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A Second Chance at Forever
Story written on September 12, 2012 by justkeepswimming.
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The remainder of the day consisted of what some would refer to as the mundane. Reading and homework. Swimming and lounging. Meal preparation and clean up. Card games and laughing. Most of life is the everyday.
Through it all, Angie quietly observed things her parents didn’t think she would notice. A smile shared across the yard. A hand that lingered on a shoulder just a fraction longer than it ever used to, even when they were putting on a show of getting along. She didn’t know quite what to make of it all, but she knew she was happy to be a witness.
Chapter 19
"We have to get going soon," Tina sighed a happy sigh as she proclaimed the verdict that the end of their evening was at hand.
They sat cross legged, facing each other with their fingertips touching along the back of the sofa, doing their best to keep a respectable distance apart while they continued to visit in the living room.
"You can stay until the movie’s over…" Bette said
Angie was in the den watching the end of the previous night’s movie on her own.
"Sure," Tina acquiesced, glancing at her watch. "It’s not that I want to leave, you know."
"Come a little closer," Bette requested as she leaned in. "We might as well take advantage of the fact that she’s occupied…"
"Careful," Tina warned, nevertheless moving closer, as had been asked of her.
"I’ve been careful all day," Bette replied. "And I want you…"
"Whisper what you want…" Tina said quietly. "She can’t hear us…"
"And she shouldn’t hear what I’m about to describe to you," Bette said. "It might scar her for life…"
Tina grasped the front of Bette’s t-shirt and pulled to have her leaning forward over her as she rested back onto the arm of the sofa.
"Who’s not being careful now?" Bette offered quietly, leaning on her arms to keep from resting the weight of her body onto Tina.
"I’m not one to wish time away, but I would like tomorrow to be Saturday already," Tina said as she reached for a kiss. Her arms rested over Bette’s shoulders, drawing her closer and kissing her deeply. Instinctually, she started moving her hips against Bette as they reclined together.
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Please, please don’t do this…
Please Please write faster!
Come on, you can’t leave us hanging!
You didn’t…
WTF?!? So not nice… finished that next chapter yet?
oh no, you didn’t…write faster and please make it good
OMFG jks!!!! this can’t be happening not when its moving in the right direction!!! I am in shock!!! Please post the nxt chapter soonnn pleaseee
This story is amazing in many ways: the adult and meaningful dialogue, the mature but exciting love exhibited by Bette and Tina, the realistic dialogue that sounds like the characters. The regret of not telling the most important people of your life how much they are loved b/c you realize that life is transitory.
Really lving it like that and possibly hving Bette die
No its just a little drama right she is ok,you can’t do this
Oh, no…my heart just dropped to the floor. I’m actually a little nervous about the next chapter. Ok…relax…maybe Bette let someone borrow her car…yeah…that’s it OR She was having a problem with her car and the dealership sent someone to get the car and left her a loaner car. PLEASE!!!!
OMG!!! Please tell me you are joking or this is a horrible dream scene. I really hope you don’t end the story this way…please let Bette be ok. Please!!!
Okay, that’s just mean.
Nasty stuff, maybe your Tina could hang out with my Tina at the residential treatment facility as I think she might have one or two issues if Bette was driving that car. Here’s hoping you’re just leading us astray.
NO,NO,NO-don`t do this.Please.
Wow! The sign of a great writer getting all those comments like that. Great reactions to your story. Yes, we all hope that Bette doesn’t die, but sometimes they do. Hope not, though… Thanks for the update.
“The injuries were more than anyone could survive…” “…without medical treatment.” Tina never heard the rest of what that policeman was saying. It might not have even been Bette in the car; it could be that whoever first targeted Bette’s car and pried out the decal decided it wasn’t enough and actually stole the entire car. Or, maybe Bette was carjacked, and is stranded somewhere in L.A. with no cell phone (because her bag would’ve been in the car – and!! why didn’t Tina call Bette’s cell to say she’d be late? Why the office?). Bette totally would’ve given up the car & bag to a carjacker anyway… as she said, it’s just stuff. It’s not so far-fetched, the car collided with a police vehicle! A high-speed chase might’ve easily led to the collision. We’ll just have to wait and see, though. I’m not mentally burying anyone until I see the next chapter, which I’m glad you’re already writing, jks. Thanks for the post! :)
OMG, jks. OMG. I’m hoping, I’m praying for a miracle that someone else was driving Bette’s car. OMG. I didn’t see this twist coming. Thank you so much for this story though.