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The letter on the subway
Story written on April 13, 2011 by kins40.
Epilogue
The only sounds coming from their room were Tina’s increasing breathless and urgent gasps which seemed to reverberate across the space.
Her lover hovered over her tenderly, careful not to bear her whole weight on her. Her right hand was low, meandering between the teasing surface of their skins.
The sheet covering their caressing bodies undulated in a slow sensual way only allowing a guess at the intimate and secretive going-ons within its shelter.
Bette’s lips were soft on her skin and Tina could feel her smile as she kissed her, nipping and biting gently up the column of her throat. The brunette was enjoying the delicate fragrance of her skin, warm and delicious, her breath was slow and deep like the rhythm of her hips as she gracefully moved against Tina.
She spoke in a thick and heavy voice.
"Oh, God T, I’ll never get enough of you!"
Bette’s voice was soft against her ear and Tina instantly arched up further at the sound of the loving words giving in entirely to the feeling of Bette’s fingers sliding inside her in a skilful rhythm. She let herself melt into her as her hand roamed over the divine woman covering her, smoothing the length of her body, up her thigh, her waist and curving around her breast.
Tina was lost in the soft feel of their entwined bodies, her only landmarks the bliss of Bette’s silky lips, her tongue as she kissed her with abandon. She let her delicate fingers massage the muscles in the back of her lover above her as she felt the first waves of pleasure rippling slowly over her.
"Ah!" Tina moaned, "Yes… Baby …. Yes, please don’t stop" her voice raised lightly in impending ecstasy.
The delicate caress of her fingers altered as her fingernails now dug into Bette’s skin, her legs wrapped around her hips. She pushed further again into her lover and her arms looped around Bette’s neck.
Bette took in the vision below her, of the woman she loved, in the first grip of rapture, her eyes soft and rich with desire fixed on hers, silently pleading not to relent. This is when Bette felt her soar, her head thrown back fully she cried out carried on her wave of pleasure, urged on by their inseparable union and their unquenchable need for each other.
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So lovely. Loved how you brought it full circle. Thanks for the story. :)
Loved it!
Ginourmous story! Beautiful and poetic, as always. Thank you so much :)
Thank you for another wonderful story! I look forward to your next special project!
Awwwwww, how sweet was that? Loved the epilogue and now they’re having a wee one. Can’t believe you’re going to leave us like this. I do believe this calls for a SEQUEL!!!!!!!. Thanks for sharing such a loving story.
This is so beautiful. I love, love, love this! I hope you come back and give us another story to swoon over. Thanks for posting the story.
Yeah, a baby! Loved that they are going to add to their family. Thank you for this story. I really enjoyed it. Can’t wait for your next one!
Wonderfully sweet epilogue, Kins. But then again, I didn’t doubt for a second that you would give us a formidable ending! Ahlala, what can I say? You are one of the best writers on this site, and you have won me over from the beginning (talking about the very beginning of your writing with “At first sight”). I’m trying to decide which one of your stories I prefer, but quite frankly I love them both equally as they are very different. Which says a lot about the extent of your talent. Anyway, thanks a lot for giving us yet another wonderful story, kuddos to you! Kw.
All your stories are so wonderful and magical…thank you for writing this terrific ending. I hope you come back with another one…soon!
Loved it! I saw Bette with a big smile and happy, looking to Tina’s belly! This story was fantastic.
Another beautifully written story. Now you have to start the next story with the new Tibette addition.
Splendid
Wonderful story. Thanks
Soo sweet and lovely.
Bravo!! Would love a Sequel!! Thanks for this wonderful story kins :D
Lovely, just lovely! Now everything is rounded out nicely. Have a good rest and don’t forget to come back!
Wow K!! That was absolutely fantastic!! This is definitely one of the most romantic stories that i have ever read…as a hopeless romantic, im in looove with the idea of someone sending a person with 100 love letters*sigh* that’s really a supa supa grand gesture! Lol:-D..Thank you for sharing this B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L story,,cant wait for the next one:-)
You made a believer out of me… Bette let out a deep sigh of contentment. There in her arms lay the most amazing woman who, in her eyes, had ever existed. They had already managed to do all of those things and more, that Tina had written in her letter. They had cried, they had laughed, they had kissed, they had sang badly but they had tried, they had held hands when they walked in the park, they had talked endlessly about their lives, they had shared countless bottles of wine, they knew each other’s secrets, they knew each other’s past but more importantly they had decided on a future together…CUZ THERE IS ..HOPE FOR EVERYONE..
lovely; i’m in a state of bliss at this ending. Such a beautiful ending to such a wonderul story from beginning to end. thank you so much for posting and believe me you will be back sooner than you think. caramel
O-M-G woman… how in the frickin’ frack do you do it? From the epilogue’s beautiful and poetic opening, to highlighting their shared adventures to revealing their future together with a little Kennard-Porter on the way. (sigh) Thank you again Kins for sharing your talents. This story was a delight to read :)
Beautiful.
Late in coming to this wonderfully told story of the search for true love.It was recommened to me and i am so pleased to have read it.K you have a beautiful way with words.So descriptive.They are always beautiful and loving of the way this love story is told and the finding of love thru fate.Which i definately believe in having experienced fate myself in this way.Of finding love and of remembering what this kind of love can bring to your life.Your letter tells a story that almost mirrors mine but in a slightly different way.Thankyou so much for this and keep on writing your wonderful stories.C x
This is a beautiful story! Thank you for sharing it. I look forward to your next.
Wonderful story I enjoyed every minute of it. Well all but the crowded street scene. I’m not one for crowds :) Thanks!!!
Wonderful.Thank you.Please continue writing.
I loved every moment of this story. I’m sorry to see it end. In the meantime, I’ll practise my Irish jig in anticipation of you posting your next story.
Thank you Kins!! :-) I love your stories! And this epilogue … aah… So sweet!! And.. How can you do this to me?? This kind of epilogue is not a valid epilogue as it makes me yearning to read more! … :-) sigh… Looks like I need to re read from the beginning… again! :-D Hahaha… Enjoy the time as always!! And thanks again for sharing your talent and stories! It’s like a fresh morning dew in the hot tropic day! :-) thank you!!
A perfect epilogue for a perfect story! Thank you for writing it. Hope to read again from you soon. Take care.
Just beautiful, tender, loving. All good things brilliantly written.
Amazing from start to finish..x
So wonderful. Thank you for this very heartwarming and romantiv love story. Have loved each word. Thank you thank you.
Fantastic ending, kins. So heartwarming and sweet… makes me feel like doing my happy dance! I love the line, “They had never gone to bed at different times…”. A simple statement, but I feel it perfectly describes their devotion to one another. Look forward to seeing your name reappear on the Main Page with a scrumptious tale of love! Take care.
Thank You for this story, it was just as beautiful as the last one. I loved that you advanced the story with them together three years later and that Tina is pregant. So So lovelly.
I just had to read this again. Back-to-back comments almost a year apart. Still so good.
My life is complete! Omg I can’t believe the ending that was the most amazing ending to such a short story, I hope you write a sequel. As im continue to read all your stories I know i will see another brilliance of your creativity. Im happy it worked out in the land of Tiibette.
Essere ancora il mio cuore…
Very sweet and Loving story and I very much enjoyed i. Thank you.
Lol just found and read this great story again thank you.looking for new posts.. lol