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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 24)
“Then I think you should go,” he declared. “Is there something else bugging you?”
“I guess. I mean… the first visit went so well. I’m just… I’m worried about what would happen if this one didn’t.”
“Spence, the ‘quit while you’re ahead’ philosophy applies to sports and casinos… not relationships. I think Ashley would love for you to come for her birthday.”
“You’re right,” I told him.
“I’m a dad; I’m always right.”
“Except when you’re wrong!” I joked.
“I see I raised a funny one!” he said with a laugh.
“You did,” I replied. “So… I’ll see you next weekend.”
“Can’t wait. Bye, Spence.”
“Bye Dad.”
After this call, I felt a bit more confident. I grabbed my credit card and booked the flights on my laptop. Second step down. Now, all I needed to do was tell Ashley. Should I tell Ashley, actually? I thought about it for a bit and came to the conclusion that maybe it would seem more special if I surprised her. In order to do that, though, I’d need to get Aiden in on it.
“Hello?”
“Aiden, I booked the flights,” I told him, not bothering with a greeting. “I’m going next Friday and coming back on Tuesday.”
“Sweet! Man, Ash is gonna freak when you tell her!”
“I’m not telling her, and you’re not either.”
“What do you mean?” he asked. Not exactly the brightest in the bunch…
“I want it to be a surprise. Or do you think that’s dumb?”
“No, that sounds killer, Spence. She’ll love it. Let me guess… you need my help?”
“Would you?”
“Of course,” he told me. “Whatever you need me to do, just let me know. I leave for L.A. on Tuesday.”
“Thanks. Well, I don’t really have a plan right now, but you’ll be the first to know when I do. And the only to know. Don’t tell Michelle, Aiden.”
“Why not?”
“Because she’ll tell Ashley, without fail. If I’m gonna surprise her, I want it to be a real surprise,” I insisted. “Promise you won’t tell her?”
“I promise.”
“Thank you, Aiden. I’ll let you know what’s going on soon.”
“No problem. Later, Spence.”
My mind was spinning. Just this morning, I was thinking about how unhappy I was again, and now I was planning my surprise visit for Ashley’s birthday. Speaking of which, what should I do? Should I go all out? No, Ashley doesn’t really like extravagance, especially when it comes to her birthdays. Besides, I think flying across the country is enough of an “all out” thing to compensate. Maybe it should just be simple. Whatever. I had time to think it over.
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babaluna says
hey….you need to post more! i absolutely love your fanfic….I started reading it about a couple of days ago and I am completely hooked! Can’t wait for the next post!
jazzy89 says
OMG!!!!!!!! Update right now!!! I can’t wait to see what happens, will it be happy and smutty ;) or will it be filled with angst and drama if spencer catches ashley doing something she shouldn’t? I cannot wait. You are doing a great job, keep it up!!!! PMS
cheeralstar13 says
Yay!!! PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NotTwinny says
OMG, i’m freeaking out right now. you are the awesomest in all things suspenseful. I’m hooked and I can’t believe you left me hanging at the best aprt. OMG I’m so excited for this visit. SO SO SO excited. Please update soon. I’m in some serious need ofr kozmic FanFic. Serious NEED~! I love you, please update tonite, that would be killer~! Love ya yayyayaya! WOOT. I’m on a “Spencer surprising Ashley” HIGH! ?Neato!!!!
hdgallant says
Wow i`m so glad spencer is flying to see ashley. Ashley is going to be so happy. Cant wait to see what happens next. PMS
carlymarie82 says
YYYYAAAAYYYY! I love the update….you’re driving me crazy, though. I can’t wait until they see each other again. Its been too long. This can’t go on forever. and with Aiden going home for a while, Spencer will be really lonely and depressed in NY by herself. PMS PLEASE PLEASE……I still don’t like Carrie. I dunno why….She doesn’t even come off as curious anymore. I just don’t like her. And if she thinks about moving on Spencer, I hope Benny swallows her! Ok, I should stop hating on Carrie because she hasn’t done anything wrong.
