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    Savannah – Amber Eyes

    Story written on June 9, 2012 by kins40.
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    Part 4

    There were no other noises to be heard than those of Nature and the slight crunching sound of her heavy boots as they hit the dry and gritty ground with each step.
    Apart from her slow stride, no man made noise was polluting the atmosphere.
    It was quiet and beautiful in a totally undisturbed way.
    Tina felt like the last creature on Earth, in the vastness surrounding her but it did not daunt anymore. She had got used to it. 
    Many places still bore a strange atmosphere about them and although alone she knew she was always being watched and was not necessarily on her own. It had made her wary at first but she had got some comfort in knowing that the observer was doing so, much more to stay away from her, than motivated solely by some design of harm.  
    She knew her way but never dared underestimate her surroundings and fall into complacent ease. The savannah had many ways of quickly putting you back into your place. 
    Getting pestered and having your patience tested to the very limits by tsetse flies and sweat bees being the lesser of the evils which could befall you and although she had never experienced it herself a scorpion in search of heat or a seemingly harmless centipede could inflict some painful reminders if they found their way onto your skin. But there was always the other end of the spectrum to consider, the one which could quickly bring on a fatal outcome and for that she was prepared, always carrying with her a convincing deterrent.
    She recalled Bette’s words to her. The first lesson of choosing to live in an area where nature prevailed and humans were only to be tolerated.
    "The Savannah is beautiful to those who know it and respect it, but it is not kind, nor forgiving to fools!"   
     
    The sun was starting to prepare for its best show of strength, even this early in the day. And Tina had quickly learnt that the only way to pull through this time, without a serious sense of humour failure, was to simply sit back and enjoy it for what it was and not mind that you could feel sweat running down your skin.
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    6. Thanks for the posting. Ditto to the comments above. I love this story because one, you are such an amazing writer and secondly, I love this storyline as it is incredibly unique and a fantastic story. These two characters are so fresh, intuned to one another and living in such a vibrant world that they have to pay attention to with great vigilence. Thank you for sharing.

    11. What beautiful writing. So detailed and decriptive that I felt I was standing there watching it all. I hope Bahiya makes it. Thank you for this wonderful story.

    12. At first I thought Bahiya might have been eatten by a snake. Maybe she was poisened by a scorpion. I hope she makes it and the little elephant too. Thanks for posting.

    13. Nooooo…!! Kins! 😖 I can’t believe you wrote the story without any additional line in your AN-something like “no lion cub and no elephant were harm in the story” … Yup! I purposely not saying “in the making” as I do hope both of them survive!! Argh! ..what was actually happened?! Why they are so unlucky?! Or is that a wage day for black mamba and friends to hit as many animals as possible?!… Ugh!! 😳 and you left it there!! 😱😱.. May the weather in your city will be accommodating for you to write and post more of the story… 🙏 ;-) lol … your writing is always so good as it always makes me too engrossed and involved in the story line and forget the main line as in “it’s a FF for goodness sake! Get a grip!” 😜… 😁 😁 hehehe… thanks for the update Kins! I really do hope you’ll post the continuation soon 😊 ^^,

    15. Did that mamba have a busy morning or did something else happen to Bahiya. Hopefully the little furball will be back attacking Bettes feet in no time. Beautiful update. Thank you.

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