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If only…(a continuation of ‘What ifs’)
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She wiped her tears drying them on her expensive Gucci grey pinstripe trousers that she had worn in the morning to the gallery. Bette glanced down to her silver diamond laced Movado watch—it read 8pm. Yes, that would get me there by 11pm. I hope Tina is still awake, she thought. She was at a red light when she reached for her mobile in her hand bag. Taking it out she decided against calling Tina and letting her know that she was on her way to Palm Springs. She would instead surprise her. Tina would be thrilled to see her, shocked really. She remembered the last time they had spoken on the phone. Tina had said she really wished she was there with her. Bette’s smile turned backwards when she thought about what had initially got her onto the road to Tina.
Candace a carpenter she had hired to do the set-up for the “Provocations” show had gone to a local Cuban sandwich shop near the gallery and brought her dinner. They had eaten together and had some light small talk. Bette could feel Candace undressing her with her eyes. It wasn’t till’ after she had hung up with Tina when it was confirmed that Candace was interested in her. Bette was no fool. Candace had asked who was on the phone and she had answered my girlfriend. Bette really felt like she should’ve had said partner or wife, but obviously that wouldn’t have mattered to one Candace. Candace had said “Oh” and looked down to her food again. “Is something wrong?” Bette had asked her. It was obvious that it had bothered her that Bette was seeing someone, rather had a partner. “I think I’m going to get going.” Candace said grabbing her half eaten sandwich and saying her farewells. It was when she had come back for her jacket when Bette had screwed up.
Bette banged her head on the top of the steering wheel. I can’t fucking believe that I let her kiss me! She clenched her fist. There was no excuse for her behavior. Bette shook her head closing her eyes. I should’ve told Tina all of this. She wasn’t referring to what had happened, although she was intending to tell Tina once she got to the hotel. She was however, referring to all the pent up emotions inside her. She had promised Tina the day of their commitment ceremony that she’d never hide anything from her. She had failed her.
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this is how the show should have been written… thx …pps
Damn that was awesome and love it, thank you!
I haven’t even finished reading – yet I feel compelled to tell you how much I’m GROOVING on this dialog: “”Thank you for everything.””Ti?” Bette was so scared Tina was leaving.”Thank you for telling me this. For not letting it go any farther.” ((((((((OMG))))))))) “OUR” whole world would’ve have been a *farrrr better* place,if……… those were the words and actions scripted. Instead of IC’s wonderful idea of “breaking our hearts” w/B’s infidelity! They were our “superherolesbiancouplefortheages”……… I LIKE YOURS BETTER! JUST SAYING. :) (back to the last 2 pages now!)
What bumsue said: “It would be great to bring the series back again but with the writers from this site instead of theirs. Just saying…” “It would be great to bring the series back again but with the writers from this site instead of theirs. Just saying…” and AGAIN: “It would be great to bring the series back again but with the writers from this site instead of theirs. Just saying…” ….Wouldn’t that be AWESOME! !!!!Somebody call Someone!!!! HURRY!
i don’t think i’ll be coming back soon to write so I just wanted to thank you all right now…. wow! thanks for all the love! my gf showed me at lunch on her iphone what you’ve been saying. pretty awesome! her head is massive right now, she thinks it’s all bcuz she asked me to write it *rolls eyes* LOL Anyways, always love knowing you all enjoy the writing. To BUMSUE and HELLBENT..that would so cool if writers from the site could write the show. i mean i know i have a list. COUGHS* for the drama & romance Teegirl, allyemmerson, hackgirl, endeavor sanscribe, for the funny hands down gumby! for the steamy scenes grindright and tibetter24.. oh that just got me really excited! LOL until next time…peace
…wow… I wish this was in the series ah cold shower time! THANK YOOOOOOOOUUUUUU!!!!!
Excellent thank you
Lady I wish this did happen, but unfortunately Bette is a coward and that’s she gets caught and forced to confess rather than voluntarily do the right thing. I have no respect for Bette/loser from the show but I love this Bette and majority of the Bettes written here. Thank you😘
This was one of those I wish you could continue on with the next day. Great!
As it should have been.Thank you.PPS
LadyM4A, please tell your certain lady that I said “Thank you” for her requesting you do another “What If”. I truly do wish that this had happened on the show. Your Bette…this Bette…pretty cool. And thank you too for taking the time out of school and work to post this.
Yes, If Only
Thanks for coming back to the site with another amazing story. I don’t like to pass judgement on the characters from the show as we’re all human with our foibles. The writers just didn’t get the rhythm and flow of the characters from the show as much as many of the writers from this site do. It would be great to bring the series back again but with the writers from this site instead of theirs. Just saying…
Wonderful, wonderful. Poor Alice. NOT. lol. I agree with you guys about writers from this site writing another series of L Word, it would be wonderful. But all of you left out one person for drama and romance, Kins40! The series couldn’t be written without her. Hope you are not gone from us for too long. Thank you for sharing the stories you have. Come back when you can spare the time.
This was HOT. Loved it. I always wished Bette had told Tina straight away instead of getting caught. Not only that but sleeping with her multiple times. Ugh. But in the end, they found their way back to each other.
Wow this was hot ! I loved it .. Really made my afternoon :D