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    Story written on October 27, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 18

    Bette drove slowly around scrutinising the darkened landscape.
     
    The only source of light was provided by the jeep’s headlights. The car jumped and shook with every bump in the road sending the cone of light in front of her upwards to the sky and back down, making the halo it projected against the blackened sky look like a white ball bouncing up and down the surface of a black canvas.
     
    It was then that she spotted them, hidden in the dark beyond ahead, the unmistakable shine of eyes in the distance. Betrayed by the reflecting disc in their retina, their eyes caught the light coming from the car as it extended and faded into the night.
     
    Her eyes averted from the dirt track for a second and she glanced briefly at the rifle which was securely mounted on a purpose fit gun rack on her dashboard.  The top of the line semi-automatic hunting rifle was a deadly but at the same time very attractive object. She reached a hand forward and brushed the beautiful high gloss finish of the walnut stock. Her eyes travelled along the firearm handle and down the highly polished and deep lustre blued gun barrel. It was her only safety assurance and she felt completely at ease knowing of and feeling its proximity.
    She altered her course, drove a little bit closer to where she was sure the night’s trouble had come from and killed the engine to listen for the evident signs of lions feeding. Her suspicions were confirmed when she heard the low growling and snarling of hungry and competitive lions up ahead.
    Grabbing the powerful spotlight, she had taken with her and remaining within the confine of the jeep’s cab, she opened the roof top and stood to shine its powerful beam onto the scene hidden in the darkness.
    There is front of her, five lionesses had manage to pull down an ageing buffalo. The unfortunate bovine had probably been left behind or had deliberately been pushed out of the herd, its misfortune having been the lionesses’ lucky day.
    Their demeanour showed with no doubt that they had spotted the approaching vet a long time before Bette had even known of their whereabouts. Ears pricked up and their eyes momentarily locked with the jeep’s movements. 
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    2. I love this story and always lookin forward to it! Hopefully things will finally progress with them and they won’t be disturbed :) Great update and can’t wait for the next PPS.

    3. At Tina’s words, Bette looked at the blonde with a confused look and questionning eyes, “My room?… Why???”……. Okay,that was the PG version, so now send the kids to bed, and give us the real stuff, woman! “Take me to your room”, aaaand..?… *NC-17 red signal*… *NC-17 red signal*… *NC-17 red signal*… I’m right in that front seat ready for chapter 19, you tease!!… Okay, more seriously, that was perfect again! Love the love!! Love those intimate moments!! And gotta say… I love those lines of yours: “It was quite amusing watching their little faces poke out through the buffalo’s pelvis.” Ewwww..! That kick you get at writing this gory stuff in your stories is concerning me a little. Should I worry?… ;) Great update as usual, buddy! Kuddos to you! xxxKw

    5. Hope they can continue their evening undisturbed. Still think jl caused the commotion and wished it had been her the lions were feasting on. Wish Tina would not go back to the hotel where that beast lives because I fear for her safety if she does after the way they kinda pissed of jl. She won’t rest until she can harm Tina and then try to bring Bette in line with her thinking. I only hope that she over estimates her own ability and does herself in without any body having to do anything to her. Let her kill herself, that way no one is guilty of her death. Great chapter. Really enjoyed it. Thanks.

    10. every new chapter blows me away at how detailed, and vividly you paint the picture for the reader. The scene describing the lion cubs, and also Bette and Tina holding on to one another kissing are both great examples. You are so talented! I can’t wait until your next update!

    13. I disagree with others, I dare you go on another 2 chapters without NC17.Huh~~~,I just really enjoyed the teasing, I did, didn’t I? Hope nobody turn their anger of your teasing to me. Escape~~~

    15. Hey Dainty, I wouldn’t want any animal feasting on JL for fear of indigestion or something  poor animals. Hey kins40, I know you’re battling the WB but this post doesn’t seem like it. For the next post you should take it easy and just do the NC-17  I know they’re not as easy as that, its a bad joke. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with is.

    16. LOL… yup Kins such a tease! :-) … Hmmm… Now you are done teasing us, would you please come back soon with more updates?? :-D I always amazed by your writing, how do you always found the right words to describe everything? And giving a bright side of an even gory stuff! Not just any light and bright thing but bring it cuteness when you wrote about the cubs! and put that aside… The sweet tender moment between the gals… *sigh* … So again, the WB is not the barrier but more like a stepping stone to higher level ;-) never doubt it dear Kins ;-) Uhm… In the other hand, I hope it doesn’t mean you will become cruel on your teasing and left it hanging on the edge like this anymore :-p

    17. Yes, what writer’s block–the chapter is seamless. I know you’ve been told so many times that you do atmosphere so well. This story’s cadence perfectly captures the Africa in our minds. I realized it was an ear thing, more than an eye thing, although this is a visual story, too. And tactile, too. And every other modality. You’re a sensual writer really. And the best thing to happen here since…I don’t know, it’s been that long.

    18. OMG! From your description of Tina’s t-shirt and shorts, I’m surprised Bette didn’t faint… I know I sure felt like it ;) Okay, now get back on that WB horse cowgirl Kins and let ‘er buck – It’s rodeo time for our gals, right? (LOL). Joking! In your capable hands I know their union will be nothing but sensually beautiful. Enjoy your weekend pumpkin hunting and try not to eat ALL of the sweets before Halloween! iHH x — PS in addition to your well deserved award of ff tease, I’d also like to give you a word nerd Gold Star for “penumbra” – classic!

    19. Hey, Can I just say totally unfair with the tease? But I guess I will let you off as long as the next chapter is just as juicy. If not juicier. Reading this is giving me inspiration to jump back on the band wagon and get typing away. I shall be back soon. I hate writers block, seems I get it worse than you. Beautifully written chapter. With every story your creativity expands and so does each characters emotions. I see you visualise yourself as your character and empathise with them also. I take a bow. You know why because whatever you write it completely awesome. C x

    20. Yeah, you really like to tease us, don’t you Kins? But your stories are so beautiful you are forgiven if you have a little fun at our expense. Hurry back with the next chapter, please!

    21. Okay, I’m all caught up and hot damn! Your writing is so visceral. I’m sure I have already told you that. The description you use is so freaking amazing that I’m swept away each and every chapter! Thanks K!!

    22. I found myself humming Etta James’ “At Last” as I came to the end of the chapter. Yes, you deserve the Tease title, but your teasing is the sweetest torture. I’m amazed with every chapter that English is not your mother tongue as you are quite the wordsmith. I always appreciate your descriptive style. Cannot wait for Bette’s answer…though I feel confident in hazarding a guess!

    23. So was the interruption caused by jodie as a distraction to gain access to Bette’s gun cabinet code and she plans to kill one of the elephants and then have Bette or Tina take the blame. Can we find a way to get Alice in the story? Maybe she can be the auditor that takes Tina place.

    26. Regardless of u constant teasing which I love it by the way! the lions feast scene was perfect I really felt myself with Bette in the Jeep top, lol. thank u kins for this wonderful chapter but please give the girls what they want, an NC17 mind plowing chapter after all the teasing they suffer from ;D

    29. Good idea Tina! I can’t wait for the next chapter. I’m so glad Bette came back safely. I was really worried that it was some kind of trap set by Jodie.I love the way you described the lions…so realistic. Please post again soon.

    31. ”take me to your room”-such a short and simple sentence yet screaming with sexiness.. And oh i demand that the next post be an nc17 otherwise im gonna hunt your sweet and sexy ass down hehe! cant wait 4 the next post(-; thanks-phacey

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