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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 15)
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“Oh yeah,” was all I could say. Luckily, the cab pulled up in front of the restaurant and I quickly slipped the driver the appropriate amount of money. “I’m glad you let me pay for that.”
“Yeah, well then I’m paying for dinner,” she smirked.
“No you’re not. We’re splitting it.”
“Nuh uh.”
“We’ll see!” I told her.
“Is that a threat, Miss Carlin?”
“Perhaps.” She grinned and then planted an unexpected kiss on my cheek. Okay…
As it turns out, Ashley was in a strangely affectionate mood tonight. The set-up of the table must have helped, since we were right next to one another, facing outwards. Every so often, she would just lean over and put her head on my shoulder for a few moments or if I said something funny, she would tilt her forehead into my cheek, laughing awkwardly in that position… sometimes she would kiss my cheek briefly when she pulled away. I wasn’t really sure how to react to this. On the one hand, my stomach got butterflies every time we made such contact… on the other hand, with every such occasion of contact, my confusion levels increased tenfold. Long distance relationships were not exactly our strong points, and Ashley had basically told me earlier that she would never let herself just have sex with me if she knew we weren’t going to see each other for awhile afterwards.
When we had finished dinner (which was basically the best food I’ve ever eaten before), we got into a cab and both headed back to my apartment. Ashley insisted that since we weren’t going to a club, she was going to make me stay up just as late. We took Benny out, much as we had done the night before. Only this time, Ashley refrained from smoking.
“I’m glad you’re quitting,” I told her as we went back up to my apartment.
“I’m glad you’re glad.”
“When did you start?”
“Smoking?” she questioned.
“Yeah.”
“Oh, I don’t know. I guess in rehab, but I mean, I’d smoked before then… just not, you know, like I needed it or anything. But in rehab it kind of took the place of all the other shit I was on,” she explained. We entered the foyer and I took Benny’s leash off, allowing him to roam around the apartment.
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and a happy thanksgiving to you too! :)!
awesome….nuff said!!
*Corkscrews cape a’flying* Woah, what a does. Our emotions can get the best of us sometimes. I suppose its a good thing that i’m Superman and c-can’t g-g-get d-d-distract–ed b-by some-some–thing li-like beau-beautiful wri-writin-g. I smell kryptonite. M’lady, i need to fly away, while I can still stand *swoosh*
Yay they finally kissed =] I have a feeling things might get a little more complicated now. Great chapter! Update soon!
God damn. You are good. It’s hard to believe a normal person can write like that. Have you been biten by a radioactive spider lately? Been exposed to toxic chemicals? I don’t know what to think. Of course if you WERE biten and became super human that would be cool. And it would explain the phenonmanal writing. But I bet you’d be able to write a great story with out the help of some tiny arachnid. Please keep posting. Please. I need you to. It’s a passion, a craving, an urge. Post, post, post! Please/ And I do realize I sound super needy. Even more needy than Spencer. That girl is desperate for Ashley like I’m desperate for an update. Love you. Thx in advance. =)
Uh. Was a simple kiss supposed to make my heart beat three times faster. I must remember never to read your stories hooked up to a heart monitor or I may find myself booked in for a pacemaker operation. I would like to say that I saw barely_breathing’s name on the comment and thought, ‘yup, i’m barely breathing’. You are amazing. This line in particular, caught my eye: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” Nice shout out to the story name, and yes, we noticed :) You’re winding me up in this story and it’s getting tighter. Is it too much to ask for more kisses? I know you’ll deliver :) LOVE YOUR WORK!
okay.definitely the best way to go.lovelovelove
(^o^)/ wow !! my heart just went 3 times faster !! specially te moment Spence & Ash kissed !! luv it !! Post Post, plz Post soon….
*refocuses eyes and picks jaw up off the floor* Alright, so during that entire post I was crouched about 3 inches away from my computer screen. Amazing how your writing keeps doing that. Awesome stuff.
Loving this chapter! And gutted I haven’t read the previous ones and its to late to now :( but i will soon! pms! :)
and a happy thanksgiving to you too! :)!
awesome….nuff said!!
*Corkscrews cape a’flying* Woah, what a does. Our emotions can get the best of us sometimes. I suppose its a good thing that i’m Superman and c-can’t g-g-get d-d-distract–ed b-by some-some–thing li-like beau-beautiful wri-writin-g. I smell kryptonite. M’lady, i need to fly away, while I can still stand *swoosh*
Yay they finally kissed =] I have a feeling things might get a little more complicated now. Great chapter! Update soon!
God damn. You are good. It’s hard to believe a normal person can write like that. Have you been biten by a radioactive spider lately? Been exposed to toxic chemicals? I don’t know what to think. Of course if you WERE biten and became super human that would be cool. And it would explain the phenonmanal writing. But I bet you’d be able to write a great story with out the help of some tiny arachnid. Please keep posting. Please. I need you to. It’s a passion, a craving, an urge. Post, post, post! Please/ And I do realize I sound super needy. Even more needy than Spencer. That girl is desperate for Ashley like I’m desperate for an update. Love you. Thx in advance. =)
Uh. Was a simple kiss supposed to make my heart beat three times faster. I must remember never to read your stories hooked up to a heart monitor or I may find myself booked in for a pacemaker operation. I would like to say that I saw barely_breathing’s name on the comment and thought, ‘yup, i’m barely breathing’. You are amazing. This line in particular, caught my eye: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” Nice shout out to the story name, and yes, we noticed :) You’re winding me up in this story and it’s getting tighter. Is it too much to ask for more kisses? I know you’ll deliver :) LOVE YOUR WORK!
okay.definitely the best way to go.lovelovelove
(^o^)/ wow !! my heart just went 3 times faster !! specially te moment Spence & Ash kissed !! luv it !! Post Post, plz Post soon….
*refocuses eyes and picks jaw up off the floor* Alright, so during that entire post I was crouched about 3 inches away from my computer screen. Amazing how your writing keeps doing that. Awesome stuff.
Loving this chapter! And gutted I haven’t read the previous ones and its to late to now :( but i will soon! pms! :)
They finally kissed. Now i want them to get there freak on and keep it on. PMs
They finally kissed. Now i want them to get there freak on and keep it on. PMs
ohh they should so find a way to be together cos they are so meant to be with each other. and i absolutely love this line as well: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” just sensational!! PMS!!!
ohh they should so find a way to be together cos they are so meant to be with each other. and i absolutely love this line as well: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” just sensational!! PMS!!!
I AM SOOO HAPPY!!!! I am glad that you updated this story and I can’t wait to see what you will do next!!!! PMS and I do hope that you had a GREAT THANKSGIVING!!!!
I AM SOOO HAPPY!!!! I am glad that you updated this story and I can’t wait to see what you will do next!!!! PMS and I do hope that you had a GREAT THANKSGIVING!!!!