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Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(14)
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Previously…
Another precious memory that the movie reminded her of was the look of excitement shown in those brown eyes of the woman who owned her heart as the opening credits started to roll when they both watched it in the midst of the cool breeze of the night two weeks ago. As her mind travelled back to the most amazing night of her life goose bumps crawled all over her soft creamy skin but was immediately snatched away from her dreamy state when she heard the doorbell rang.
She looked at the wall clock and saw that it’s already quarter after 7 and wondered who would visit her on a Monday evening? She stood up and as she walked towards the door her heart began to beat faster than the usual which made her wonder. She opened the door and the moment their eyes made contact sparks flew in different directions
“Good evening Tina…”
Chapter Fourteen
Tina was so surprised at the person standing before her, she didn’t expect for her to come to her house tonight after what have happened earlier in the campus. As the beat of her heart increased different words would like to sprang out from her lips but all she had managed to say was
“Hello Bette…”
The brunette who was standing on the blonde’s doorstep couldn’t help but gasped at the breathtaking beauty in front of her. Tina in her pink pjs, her face free from makeup and her soft golden locks a little bit messy and Bette thought she looked lovely.
“I just want to see how you’re doing right now; Alice told me that you had a bad stomach a while ago and that you didn’t eat your lunch” Bette said her voice soft and her dark brown eyes on Tina’s. As always the brunette’s presence never failed to make a disarming effect on the blonde and the fact that Bette was there to check on her even if the “bad stomach thing” wasn’t true made her feel good. She gave the brunette a shy smile
“Oh that was nothing but I’m alright now” the blonde lied, seeing Bette sitting closely with Sarah Williams made her lose her appetite and not to mention made her broke into flood of tears. Remembering that scene in the cafeteria brought the pain again and she wondered if they’re an item now.
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ooohhh sooo good!!! but ‘friends’? oyyy i hope that bette’s just fumbling for words!!! thank you for posting and post soon!!!!
Bette drove all the way to Tina’s house wearing that outfit and brought a gift to tell her ‘let’s be friends’. What a douche!!!! Seriously, and the reason for leaving that morning was so pathetic. It definitely sounds made up. You could’ve done better, like, ‘I left my iron on’ or something. Please Tina don’t waste your time pining over this loser. Please let Tina move!!!!!!!! She deserves so much better than someone who only wants to string her along. Thanks for the awesome post
firstly,cheers for updating even though you weren’t feeling too well, rest up though!! Now to the story- i’m so disappointed in Bette even with a legitimate reason i think she should try to understand how Tina might be feeling after leaving her in a lurch on their first morning after. She seems to be so self-absorbed, I know they agreed on a no emotion arrangement but still some common courtesy would be nice :( thank you and pps but health first!!
FRIENDS?!!…..omg…….It’s F…ingly HURT!!!…WHY BETTE?… oh man..Thanks phacey for the post.. Get better and rest for now.
Phacey hope the headache is better and thanks for posting even though you weren’t feeling well. My first reaction to the end of this chapter is that I hope the next one opens with the resounding sound of Tina slapping Bette really hard and throwing her out of her house. OK maybe that’s too harsh and I really don’t condone physical violence but Tina needs to show some dignity, self-respect and control over her runaway emotions and libido. First of all she needs to stop lamenting over their amazing night in her fantasy world and start facing reality. Secondly I would ask Bette exactly what she thinks that they are to each other now and what does she mean by ‘friends’. In my opinion this little visit and Bette’s pathetic explanation and her request to be ‘friends’ just added insult to injury. I would love to know what Bette wrote in the ‘thank you note’ she left, then what she told Shane when she picked her up and why Shane and Alice lied to Tina about Bette being in Paris. Or did Bette lie to them too? I think I would have had more understanding and been more forgiving of Bette’s actions had she run away to Paris but her explanation reeks. Her sob story pulled on the heartstrings and like Tina I’m happy that she found and rescued Kit but everything she said about that night and her conflict about leaving Tina’s bed was cruel and insensitive if her intent was to blow it off with an ‘I want to be friends’. Tina’s emotional state worries me. She spent ‘two years’ with Helena cheating on her and now she wants to be with someone that is emotionally stunted. She’s either a glutten for punishment; headed for a lot of heartbreak or else she just has really bad judgement in the women she falls for. Like I said before I don’t think these two should get together romantically … so we’ll see how Tina answers the ‘friends’ question. I also wonder if Bette means ‘friends with benefits’. There is so much left unsaid between these two it’s kind of pitiful that they can’t just be open and talk honestly to each other. Their entire relationship from the time they met has been based on lies, deception, manipulation, and dishonesty. How can this be a good thing?
Ouch.Friends ?Thank you for the update.PPS
Oh dear, the “F” word… the last thing anyone head over heels in love wants to hear. Tina has a right to decline Bette’s offer though, just as she has a right to state her feelings. Bette has the same rights to either acknowledge or ignore how Tina feels, and withdraw her offer of friendship if she thinks it’ll be too awkward. Whatever they choose, it’s messy! Thank for the post :)
Hi phacey, I hope you are getting better now :-) … And poor Tina!! It’s where the words “let’s be friends” is the worst thing to be heard!! Coz after being best friend, there will be a barrier on “I don’t want to let her know I’m in love with her and might lose my best friend” thing >_< argh
ooohhhh poor tina you need too tell her please!!! thank you that is an amazing story please post soon….
Tina must open his heart and say Bette that she does not know if she can be friends, because she in love. :) – more…….
Ooooooooh..! I had the same reaction as Nanouchbaby….. “Friends!” That’s gotta hurt more than sorry I don’t want to see you anymore!loved the update Phacey! Hope the headache is not self-inflicted but you have my compassion anyway…get well soon and get posting soon too! Kx :0)
if bette’s next line is friends first and maybe lovers after… well OK… like i have said all along… they should of became friends first… maybe thats what (And i am hoping) bette’s wants… love this story… post when you can… and take care of your self first… we will all be here waiting… HAPPY THANKSGIVING
what? Friends? Oh God why can’t they just open their mouth and say what they really wants to each other for God sake they already made love to each other?Sorry Tina, but u should speak up dear.. waiting for ur update, it is getting interesting, and sorry for ur headache I hope u feel better now xxx
Tina u have to tell her now! Please Phacey let them have a realistic loving relationship Bette cannot pretend she doesn’t like Tina as well
Oh Comeon Tina just tell Bette. Great story and thank you for posting.
Oh damn poor Tina, please let her tell Bette she in love with her. Please post more, thanks!
Thank you for posting,hope you feel better soon,cant wait for more.