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Close My Eyes -24
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A loud bark is what woke Tina up in the middle of the night. Bette had been up earlier in the night trying to quiet baby Reed down so she was completely knocked out.
Tina quietly climbed out of bed and checked on Reed. He was fast asleep on his stomach. Tina tiptoed slowly out of the room and followed the sound of Oz’s barking.
"Shh!" Tina hissed walking into the living room. Oz ignored her. His body was rigid and his tail upright as he stared at the front door growling and barking. "Oz, quiet!" Tina whispered.
Oz stopped barking and when he did Tina heard a voice. A male voice.
Tina immediately ran to the table and grabbed her gun.
"Oz, go to the room, protect Momma B and Reed," Tina said pointing towards the room.
Oz scampered off as Tina walked to the front door slowly. She heard the voice more clearly, "yeah she called me, man. It’s perfect, it gave me the opportunity I needed. Of course I did it man."
Tina’s eyes widened as she recognized the voice. She yanked the door open with her gun in the air, and he, who was standing on the porch, nearly jumped out of his skin.
"Carlos," Tina growled.
He had been setting down a black rose and a note, but when Tina appeared he simply ran without setting it down.
"Freeze!" Tina yelled bolting after him. She was in sweats and a tank top and barefoot but she didn’t let that stop her.
Carlos just ran like hell. "Stop or I will shoot!" Tina yelled.
Sirens rang out from a distance. Someone called the cops. That seemed to freak Carlos out and he threw himself down to the floor.
Tina immediately climbed on him and grabbed his hands violently. "Ahh!" Carlos cried as Tina cuffed his hands painfully behind his back.
"I told you to not come back here!" Tina yelled.
"Jenny called me, we worked it out!" Carlos cried.
"Then why were you on my porch!" Tina yelled.
Carlos started laughing suddenly. It sounded sinister. "Read the note on the rose."
Tina grabbed the black rose and yanked off the note. When she opened it she gasped. It was a picture of Bette tied up in the basement bleeding and crying and written in red was, "I’ll be back."
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Oh my..what a turn of events!! Such a great story!
Damn, I believe in the death penalty because of people like Byron who will stop at nothing together what they want. Great stuff buttercup!!! Thank you 😘
So touching. Thanks for the chapter. Byron’s a fucker. Hope B and T can be brave for each other.
Please don’t let Byron come out and hurt them. Great story. Thank you.
Damn, I knew we would hear from that bastard again. Just hope that someone will put a bullet in the front part of his anatomy and his head before he can get to Bette and put him and everyone else out of their misery. That is all you can do with animals like him. Tina needs to call Jake so he can be watchful for them. How the hell did bryon find out where they were and the address? Is there a snitch on the police force or in the prison? Or maybe the animal had someone in prison google the info. At any rate, Jake needs to infiltrate the prison somehow and take care of that animal so he gets buried at state expense and never leave those walls alive. Now let’s hope that he hasn’t recruited others as they get out to do the same thing. Actually now he can be prosecuted while in prison for setting this up and getting someone else to do his bidding. Now carlos can be prosecuted as well on charges of rape and attempted murder, and he is stupid to boot, because he raped the wrong person and will go back and should never get out. And neither should bryon. Always thought this scenario would happen, it just came sooner than I anticipated.
Can the story end with Carlos and Bryon getting their dicks cut off or at least can something really slow and painful happen to them? Please? *begging*. PPS:D
I`m with Metal Soul.Kill them.Thank you for the update.PPS
Oh my god that was scary and glad Bette and Tina are ok, and Tina is there to protect Bette and Reed. Please let someone kill byron and carlos, don’t want them to hurt Bette and Tina and baby. Please post more, thanks!