damaged says
Here I am again, waiting with baited breath.
dddisfunctional says
moremoremoremore. seriously, i am so addicted its not even funny.
babaluna says
hey….you need to post more! i absolutely love your fanfic….I started reading it about a couple of days ago and I am completely hooked! Can’t wait for the next post!
jazzy89 says
OMG!!!!!!!! Update right now!!! I can’t wait to see what happens, will it be happy and smutty ;) or will it be filled with angst and drama if spencer catches ashley doing something she shouldn’t? I cannot wait. You are doing a great job, keep it up!!!! PMS
cheeralstar13 says
Yay!!! PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NotTwinny says
OMG, i’m freeaking out right now. you are the awesomest in all things suspenseful. I’m hooked and I can’t believe you left me hanging at the best aprt. OMG I’m so excited for this visit. SO SO SO excited. Please update soon. I’m in some serious need ofr kozmic FanFic. Serious NEED~! I love you, please update tonite, that would be killer~! Love ya yayyayaya! WOOT. I’m on a “Spencer surprising Ashley” HIGH! ?Neato!!!!
hdgallant says
Wow i`m so glad spencer is flying to see ashley. Ashley is going to be so happy. Cant wait to see what happens next. PMS
carlymarie82 says
YYYYAAAAYYYY! I love the update….you’re driving me crazy, though. I can’t wait until they see each other again. Its been too long. This can’t go on forever. and with Aiden going home for a while, Spencer will be really lonely and depressed in NY by herself. PMS PLEASE PLEASE……I still don’t like Carrie. I dunno why….She doesn’t even come off as curious anymore. I just don’t like her. And if she thinks about moving on Spencer, I hope Benny swallows her! Ok, I should stop hating on Carrie because she hasn’t done anything wrong.
damaged says
Here I am again, waiting with baited breath.
dddisfunctional says
moremoremoremore. seriously, i am so addicted its not even funny.
slayerfan101 says
woohoo way to go spencer!! i’m so jolly happy she’s going to see ashley and surprise her!! totally wonderful and cant wait to read when they meet up!! :)
slayerfan101 says
woohoo way to go spencer!! i’m so jolly happy she’s going to see ashley and surprise her!! totally wonderful and cant wait to read when they meet up!! :)
_barely_breathing_ says
Yay spence is going to visit ashley and for her birthday! Great chapter! Update soon!
_barely_breathing_ says
Yay spence is going to visit ashley and for her birthday! Great chapter! Update soon!
bannerman says
I’m lovin’ it *queue JT girly, high pitched ‘do’s*. Please please let the surprise go well – I don’t want the surprise to be on Spencer when she gets there and finds some random girl clutching onto Ashley, giving her a very happy birthday, if you get what I mean ;-) oh and don’t be a meany – post soon :-D Jx
bannerman says
I’m lovin’ it *queue JT girly, high pitched ‘do’s*. Please please let the surprise go well – I don’t want the surprise to be on Spencer when she gets there and finds some random girl clutching onto Ashley, giving her a very happy birthday, if you get what I mean ;-) oh and don’t be a meany – post soon :-D Jx
tylo says
great pms
tylo says
great pms
rockingirl says
It’s going to be Friday for the next chapter? Can’t wait!
rockingirl says
It’s going to be Friday for the next chapter? Can’t wait!
ngasi_lei says
*swooshes cape* i know i’ve been away for a while, but i promise i did go back and leave a paper trail behind me. This is superb Spencer Carlin Carpe Diem Girl! Yes! I swear that kids from Krypton. *swoosh*
ngasi_lei says
*swooshes cape* i know i’ve been away for a while, but i promise i did go back and leave a paper trail behind me. This is superb Spencer Carlin Carpe Diem Girl! Yes! I swear that kids from Krypton. *swoosh*