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Diary of Jane
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Something’s getting in the way
Something’s just about to break
I will try to find my place in the diary of Jane
As I burn another page
As I look the other way
I still try to find my place in the diary of Jane
So tell me how it should be
I have to look away as I throw another page into the cracking fire. I remember I time when you were writing in that little diary. We were secretly dating and I came over to your house to get “tutored”. You mother would have killed me if she knew what we really doing in there.
I burn another page upon remembering. The acid burns my throat as I turn sick again. I rush the last page and then let the leather exterior stay free from flames. I quickly throw it on the rug as I rush to the bathroom. I hang my head over the toilet and hold my curls back as I gag out everything I had. As I was finished, I clumsily lift myself up and grab the rag off of the counter. I fill the rinsing cup off the white, wooden surface and fill it with water to rinse the taste from my mouth.
Did you love me when you were alive? Honestly, because you didn’t show it. You didn’t write it in the one place you put your most inner thoughts.
Desperate I will crawl
Waiting for so long
No love, there is no love
Die for anyone
What have I become?
I walk into the hall and I see a picture of us hanging on the wall. You are there leaning against a tree and I am next to you with my arm behind you as I kiss your cheek gently. I look closer to the glass covering the photo and as if reflections danced behind me, I see that day. I see us.
“Hey, let’s get a picture.” Spencer said as she pulled a camera from her purse.
“Babe, we are alone in the woods with no one around. Who is going to take the picture? Mother nature?” Ashley said with a giggle as she stayed wrapped up in her sweater trying to stay warm.
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Tease that was so beautiful. You really have a gift at writting. I admire you so much. You write with so much emotions. Wonderful job.
wow that was some pretty powerful stuff. Your writing gets better and better every time, that one was tugging at my little heart strings! It’s still sad at the end though – bittersweet!
Tease that was so beautiful. You really have a gift at writting. I admire you so much. You write with so much emotions. Wonderful job.
wow that was some pretty powerful stuff. Your writing gets better and better every time, that one was tugging at my little heart strings! It’s still sad at the end though – bittersweet!
wow. peanut. that is the best thing you’ve written yet. I loved it. (glad you never told us how she died) what emotions you’ve brought up in me. that was fantastic. and i’m talking in circles cause the head/stomaches are taking over. but know that i loved this.
wow. peanut. that is the best thing you’ve written yet. I loved it. (glad you never told us how she died) what emotions you’ve brought up in me. that was fantastic. and i’m talking in circles cause the head/stomaches are taking over. but know that i loved this.
GAH! Halfway through i was CONVINCED it was going to end up being Ash’s dad. But no, you had to kill Spencer. GAH! You made me sad! You little bugger! You write too well now, go back to the way you used to write when you didn’t stir my emotions damn you. *throws hands in air* WHAT HAVE WE CREATED??
GAH! Halfway through i was CONVINCED it was going to end up being Ash’s dad. But no, you had to kill Spencer. GAH! You made me sad! You little bugger! You write too well now, go back to the way you used to write when you didn’t stir my emotions damn you. *throws hands in air* WHAT HAVE WE CREATED??
Omg, that was so deep…very emotional…well done hon=)
Omg, that was so deep…very emotional…well done hon=)
Wow that was deep i liked that one a lot thank you for a graet story
Wow that was deep i liked that one a lot thank you for a graet story
This story was emotionally exhausting for me. I love every second of it. I didn’t exactly like that Spencer was dead but I guess thats the way it is. And BTW, I really love that song. Breaking Benjamin is an awesome band.
This story was emotionally exhausting for me. I love every second of it. I didn’t exactly like that Spencer was dead but I guess thats the way it is. And BTW, I really love that song. Breaking Benjamin is an awesome band.
haha, clomle is so right, i thought it was your dad at first too., fgnre uigbi trg. and you know exactly how to make us completely devistated or estatic, and its not fair!
haha, clomle is so right, i thought it was your dad at first too., fgnre uigbi trg. and you know exactly how to make us completely devistated or estatic, and its not fair!
well i dont know what to say that hasnt been said already. but its was fantastic, magnificent peanut. i love your writing. :] and you of course peanut.
well i dont know what to say that hasnt been said already. but its was fantastic, magnificent peanut. i love your writing. :] and you of course peanut.
stylo you’ve got that song stick in my head now and i love it! this is an amazing and utterly sensational piece of writing. you brought out the sadness perfectly and yet still managed to end it on a beautiful note.
stylo you’ve got that song stick in my head now and i love it! this is an amazing and utterly sensational piece of writing. you brought out the sadness perfectly and yet still managed to end it on a beautiful note.