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Dr.Porter, fix my heart (chapter 11)
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A knock on the door ….
"hey!" cheered the blonde … A huge smile filled her face as she saw her guest …
"hey you" the brunette replied …. Stepping into the room … Letting the door close behind her … A similar smile on her face ….
"I heard somebody was waiting for me" the blonde stated … Tightening her eyes …
Caught … The brunette smiled a misschievous smile and looked away … "I had a feeling you would show up" she finally said …
"oh! … So I made the right choice?" the blonde asked … Playfully yet serious in her waiting for an answer …
The brunette shrugged her shoulders ….
"ah come on … I already signed the papers … Just tell me"
"I already did … We highly recommend the surgery!"
"No … No … No … I don’t want the diplomatic dr.porter’s answer … I want your answer!"
"well I AM dr.porter!" the brunette laughed …
"well then dr.porter why are you refusing to answer a question by your poor, sick, tired , confused patient?" the blonde pleaded … With sad poppy eyes and heartbreaking downward tilted lips …
"ooooh don’t be a drama queen" the brunette replied … Approaching the bed … leaning forward to tickle the blonde …
"NO … Stop … Bette stooooop" the blonde shouted … Laughing …
"shhhhhhhhhh ….. They’ll think I …." a serious demand to a clueless blonde who obeyed without trying to guess the continuation of that sentence …
"you what?"
"ripped off your heart with my hook" the brunette laughed … hiding the real answer …
The blonde laughed … And squrmed in her bed … When she finally settled … Their eyes locked in silence …
"you did the right thing …. That’s what I think" the brunette finally spoke almost whispering … knowing that it was not the right thing to say … but what is right anyway?
"thank you" the blonde whispered ….
Without breaking the comfortable silence .. The blonde moved aside and signaled for the brunette to sit on the bed …
The brunette obeyed …
She sat on the bed … her hand playing with the blonde bangs of hair that was covering a pair of green eyes …
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Soo sweet! Wonderful job.
Loved it! Sweet and soft! This chapter was great.
I love the story but Bette goes up to the edge of patient-doctor ethics and probably goes over it but it is fanfic.
Just caught up. Wonderful story. Thank you.
Aww too cute. PPS.
yes, iamconfused, you are right, Tina needs Bette support without the feeling concern. I just hope they will grow stronger together in any situation.Great chapter again.
I so love this story! Please please post soon….
Please don’t stop now. Everyday I faithfuly check for a new posting. Really, this story is too good to stop!PPS!!
Great update,soooo sweet.Thank you.PPS
Love this story. Please update soon
This was sweet but as her doctor she did cross that line again. But we don’t care about no stinkin’ lines around fanficland do we? Thanks for the chapter.
Cross the line Bette! Cross the line! We don’t care as long as you’re with Tina. Fantastic chapter!
A KISS!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE THE ABSOLUTE BEST!!!! I LOVED IT! PPS
That was so sweet and love it. Please post more, thanks!
Lovely and sweet. And we don’t care about doctor/patient observances as long as it is Bette and Tina. Tina needs the reassurance and Bette is the only one that can give it to her. Fantastic chapter. Thanks for posting.
bette is right.. first she needs her to be her doctor… then after its all done.. they have the rest of their lives for every thing else… great chapter… pps
So very beautiful. Amazing story.
Wow.. Thanks for this chapter! It’s so sweet and tender!! :-) Bette is definitely cross the line, I hope she’ll let Tina know it’s not her normal procedures to all of her patient! ;-) and Tina, don’t worry about the scar, just see that as the memento of the special someone whom finally see what’s inside her heart … ^^, again, thanks for this beautifully written chapter!! PPS, thanks!! :-)
This story is very sweet, and well written. Thanks for sharing it!
Awww, I hope Tina can see that right at this moment Bette needs to just be her Dr. so she can do the best job on her surgery. Later when Tina is healing and released from her care she can attend to her other feelings. This wa a very sweet chapter and I’m glad no one walked in on them and jumped to conclusions about what was going on. PPS :)
Bette was so sweet with T, I love the chemistry here…PPS
I’m getting nervous out here in readerville.Please do not bail on this story, please. You are a great writer and are crafting a beautiful, tender and unique story. Please post soon!