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One and Only – chp 12
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ONE AND ONLY
CHAPTER 12
Shane emerged from the canteen grinning from ear to ear – she needed to go and find Bette Porter. And at that time of the day there was only one possible location. Sure enough Bette was sitting in her usual seat in the library – the black and red notebook was open and she was making neat and tidy notes from the book that was open in front of her. Although Shane knew that Bette didn’t like being interrupted she couldn’t resist teasing her friend.
“Well well Bette”
Bette looked up – Shane smiled. Bette always looked like she had been snapped from a deep session of mediation when she was disturbed in her studying. Bette smiled, Shane was struck by what a pretty smile the serious junior had.
“Hello Shane”
“Aren’t you a dark horse ?”
“Me ? Why – what have I done ?”
“I was in the canteen a few minutes ago and I overheard a conversation in which your name came up”
Bette looked lost
“Why ?”
Shane sighed – there was something totally not all there about Bette. It wasn’t that she was stupid – she was the opposite of that – it was more than Bette was not always totally grounded in the moment.
“You don’t know ?”
Shane sat down being careful not to disturb Bette’s personal space which was a little wider than most people’s. Bette smiled sweetly
“What have I done Shane and why are people talking about me ?”
Shane thought to herself that even though Bette was the shyest person in the school she was not easy to ignore. Even her shyness was talked about and for once she had done something that had shocked the usual cliché of cool kids.
“A 1500 metres race at school “ Shane said
Bette smiled “ Yeah – that was cool “
“Cool – from what I heard you didn’t want to do it but when you were talked into it you just went to the front and burnt everyone of the others off “
“Did I ?”
“Yes”
Bette shrugged “I don’t like all the bumping and pushing”
“So you just decided to wipe the floor with all of them – Bette – Amy Judge is on the school track team and you left her behind”
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Really nice chapter! Tina´s heading the right way!
Just love your writing. Your stories are always interesting and well written. Like real people w/real ideas/real feelings.
Great chapter. I think Bette’s subconscious is calling Tina to her. PPS!
I love this story plain and simple
Thats good and can’t wait to see Bette and Tina meet. Please post more, thanks!
Hey AllyE. Thanks for the awesome as usual post. I wouldn’t worry too much about him posting your stories, which he does a fabulous job of btw. It’s the humming of a certain kitchen aid and the sound of a tin can hitting the floor that you should really be concerned about 🐱🐟
Thanks Ally for another great update 😁👍 looks like Tina is become more and more sensible.. And freaky Bette is not that freaky anymore, somehow! ;-) I wonder how they would meet and what would happen :-) its so interesting to read your story! Love the flow, conversation, and the characters development! And I’d love to read more :-D so PPVS if you can… Or maybe you can let your assistant to do it for you ;-) You can trust that your story is updated in a good paws ;-)
Great chapter. I hope you keep that assistant of yours hard at work..with lots of treats within reach.
Wonderful chapter. Thank you.
I love your writing,thank you for another great chapter.P.S.Hi Rocky-please PPS.
love it.but then i love everything you write,more power to your pen
Thanks for the posting. Ditto to what everyone said… I like the way Tina is maturing in this story. Bette’s character is very interesting as well. Love your stories and style of writing as it is very enjoyable to read your pieces.
Man… the suspense is killing me.