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    Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 43)

    The courtyard ended being nicer than Ashley had made it out to be. There were a number of floral arrangements and a bunch of shrubs and trees surrounding a couple benches and chairs. From the area, you could see a vast expanse of fields and forests.

    “So this is Ohio, huh?” Ashley said.

    “Yup. I grew up about 40 minutes from here.”

    “Really? Tell me it was closer to the city…”

    “Nope, further,” I laughed.

    “Gross. So you were, like, a real redneck then?”

    “No! Just because it’s not near a city doesn’t mean its hillbilly country. Besides, this is Ohio, not Alabama.”

    “What’s the difference?” she teased.

    “You’re crazy!”

    “I’d rather be crazy than be a redneck.” I laughed and led her over to a bench. She took a seat and before I could sit next to her, she pulled me down onto her lap. She wrapped her arms around me from behind and I leaned back into the embrace, thoroughly comfortable. “So does your decision to move to L.A. have anything to do with your near-death experience the other day?”

    “Yeah,” I admitted.

    “Oh.”

    “Not in a bad way though, Ash. I really do want to get back to L.A. There’s nothing for me in New York anymore… and there’s everything in L.A. The flight just kind of helped me put things into perspective more.”

    “Yeah, me too.”

    “How so?”

    “Well, when I was flying over here, I couldn’t stop thinking about how… I might never get the chance to see you again… you know?”

    “Yeah,” I nodded.

    “And I told myself that if you were okay, things would have to change between us. Not in a bad way or anything… just… in a different way. I was actually thinking of just moving to New York or something.”

    “You were?”

    “Yeah… I mean, it wouldn’t be my first choice, but I’d do it if I had to,” she told me. I gave her a smile at that. She’d never lived anywhere but L.A. Leaving it would be like leaving her life behind, and I would never ask her to do that.

    “You’d leave L.A. for me?”

    “Well, yeah,” she said, matter-of-factly. “But please don’t make me?” I laughed and kissed her lightly.

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    1. I loved Saved by the Bell back in the day. Oh who am I kidding? I still do, reruns are the best. Interesting development with Ashley needing to call her sponsor. Kind of puts Ashley’s issues into perspective. I can see why Spencer was a little uneasy about Ashley’s sudden change in heart but I do think the plane crash straightened both of their priorities. I definitely think you should continue this story. I feel like there is a lot more of this story you could tell. It would be so interesting to see your perspective on their relationship between Spencer and Ashley once Spencer moves to LA. Things aren’t going to be sunshine and roses for them right away but I don’t know if they realize that yet. They were apart for a lot of years and there are a lot of things they don’t really know about it each now so it would be interesting to explore that. For example, Ashley calling her Spencer kind of reminded Spencer that Ashley does have issues. Basically, I feel like this story still has some mileage left in it. As long as you keep writing though, I will be happy. Another great update Kozmic!

    2. At the risk of making myself look like a total stalker, there was one more thing I wanted to say. Spencer and Ashley are not really “official” yet. Ashley has not agreed to being in a relationship. Maybe she thinks asking Spencer to move in with her qualifies as saying she wants to be in a relationship but if I were Spencer, I would need to have the “official” conversation. Just my thoughts.

    3. i love panera and i love saved by the bell, so i officially love you for mentioning both in the same update. and please please continue your story. i can easily see how you would wrap it up, but it’s definitely not necessary!! this story can keep going…there’s so much more you can write. besides, it’s one of the few stories left that have any sort of continuity. i love that it’s more than just a quick fix.

    4. this was a great update. i personally think that you should keep it going. if you ended it soon it would just be..not really complete for me. like the others said there is a lot to explore once spencer moves back. i can really see a lot coming from this story and i think ending it soon without exploring the potential wouldnt do this story justice. i am totally in love with this story tho, you are really amazing.

    5. I loved Saved by the Bell back in the day. Oh who am I kidding? I still do, reruns are the best. Interesting development with Ashley needing to call her sponsor. Kind of puts Ashley’s issues into perspective. I can see why Spencer was a little uneasy about Ashley’s sudden change in heart but I do think the plane crash straightened both of their priorities. I definitely think you should continue this story. I feel like there is a lot more of this story you could tell. It would be so interesting to see your perspective on their relationship between Spencer and Ashley once Spencer moves to LA. Things aren’t going to be sunshine and roses for them right away but I don’t know if they realize that yet. They were apart for a lot of years and there are a lot of things they don’t really know about it each now so it would be interesting to explore that. For example, Ashley calling her Spencer kind of reminded Spencer that Ashley does have issues. Basically, I feel like this story still has some mileage left in it. As long as you keep writing though, I will be happy. Another great update Kozmic!

    6. At the risk of making myself look like a total stalker, there was one more thing I wanted to say. Spencer and Ashley are not really “official” yet. Ashley has not agreed to being in a relationship. Maybe she thinks asking Spencer to move in with her qualifies as saying she wants to be in a relationship but if I were Spencer, I would need to have the “official” conversation. Just my thoughts.

    7. i love panera and i love saved by the bell, so i officially love you for mentioning both in the same update. and please please continue your story. i can easily see how you would wrap it up, but it’s definitely not necessary!! this story can keep going…there’s so much more you can write. besides, it’s one of the few stories left that have any sort of continuity. i love that it’s more than just a quick fix.

    8. this was a great update. i personally think that you should keep it going. if you ended it soon it would just be..not really complete for me. like the others said there is a lot to explore once spencer moves back. i can really see a lot coming from this story and i think ending it soon without exploring the potential wouldnt do this story justice. i am totally in love with this story tho, you are really amazing.

    9. Great Chapter! Although i have a feeling Spencer might get a little more snappy towards Ashley before she has recovered completely! And you added Saved by the bell, i use to love that show lol You should def continue this story for as long as you feel it’s going somewhere. Update soon!

    10. Great Chapter! Although i have a feeling Spencer might get a little more snappy towards Ashley before she has recovered completely! And you added Saved by the bell, i use to love that show lol You should def continue this story for as long as you feel it’s going somewhere. Update soon!

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