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New York Minute – chapter 71
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NEW YORK MINUTE
CHAPTER 71
Bette felt her stomach leap into her mouth
– her first reaction was that she was alone with a man who had killed someone. She cursed herself for telling James that he could go home. But then again – maybe he had been watching the gallery and he knew that she was alone. Bette didn’t do fear very often – she had faced down her own demons and that had been the biggest battle of her life –but this was a moment where she was getting close to fear.
“Mr Kennard “ Bette said.
“You are my daughter’s partner ?”
“Yes “
He took a step towards Bette who took a step backwards
“Please Ms Porter
– I don’t mean to frighten you – I would just like to talk “
Bette exhaled
“I guess you know my past but I swear I don’t mean you any harm
– I just want to talk – please”
Bette took a couple of deep breaths and nodded. Okay so he was a convicted killer but he seemed to be living a blameless life since he had been released and presumably he wouldn’t have been let out of jail if he had been still regarded
as a threat.
“Okay”
The anxiety on Bette’s face must have been visible
– he took a step backwards
“I know that you don’t know me and you know what I did and I know that
you and Tina have had some problems with Louise. Please Ms Porter – I want to reassure you and ask you a few things and tell you about me and Tina’s mom”
“Okay
– sorry “
“No – its okay. Maybe it was the wrong thing to do to come here but I didn’t know any other way of meeting you “
“There is a coffee shop a couple of 100 yards from here”
“Yes
– I have seen it”
“Would you like a coffee ?”
“And you would feel safer ? “ he said
Bette nodded
“Of course
– I will see you there “
“I just have to lock up “
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CONGRATULATIONS, ALLY!!!!!!!!! What an amazing achievement, and I am so honored to have you here. You have entertained THOUSANDS these past years and kept The L Word alive in everyone’s hearts. Thank you, thank you, thank you! Everyone – please read our special interview with Ally: http://news.l-word.com/2011/11/allyemmerson-posts-her-1000th-story/
Ally congratulations on your 1000th chapter. I am one of those people who has usually been a “silent reader” but please now that your stories have always been the first I look for when I come to this site. So thank you for several years of enjoyment
CONGRATS big time Ally !!! it has indeed been a wonderful delight and treat to have you as writer on this site and to have read your stories. They have made me laugh, cry and have taken me on some roller coaster rides of drama at time. I thank you from the bottom of my heart..Thanks mate and I look forward to reading your next 1000 postings !!!
hey congratulations ally woowww you are amazing thank you for all your story’s and thank you from the bottom of my heart….
Congratulations Ally!!!! Long may the stories continue! I’ve read your stories for years now and you’re the writer of my favourite one ever…The L Wing!! As long as you write, we will read ;)…enjoy your messages and good wishes – you deserve them!
Whoo hoo, 1000 chapters! You are such an amazing writer. Thank you SO much for sharing your talent with us. Your stories are some of my favorite Tibette fics. I look forward to every post you make :)
Thanks for the update, Ally! Great, as usual. And I wanted to congratulate you myself on that 1000th chapter… 1000 treats to us if you ask me! Thanks for sharing your stories with us, and here is to 1000 more posts!! Thanks, Kw.
Congratulations Ally. Lots of love, Lea & Helen. X
Wow Ally, one thousand chapters!! My most gracious thanks to you for posting my favorite story, then all of your stories are my favorites. I am currently home bound for an illness and I have rereading some of your earlier tales. You have grown leaps and bounds with writing. We, the readers of this site, honor your presence.
Congrats! Wow, 1000 is quite a feat! Keep on keeping on, and write until your heart is content. You’re stories are so well written, and so entertaining. You are truly talented, and I am honored to call myself a fan of such an amazing author. New York Minute and Something So Right are two of my all time faves, so thank you for entertaining us and showing such a dedication to your writing and to your fans for so long now!
1000th chapters,and a 1000 thanks to an amazing writer….a 1000 xxx……., looking forward to the next 1000 whatever you have for us we will be here, waiting patiently…x
Congratulations AllyE!!!!!. Wonderful accomplishment and a thousand thank you’s for all the chapters of the stories you have given us. Here’s to a thousand more. Hope you give us more on the conversation with Jack Kennard and Bette. She should tell him some of the movies names so he can get them and see what his daughter has accomplished. So glad he did allude to Louise being bat-shit crazy and needs professional help and he should see that she gets it. Great chapter. Thanks.
congratulations ally!!! didn’t know you had written so much. farly new to the site found some of your stories and am slowly catching up. Loving every word. Thanks for the time you take to share your talent. Here’s to many more posts!!
Congratulations on your 1000th chapter! I came to this site late but have gone back and read all of your stories and have enjoyed them immensely. Please keep em coming! :)
Let me add my congrats on your 1000th posting! Thanks for everything.
