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Tossing And Turning – Part 4
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Tina sat in her office at Peabody-Shaolin Film Studios. She was calling with a client when: “Tina, Bette is on line 2.” Greta, Tina’s assistant, said. Tina said to the person she was calling now, that she would call back and pushed the button with two on it.
“Hello, Bette.” She said.
“Hi, Tina.” Bette said, her voice shaking.
“Have you decided?” Tina asked, she was nervous to.
“Yes, I want you to…” Bette’s voice broke. “…be the other mother of our baby.”
Tina smiled from ear to ear. “Really?” She asked, just to make sure.
“Yeah, really… Would you… like to go to the doctor’s appointment with me in two weeks?”
Tina nodded while saying. “Yes, of course. I want to.”
“Okay, it’s at 4.30PM, its still Dr. Wilson.” Bette told Tina.
“I will be there.” Tina reacted, smiling from ear to ear.
“Well, then, see you later.” Bette told Tina.
“Yeah, bye.” Tina said and hung up the phone, almost screaming from happiness. She would have a child. She would have a baby in about three months. A little baby boy or girl… a dream come true. She heard a knock on her office door and Helena walked in.
“Hi, darling.” Helena said. Tina was still smiling from ear to ear.
“Hey, Hel.” She said, very excited.
“You are happy.” Helena told Tina. “Any particular reason?”
“Yes, Bette is going to let me being the other mother.” Tina said, feeling extremely happy. Helena smiled.
“That is great, Tina. I’m very happy for you.” She told her.
“I am to.” Tina reacted and stood up, walking over to Helena and laying her arms around the brown-haired woman’s shoulders. “I am going to a doctor’s appointment with her in two weeks.” Tina was almost jumping up and down. Helena found it very cute.
“That’s great.” She said.
“Can we maybe have dinner together tonight? I would like to celebrate” Tina wanted to know.
“Err, I don’t think so Tina, sorry. I… I’m having dinner with Leigh tonight.” Helena told her. Tina pulled back from Helena and walked back to her desk.
“Have fun then.” Tina said, coldly.
“Come on, Tina, don’t act like this. We decided that we would also see other people, right?” Helena asked.
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aww well at least they are still attacted to each other, they will bond over the baby, I’m sure they will be back together soon.
Tina is a DA. Helena is still running a game on her.
I loved it. Everything, dialogue, pace and all that shiz You had owning up to the right mistakes without making it sound insincere. I felt Bette’s remorse here and Tina’s admission to her part in their break up was easy for me to swallow. You should’ve written for the show. Thank you
wow that was a lot to digest. so glad they are talking. they have a long way to go and there probably be some setbacks but they are on the right track right now. thanks for posting.
someone should kick tina in the ass… she is still letting helena run the show… fuck helena… if she wants to try and date bette she should.. who gives a fuck what helena would say… come on tina wake up… helena is fucking anyone she wants… she’s not asking for your permisson… at least you have bette and tina talking… was hoping of ra little kiss when they were on the couch togeter… pps
I am amazed at your thought processing at your age. Very impressed in deed. The pacing of this story is just right. Don’t rush yourself. I think this just might be my favorite of all your stories. Great job as always.
Hey Me … I’m glad that you take my comments in a positive way because although I am sometimes opinionated and I get passionate about some things it is never my intent to be critical. I appreciate authors and I know what it’s like to put yourself out there. I think you are doing an amazing job on this story and as tikki87 said in her comment I too am impressed with your thought process. Some of the things you’ve included in their conversation were things I hadn’t even considered. I was most impressed with the fact that Bette is not going to acknowledge Melvin as the grandfather. I don’t think Tina realizes what a HUGE ACT OF LOVE and COMMITMENT that is for Bette to do that. It really proves that Bette considers Tina as an equal partner and equally in parenting their baby. I could go on for days making a case against Helena (she’s one of my least favorite characters on the show regardless of what version she portrayed) so I will suffice it to say that the sooner Tina get’s her out of Bette and the baby’s life the better. If Tina just wants the sex I’m sure she can find someone else that will take care of that need and give her more respect than Helena ever did. I’m really glad Bette made the decision to co-parent because it’s obvious she’s enjoying having someone to share all the special moments with, and hopefully Tina will be in the delivery room with her. Just keep doing what you’re doing because it’s working. Looking forward to seeing how long Bette can resist not knowing the gender of the baby especially if Tina knows. Thanks for the story.
PS – If Helena is Tina’s boss that’s another good reason she shouldn’t be sleeping with her. At least when they were together on the show Tina didn’t work for her. In this case if Tina pisses her off she can find herself unemployed so as much as Helena may not influence her she’s got power over her.
Thank your the update.PPS
That was great and glad they talk and trying to be friend with each other. Tina need to get her head out of her ass and break up with helena already, why she still with her, damn it. Please post more, thanks!
Friends and co-parents is very good progress, under the circumstances. You’re doing a good job with this, thank you for the post. :)
Well I’m losing hope, but at least they are building a strong friendship by communicating and who knows, but honestly why is Tina still with Helena this is just a disaster and we all know how it ends. I really wish they chose Angelica as a name, idk for me I don’t see them with kids if that name is not involved, I’m crazy thinking like that lok
Well I’m losing hope, but at least they are building a strong friendship by communicating and who knows, but honestly why is Tina still with Helena this is just a disaster and we all know how it ends. I really wish they chose Angelica as a name, idk for me I don’t see them with kids if that name is not involved, I’m crazy thinking like that lol