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Close My Eyes -FINAL
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When Bette woke up in the morning she felt weird. Tina had gone to work with Oz, Reed was at school, and Angie was sleeping peacefully in her crib. Still Bette felt that something was off, maybe a premonition of some sort. She didn’t know but she felt uneasy enough to reach for the phone and call Jenny. She knew everyone else was at work, but Jenny wrote from home. Maybe she would feel better if Jenny stayed with her.
Jenny picked up on the second ring, "hello?"
"Hey Jenny," Bette said.
"Oh hey Bette," Jenny said cheerfully.
"Do you mind maybe coming over and staying with me?" Bette said.
"Are you okay?" Jenny said in a concerned tone.
"I don’t know, I feel off today," Bette said.
"I’ll be right over," Jenny said.
"Thanks Jen," Bette said before hanging up.
Angie was starting to stir so she headed towards the kitchen to get her bottle. She opened the fridge then froze seeing a piece of paper hanging on it. She closed the fridge to look at the paper and gasped. The handwriting was unmistakable.
"I can’t wait to get those plaid pajama pants off you,
Bryon"
Bette stepped back in terror and looked around the room. She was wearing plaid pajama pants, how did he know!
In horror she bolted towards the bedroom and let out a yelp.
Angie was started to cry for food and Bette immediately picked her up to silence her. There was a knock on the backdoor and Bette jumped.
"Jenny," she breathed. She held Angie to her chest and ran quickly to the door. She would run away with Jenny and go to Tina.
But when she reached the door she froze in horror. Standing there holding a terrified-looking Jenny with a knife to her throat was the man that invaded all her worst nightmares.
She uttered his name in fear and Angie started whimpering. "Bryon."
Bryon smirked that evil smirk that Bette would never forget. "Nice to see you again," Bryon said chuckling, "you didn’t think you’d get rid of me so easily did you?"
"Bryon please let Jenny and Angie go," Bette said.
Bryon tugged Jenny’s hair painfully and pressed the knife tighter. "Ahh!" Jenny cried tears rolling down her cheeks.
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That was awesomen and thanks god Bette, Tina and Angie and Jenny are ok, glad to see that sone of a bitch is gone and leave them alone forever. Thank you. Please more!
Wonderful story, thanks so much
Great chapter. Yes, Please post the epilogue. Very happy that Bette, Tina, Angie and Jenny are okay. Also glad that Bette wasn’t harmed anymore than she was so she won’t have to endure the nightmares that she has been having all along. The emotional distress is worse than the physical because the cuts will heal but the emotional scars take a very long time to heal, if they ever really do. So glad that son of a bitch is dead and will no longer bother them. Hope he didn’t leave any more devotees in jail to try and finish what he started like that other crazy fool that came by months ago. Hate to see the story end but at least he won’t bother them again.
wow – what a finale !
Yes! I’m so glad his dead and they are all ok. Please post the epi. Thank you for this great story.
Thank you for this story.An epilogue is it.PPS
Well done. I realy enjoyed this story. Thank you.
Great to return from hospital to so many wonderful writers and stories. I did so miss my girls!
Omg I loved this !! Thank God Byron finally got what he deserved. I was scared for Oz and Jenny at one point lol but I’m glad Tina and Tasha saved the day. I’m glad Bette found her strength too, I can imagine how difficult that must have been for her. Great job ladies ! Really looking forward to the epilogue and to your next story