Congratulations Ally! I think you deserve that recognition and you are truely amazing! Keep on writing girlOh and I actually like Tina’s dad, I think they can mend bridges
Congratulations, Ally! I am a big fan your stories!! Thank you so much for sharing them with us!!! You are very talented! :)
Not just 1000 chapters but quality and entertaining chapters. I have followed your stories for years. It is comforting to know that your posting will be adult, coherent and the dialogue will “sound” like the characters from the show. Many times with other authors, the story dialogue is too slangy and juvenile making Bette sound like a hip hop gallery owner not a sophisticated urbanite. I, too, am old school about spelling and grammar. I totally understand if English is not your first language and that should be stated in the author’s notes but you’re correct when stating that writers need a proofreader. Any writer is brave to post on this site especially if you post often and I admire your courage but please take the time to show that you do have pride in your efforts and have some concept of grammar and spelling.
Congrats Ally. Excellent update can’t wait to read more. Thank you for this story and all your other stories.
Instead of just saying Congratulations…I would rather just say THANK YOU! …over and over again!
Congratulations Ally thank you for giving us something to look forward to at the end of any day; long, short, hectic, calm, stressful or less, thank you!!
A thousand down…a thousand to go! Congratulations, but most of all thank you for sharing these stories with us. You have made an immense difference to the L-word world by telling and showing again and again,that love is love, no matter who you love.
Ally, CONGRATULATIONS on your 1000th chapter! You’re an amazing writer, you are very talented, I love all your stories and I look forward for the next 1000
1000 Stars for you AE.Congratulations and thank you soooo much.Looking forward to 1000 more chapters.
People always say it´s all about quality and not quantity. But there are those rare times when you get blessed with both and that, my friend, is what you have blessed us all with. I am proud to say that I´ve read each and all of your 1000 posts and loved every single one. Thanks is such a small word to offer for what I want to express, but trust that I filled it with huge amount of love and admiration. Forever your fan. :)
Congrats! 1000 is A LOT!!!! Well, this chapter is amazing so thank you! :) PPS
Congratulations Ally! Your story was the first one I read when I came to this site and have kept me coming back for more. Thanks for faithfully writing and keeping us entertained. May there be many more stories to come.
Congrats on 1000 chapters and I am proud to say I’ve read almost everyone. Totally enjoy your stories and hoping and wishing for another 1000 chapters. God Bless
CONGRATS ALLY!!! :-) for your generousity of sharing your story upto 1000th postings! ^^,_v I wonder has I read all those 1000 or not.. Kinda doubt as I don’t think it’s all around anymore isn’t it?! Anyway I am honored that I am one of the readers who is around and able to read your stories :-) still and always looking forward to your updates and thanks again!! :-) anyway, back to the story, I don’t think any of us expecting Tina’s father to reacted that way! Another surprise from you.. I guess ;-) lol
congratulations i love your stories your such an incredbley talented writer and when i see youve posted or read one of your stories i t allways makes me feel better.now go on and spoil your self you derserve it and love to rocky
Congradulations on the 1000th fan fiction well done on your amazing stories thanks for all the great stories you have written.
Congratulations Ally!! Not only have you written 1000 chapters, you have explored many different scenarios and story lines, all fresh and intriguing. Your imagination and smart, realistic dialogue keeps us wanting to read every chapter of every story. The vastness of your scope of work speaks of the vastness of your talent. I for one hope you continue feeding us B&T, but I also hope you will explore other characters and story lines away from TLW. Your future consumers await your first book! Thanks Ally!!
Congratulations Ally! I believe I read every single post and I know that even with several stories all were truly different and special. I hope your inspiration never lefts you. It’s fascinating to see new drama develop or old drama solved. It never feels rushed and that’s good. I don’t only like your stories I love them.
Kudos to your creative stamina, your fortitude in overcoming all sorts of obstacles and your big and generous heart for sharing your 1,000 stories and posts to us despite many odds. To me, you and some brilliant writers from the past most of whom no longer post, will always be synonymous with this site. A million times thank you for all the joy, drama and entertainment you’ve brought us all these years. I hope you’ll continue writing not just for our pleasure but most of all for your personal enjoyment and fulfillment. I wish you love, happiness and good health, ally. Cheers! =)
CONGRATS!!! I sure hope that Mr. Kennard is being sincere in his wish for Tina,Bette and Angie and this is not some kind of set up. If he is being truthful, maybe Tina can get her Dad and Mom back, so Angie can have some Grandparents.
Thank you for all your 1,000 posts! I enjoy your writing very much. Here’s hoping there is much more to come.
i hope you get this message, Ally! I think what you have been doing for this site and for all the readers who do read your stories is really wonderful. I have been a reader of your stories for years, since L Wing and that got me to read everything you have written since (even hard to read pairings like Helena and Bette when I’m such a Tibetter – that shows you how much of a fan I am). There have been times when I feel despondent and just need to hide away from the real world and this site and writers like you make my inner world so much better. thank you from the bottom of my heart. I hope you never stop writing.