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Targeted-Rizzoli & Isles/Criminal Minds Crossover
The anger and embarrassment spilled over when one of the
guys he was supposed to fight, ragged him about Rizzoli for a solid week. He put him in the hospital and no one said a
word again. And then two weeks ago she
was caught kissing Dr Isles. He was at
the Robber that night and saw what Korsak saw.
All he could see was his mother and all he heard was his father. When his father found out he had asked him
what he was going to do about it. He
challenged him to be a man, like him and confront that ***** about leading him
on.
He couldn’t, but after a date with a woman who looked like
Jane, he couldn’t stop seeing her, Jane with Dr Isles. He imagined her laughing at him and hit her
without thinking. He kept on hitting her
until she stopped laughing. When he
realized what he’d done, he dumped her, being mindful and wiping her down and
checking her clothes to make sure there was nothing noticeable with the naked
eye. Going to his father’s he told him
what he did and his father had welcomed him as a man.
Max found that he liked it, the power of life and death and
every time, he could feel Jane succumbing to him and his power. By the fifth one, he had gotten closer to
Jane. He knew she was assigned to the
case and she was looking for him. It
excited him; it thrilled him, until the ***** FBI showed up. That had thrown all his plans into the
crapper, until they showed up at his father’s house.
He had her at his mercy, he wanted her to suffer by having
her watch as he beat the blonde FBI Agent to death but she fought him. He had fought her like his father said, like
a man and she had fought back equally.
It was unexpected and when he left her lying there, his father had to
stop him. He could wait, he had her now
and he had perfected his striking, had developed his killing blows. What had happened next was beyond his
understanding. The blonde had challenged
him and she got her shots in. His
father’s laughter pissed him off and egged him on. When he had the blonde down
he saw the helpless look on Jane’s face and it had thrilled him to his
core. And then Jane had exploded at
him. She had managed to surprise him
briefly and when he had her again, the ***** blonde had stabbed his
father. All thought had left him as he
realized his father was gone and it was Jane’s fault again. He had picked her up ready to drive her ribs
into her heart but had only been able to get one shot in before they had all
***** shown up.



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