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I’ll Never Let You Go: Chapter 17
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Previously…
She glanced at her watch and noticed that its already past 8pm, she took a deep breath as she started to feel the fatigue brought by the day’s work “come in James” she said while still looking at the file of documents on her desk. She heard the door opened “I didn’t know that you’re still here James I thought you went home already” she didn’t hear any response instead she heard a click “James why did you lock the door…” Bette wasn’t able to finish her sentence because the moment she saw the person standing in front of her all the passion, lust and desire came rushing back to her blood
“Bette I missed you…”
Chapter 17
“What are you doing here Tina?” Bette asked her heart began to beat faster. Tina leaned against the door her trembling hands still holding the doorknob. “Didn’t you hear what I just said? I’m here because I missed you” Tina said softly. “I’ve been trying to reach you these past few days but you were always unavailable, are you trying to avoid me?” Tina’s voice was sending chill down her spine. “I’m not avoiding you Tina it’s just that I’ve been busy these past few days and…” Bette paused when she saw Tina walking seductively towards her.
She cleared her throat “…and the meetings were left and right” Bette stood up and made her way around her desk as Tina continued walking towards her. Tina’s eyes traveled all over her the brunette’s body; Bette was wearing a black sleeveless blouse, white pencil cut skirt which was above the knee and black pumps and Tina thought she looked delicious.
Bette could see the desire flaming in the blonde’s hazel eyes and her gaze was making her nervous. “Look Tina about what happened the night after we left The Planet…” their eyes locked and Bette was absentmindedly walking backwards as Tina walked closer to her. “What about it Bette?” the blonde asked while trying her might to control the trembling of her body.
Bette’s back hit the hard cold surface of the wall and Tina’s intense look was making her wet. “I-I don’t know wwhat happened that night but whatever it was it shouldn’t happen anymore” Bette said her chest was heaving up and down. Tina was now standing inches away from her; the blonde put her hand against the wall beside Bette’s head.
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I registered to stop being a silent reader, I really love your story. Thank you! :)
Thank you for the update.PPS
You’re probably going to rather I stayed silent after reading this comment but I just wanted to say that I think Tina’s approach was all wrong considering who she’s dealing with. She made it appear that it’s just sex for her by coming on so strong and trying to seduce Bette in her office. Totally inappropriate for one thing considering they are in a place of business and if I recall correctly Bette is her boss. She’s also married, grieving a dead child, confused about her sexuality, dealing with a failing marriage, and straight. If Tina has any sensitivity at all she would realize that Bette created the distance and the avoidance because she’s in emotional turmoil and trying to seduce her in her office is not what she needed from Tina. I think she would have appreciated a friend showing some concern and care. Then to have Tina run out and get drunk and take the first woman home who comes on to her doesn’t seem to be the action of someone who is supposedly ‘in love’. Can she not obstain from sex long enough to give Bette time to come to terms with what she’s going through? Thanks for the story and I hope you take this as just my thoughts on the character’s actions and not criticism on your story. You’re doing a great job and I’ve enjoyed reading.
yep very much enjoying it thanks for post hun. :)
Great chapter, intense and emotional! Tnx for update!
I can feel Bette’s dilemna as she tries to sort out her feelings. Fantastic story.
Just caught up with your updates. Wonderful story love it. thank you.
These are the chapters that I love. PPS!
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Loved this story. PPS
Oh my!!! Tina came on like gangbusters and I think she needs to re-think her approach towards Bette. AFter all Bette is the married one, even if she has shown and exhibits a very deep interest in Tina. She was drunk but knew what she wanted and what she wanted and had was Tina. Tina needs to stop and thin about what Bette is going through at the moment, a husband that is having an affair (not sure Bette knows that yet) but I do believe when she does find out she will drop him like a hot rock; still greiving over the loss of her son and what her husband said about that loss. She has found something within herself and she is not sure how to reconcile being “straight” or possibly bi-sexual and having Tina in her life. She wants Tina very much evidenced by her actions after her visit to the Planet but she still needs time to think things through. Tina needs to go back to see her and apologize for her actions coming on so strong towards her when all she needed at that moment was a friend not a lover. Hopefuly Tina will get over her hurt from being rejected and realize what she did and go and apologize to Bette. Certainly hope Bette will accept the apology and get past the anguish. She will discover that she does indeed love Tina. Looking forward to their reunion and their blossoming friendship and subsequent romantic relationship. Great update. Thanks.
Damn so sad and hope Bette will dump ed soon and be with Tina!
I feel Bette’s struggle-but she could have stopped Tina the moment she approached her-but Bette was the one that started the encounter in the office by kissing Tina first. Tina was in pain, made a bad judgement call, sleeping with Sandy- but we all have been there after a rejection from someone we love and care for.