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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 15)
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After feeding Benny and taking him for a pretty lengthy walk, I sat down with a bunch of my files and started to do some work. I wasn’t at all behind on anything, but part of me felt like I had to do at least a little bit of work everyday… I guess you could consider it my nicotine. No sooner had I sat down, though, when my phone began to ring.
“Hey Ash,” I said, after checking my caller ID.
“Hi Spence,” she replied. “Okay, so here’s the story. We have reservations at Nobu at 8:30… am I good or what?”
“Nobu? Like… the original one?”
“Yup!”
“Wow… yeah… you’re good!” I told her.
“So I was thinking that I could get ready and then come over to your place… that way there’s no chance of me getting lost on the way over there.”
“Of course! I’m just doing some work now, but come over whenever you’re ready.”
“Alright. See you later!”
“Bye Ash.”
As I hung up, I sat back in my seat and tried to think about what I was doing. It was painfully obvious that there was still something there between us, regardless of our past, the distance, our jobs, and anything else that was going against us or had gone against us before (which was a relatively significant list by itself). She still had the ability to make me happier than I’d been in years, something that seemed to come rather effortlessly for her. When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again. And while I couldn’t be sure, I had the suspicion that she didn’t mind being around me all that much either.
More confused than ever and unable to focus, I put away my work and decided to get ready. I figured I should wear what Ashley had bought me, combining it with one of the few short skirts I had saved from college. I applied some more makeup and, twenty minutes later, I was ready. Almost as if it were on cue, the doorbell rang. I didn’t even try to hide my smile as I walked over to open it. Ashley was there, looking great as always.
“Hey,” I greeted her, moving behind the door so she could get in.
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and a happy thanksgiving to you too! :)!
awesome….nuff said!!
*Corkscrews cape a’flying* Woah, what a does. Our emotions can get the best of us sometimes. I suppose its a good thing that i’m Superman and c-can’t g-g-get d-d-distract–ed b-by some-some–thing li-like beau-beautiful wri-writin-g. I smell kryptonite. M’lady, i need to fly away, while I can still stand *swoosh*
Yay they finally kissed =] I have a feeling things might get a little more complicated now. Great chapter! Update soon!
God damn. You are good. It’s hard to believe a normal person can write like that. Have you been biten by a radioactive spider lately? Been exposed to toxic chemicals? I don’t know what to think. Of course if you WERE biten and became super human that would be cool. And it would explain the phenonmanal writing. But I bet you’d be able to write a great story with out the help of some tiny arachnid. Please keep posting. Please. I need you to. It’s a passion, a craving, an urge. Post, post, post! Please/ And I do realize I sound super needy. Even more needy than Spencer. That girl is desperate for Ashley like I’m desperate for an update. Love you. Thx in advance. =)
Uh. Was a simple kiss supposed to make my heart beat three times faster. I must remember never to read your stories hooked up to a heart monitor or I may find myself booked in for a pacemaker operation. I would like to say that I saw barely_breathing’s name on the comment and thought, ‘yup, i’m barely breathing’. You are amazing. This line in particular, caught my eye: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” Nice shout out to the story name, and yes, we noticed :) You’re winding me up in this story and it’s getting tighter. Is it too much to ask for more kisses? I know you’ll deliver :) LOVE YOUR WORK!
okay.definitely the best way to go.lovelovelove
(^o^)/ wow !! my heart just went 3 times faster !! specially te moment Spence & Ash kissed !! luv it !! Post Post, plz Post soon….
*refocuses eyes and picks jaw up off the floor* Alright, so during that entire post I was crouched about 3 inches away from my computer screen. Amazing how your writing keeps doing that. Awesome stuff.
Loving this chapter! And gutted I haven’t read the previous ones and its to late to now :( but i will soon! pms! :)
and a happy thanksgiving to you too! :)!
awesome….nuff said!!
*Corkscrews cape a’flying* Woah, what a does. Our emotions can get the best of us sometimes. I suppose its a good thing that i’m Superman and c-can’t g-g-get d-d-distract–ed b-by some-some–thing li-like beau-beautiful wri-writin-g. I smell kryptonite. M’lady, i need to fly away, while I can still stand *swoosh*
Yay they finally kissed =] I have a feeling things might get a little more complicated now. Great chapter! Update soon!
God damn. You are good. It’s hard to believe a normal person can write like that. Have you been biten by a radioactive spider lately? Been exposed to toxic chemicals? I don’t know what to think. Of course if you WERE biten and became super human that would be cool. And it would explain the phenonmanal writing. But I bet you’d be able to write a great story with out the help of some tiny arachnid. Please keep posting. Please. I need you to. It’s a passion, a craving, an urge. Post, post, post! Please/ And I do realize I sound super needy. Even more needy than Spencer. That girl is desperate for Ashley like I’m desperate for an update. Love you. Thx in advance. =)
Uh. Was a simple kiss supposed to make my heart beat three times faster. I must remember never to read your stories hooked up to a heart monitor or I may find myself booked in for a pacemaker operation. I would like to say that I saw barely_breathing’s name on the comment and thought, ‘yup, i’m barely breathing’. You are amazing. This line in particular, caught my eye: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” Nice shout out to the story name, and yes, we noticed :) You’re winding me up in this story and it’s getting tighter. Is it too much to ask for more kisses? I know you’ll deliver :) LOVE YOUR WORK!
okay.definitely the best way to go.lovelovelove
(^o^)/ wow !! my heart just went 3 times faster !! specially te moment Spence & Ash kissed !! luv it !! Post Post, plz Post soon….
*refocuses eyes and picks jaw up off the floor* Alright, so during that entire post I was crouched about 3 inches away from my computer screen. Amazing how your writing keeps doing that. Awesome stuff.
Loving this chapter! And gutted I haven’t read the previous ones and its to late to now :( but i will soon! pms! :)
They finally kissed. Now i want them to get there freak on and keep it on. PMs
They finally kissed. Now i want them to get there freak on and keep it on. PMs
ohh they should so find a way to be together cos they are so meant to be with each other. and i absolutely love this line as well: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” just sensational!! PMS!!!
ohh they should so find a way to be together cos they are so meant to be with each other. and i absolutely love this line as well: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” just sensational!! PMS!!!
I AM SOOO HAPPY!!!! I am glad that you updated this story and I can’t wait to see what you will do next!!!! PMS and I do hope that you had a GREAT THANKSGIVING!!!!
I AM SOOO HAPPY!!!! I am glad that you updated this story and I can’t wait to see what you will do next!!!! PMS and I do hope that you had a GREAT THANKSGIVING!!!!