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    Story written on July 11, 2009 by love.
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    Spinning merrily.  Young kids and teenagers occupy the horses and benches.  A tough group of "SURF NAZIS" also ride.  "My Beach, My Wave" on their

    T-shirts.

     

    The LOST kids enter the carousel house.  Cool kids in dis-

    tinctive dress.  Compelling; not threatening.  They are

    aiden, liam, PAUL, luke; Aiden the obvious leader.

     

    max, the head Surf Nazi, sits in one of the carousel’s

    benches with his arm around his girl, SHELLY.  He thinks

    he’s King of the Boardwalk.. And doesn’t like it one bit

    when Shelly casts an appreciative glance toward Aiden.

     

    Aiden smiles back at her.  Not flirting, just being chi-

    valrous.  max scowls and takes his anger out on Paul by

    tripping him as he goes by.  An insult… a shove.  Aiden

    joins Paul.  Surf Nazis join max .  The Lost kids close

    ranks.  A major melee seems ready to erupt, when the ugly

    end of a nightstick is shoved against his Adam’s apple.

    A three hundred pound security GUARD is at the other end.

    The ride suddenly ends. 

     

                  GUARD

           I told you to stay off the boardwalk.

     

    For an endless moment Aiden’s and the Guard’s eyes lock

    in mortal combat.  Neither one willing to give ground.

    Then Aiden  smiles.

     

                  Aiden

           Come on, let’s guys.

     

    The Lost kids begin to leave as the Guard turns to max

    and the Surf Nazis.

                  GUARD

           You too, off the boardwalk.  And

           don’t come back!

     

    max and the Surf Nazis grumble and leave.  There is

    bad blood between them and the Lost kids, but both groups

    hate the Security Guard more.

     

    . BOARDWALK – NIGHT

     

     

            LARGE, EMPTY PARKING LOT                  4

     

    The Security Guard approaches his lone car carrying his

    lunch pail.  Deadly quiet.

     

    VAMPIRE POV SHOT

     

    Zooming down on the Guard.  A rush of air.  High-pitched

    SCREECHING.  WHISPERING VOICES.

     

    THE GUARD

     

    looks up — reacts for a split second — and then he’s

    gone — pulled UPWARD OUT OF FRAME so fast, he’s just a

    blur.  Only his lunch box — bouncing on the pavement

    – remains behind.

     

    Clown faces bobbing.  Dark images in the carousel.

     

    DESERTED BEACH – NIGHT                

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    1. hey ive really liked all your writing but this story was split up really oddly and really hard to read so i didnt finish it, but id gladly read it if fixed

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