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NEW YORK MINUTE
CHAPTER 84
It was clearly a speech that Jack had rehearsed in his head many times. He looked flustered after he had spoken and went silent. Tina was silent, Mary had started crying again.
“No one is ever going to be able to undo what happened back then and regardless of the time that has passed wounds are still open. Because you are all here and you all willingly came here – that has to mean that you all want to fix some of the hurt. What you just said Jack was very brave – its hard to live with your own weaknesses “ Bette said
“I was 19 years old and rejected by everyone who I thought loved me – I know what you must have gone through was horrendous dad – I cannot imagine having your freedom taken away from you but I carried the can. What I did was stupid – I know that and I knew that at the time but did you stop to think about what would have happened if you had made him marry me ?
I would have been miserable and he would have hated me and the baby for stopping him enjoying his freedom “
“Why did you leave Tina – we would have come around if we had had more time” Mary said
“Time ?” Tina said “I didn’t have time. I was pregnant and I had to have an abortion – something that none of you would help me have “
“I still think abortion is wrong if the baby is healthy “ Mary replied
“I don’t think it is wrong. I did what I had to do for myself mom. It might make me selfish but I did it for all the right reasons. I wasn’t mature enough to be a mom – and do not tell me that you and everyone else would have stood by me because you wouldn’t have. what was I going to live on ? where was I going to live ? Everyone in town hated me – everyone in town judged me as the tart who got herself pregnant. I wasn’t going to be punished for the rest of my life for one stupid error when I was barely 19 years old. So I left. I packed my bags – I walked to the bus station and I sat on my case and I watched the greyhound buses come in. I was going to go to New York but the bus wasn’t due in until the next morning. That’s how I ended up in LA with a couple of cases and a few hundred bucks to my name. “
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Great updates. Actually I think that it is a good time for Tina’s parents to learn about B&T’s past. After seeing how good they are together and love each other, they can see that they are willing to work for their relationship through the hard times. I am also glad that Tina kind turn to her mom for advice when she said “Ï was such a bitch mom.” Please check your PM’s. I LOVE the direction that this story is going in.
Your stories are page turners. They read like the best novel. What a talent you have!!!! :-)
Great update and thanks for the three chapters. It’s good that Tina and her parents are getting along so well but how long will it last? And she told them she lost the baby after three weeks, I thought it was 3 months because they knew the sex of the baby and you can’t tell that in three weeks. Anyway, the chapters were wonderful and shows some insight about where they are in their relationship as well. After Tina tells her parents about the break-up and getting back together, I think they should close the door on that subject and never mention it again. It will always be there but they just need to stop talking about it and be very careful of what they say to each other. Great work. Thanks.
I’m glad Tina’s opening up :) thanks for the update Ally
Ally! That’s where you leave it?! After 6 glorious written pages…you left us on a cliff; hanging by our toenails!!! Good thing you live on the other side of the pond…I’d be over your house in a newyorkminute, just to smack you in the back of the head!(Ya know/like Gibbs hits DaNozo) hmph! I’m gonna tell Rocky on you!!!!! Hey – b4 you go back to work, are we gonna see any L-Wing? (I was beginning to think Rocky didn’t like “DYKEHOUSE” drama, and since he owns you…) hahaha
Thanks for the 3 chapter update!! I love this story and all the twists and turns!!! Can’t wait to read the next chapter….is Louise coming back into their lives…her name keeps popping up!!
Thanks for additional two chapter updates. I am glad that Bette finally told Tina that she was hurt about bringing up her affair. And the information about the sister and then more info about how Tina and Bette met was good to read. And the parents comments about Angie looking like Bette was interesting,nice that Bette let them know that Tina actual gave birth. Loving it.
Thanks for the nice long post today! It is good that Tina is reflecting on her behavior. She made a mistake and will hopefully learn from it. Still love this story!
Another excellent update. 3 chapters was such a gift. Thank you for this story.
3 chaps!! Woohoo!! Thanks Ally!! And also thanks to the someone who made this happen!! ;-) I realized the story was gone, and kinda sure that I was not imagining that :-p luckily the update today makes me sure that it’s real :-D lol :-D … anyway so looking forward for the next update! :-) Tina’s parents can be so mad to Bette for ever cheated and hurt their beloved daughter, but in the other hand they would realized also what they did was wrong and it hurt Tina but they are getting along well now. The human relationship in the story is so complex yet pretty simple when you see from some certain angle and the way Ally wrote them is so captivating and made the readers being emotionally involved. I need to remind me this is FF!! :-p so stop babbling now :-D
Three chapters! You’re spoiling us. I adore this story bc the way you write makes it so real. It’s very nice to see the communication between not only Bette and Tina but also between her parents. After the hell they’ve been through with Louise, it’s good to see that they’ve found some clarity. Thanks for the update and looking forward for more xo