all your updates on this story. So really sad to read but can’t resist. Thank you.