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Playing By Heart
Chapter 23
The Planet
“Tina, what are you doing?” Dana whispered as she reached for her friend’s hand to pull her back into the booth. Tina’s heart was pounding and her breathing was shallow.
“Huh?” she asked, turning to where Dana, Oscar, and Esai were staring at her.
“Shh!” The surrounding crowd commanded as Tina quickly sat back down once she remembered where she was.
“Heeeere in the dark,
Nothing else matters
Heeeere in the dark,
All I wanna do is think of you
And I,
I know that I’ll never say,
Goodbye.”
Kit’s voice mesmerized the crowd. The band was completely in sync at every note. The audience swayed back and forth to the music.
Marina was so impressed with the turnout of the night. With the exception of the empty seat next to Max on the VIP couch near the front of the stage, every chair held a body, and some more than one body.
Tina was watching Kit very closely. She could see a slight family resemblance lurking in the singer’s features when compared to the stunning good looks of the woman who had been occupying her thoughts for the last seven days.
Dana leaned over to whisper in Tina’s ear.
“What’s wrong?”
In order to avoid anymore shushing from the crowd, Tina pulled out her Blackberry and began IM’ing Dana.
A short while later, Dana felt her phone buzzing in her purse. She checked the message.
TKennard: OMG! I think Bette is Kit Porter’s sister!!!
Dana’s eyebrows arched when she read it before furiously typing back.
Dana F: Bette, from Hit, Bette? How do you know?
TKennard: B/C some of the band members were @ Hit the nite we were. The rhythm guitarist was the 1 who got punched in the face B4 Bette said it was her friend. That same nite 1 of them tweeted about Little P saving her after getting decked.
Dana F: What does Little P mean?
TKennard: The only possible answer is “Little Porter.” Kit just said her “baby sister” was watching.
Dana thought about it for a minute.
Dana F: But if she’s watching, then she must not be coming tonight??
When Tina received that last message her stomach dropped. Fuck! Am I ever going to get to see her again?
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(42 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
Did that kiss actually happen. Where´s the catch? What´s gonna drop on them? Did Bette do something bad in a parallel timezone which will come back to haunt us now – I´m a bit spooked by this lovable atmosphere.
very hot and the lyrics were perfect for the moment. cheers
so glad i don’t have to wait for the next chapter… reading on
Alright thats awesome and finally they got their first kiss and its wonderful, love it. Please post more, thanks!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! Great update. Happy they have finally gotten together again. Hope Tina will think to ask Bette about signig the band before those other two idiots sign them. Hope Alice did not already talk with them before Bette got there. That would be disastrous and deserve a huge asskicking to Alice from Bette. Loved it. Thanks for posting.
OMG…! so sweet ah…finally they meet again and have proper kiss LOL yup… Coast clear this time.. Thanks meloveslu! Not only for this chapter but also for your kindness! I do enjoy your story, grateful that you are willing to share your wonderful talent with us-the readers… … Pining to your next post
Btw… After this wonderful chapter, and in relation to the authors note… I wonder, will I need to prepare myself for another breath holding session? you mentioned something explosive is on the way… Sooo? Good explosion? Or … ?? Geez… PPVS? Thanks….
AWESOME! That was such a great build up to a great 1st (or maybe 1st and a half) kiss. Can’t wait for the next update. Will the band sign w/ Tina’s agency or will Bette oush for the San Diego label from her freind Nona? Ah , the possibilities are endless. And when will Bette and Tina be able to take this little lovefest somewhere more private?
Definitely worth the wait and left me wanting more. Any chance of another update soon… just so you can torture us with another cliffhanger?
Again you left out more pages Mel :) Excellent yahooo their first kiss…wow! that was definitely some kiss!!!! Thank you for this story.
Beautifully and tantilizingly described. A very hot R.
Holy Hell…that was delicious! I take back everything I said about you being a meanie! Love the way you mingled in the Bareback lyrics. Don’t know how Tina was clear-headed enough to flirt, but gotta give the girl credit. Always look forward to your posts. Have a good weekend.
Yes!!!Finally.Thank you for the update.Great story.