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Don’t Cry Out.
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“You should probably leave. If you need a ride home, I can give you one.”
Silence followed. Spencer frowned, sitting up fully as Ashley gathered her clothes for her and handed them over. “What do you mean?”
Ashley groaned slightly, holding her head as if frustrated or angry. “It was a one-night thing, okay? I’ll take you home, and then that’s it. It’s over.”
…With no conditions.
The blonde started pulling on her clothes, and could feel herself becoming upset. She was half-dressed when she finally spoke again, looking up at Ashley with a concerned and worried look on her face.
“Did I do something wrong?”
Ashley frowned. “No. I just…don’t do relationships.”
The blonde bit her lip, putting on the last bit of clothing; her shirt. It had felt so right, so wonderful, and now she had to give all that up? Just one night of bliss before being tossed back into the fiery pits of hell?
Reluctantly, Spencer stood, feeling stupid, used, and utterly confused, and whispered, “Take me home.”
I needed you to notice…
That’s all I wanted.
Spencer was crying, now. The memory’s resurfacing had brought back every pain she’d ever known, and she couldn’t stop any of the tears that spilled forth. She knew, now, that she’d never get to sleep.
How could the girl have done that to her? She now shuddered whenever she thought of her, or anything that had to do with her, but, like when Ashley touched her, she wasn’t sure if she were pleased or repulsed at the thought of the girl. It was a love-hate relationship, without the relationship. It was Spencer’s love-hate one-night stand.
As she choked out another cry, Spencer finally added something to her list of vows.
She would never do that to anyone, ever. Not like Ashley had done to her.
Don’t cry out.
Cease Fire.
In an attempt to get some sleep, Spencer pushed all negative thoughts from her mind. That, she was good at. Instead, she replayed in her mind the wonderful night she remembered. Her one night of bliss, before being tossed back into the fiery pits of hell.
Ten,
Nine,
Eight,
And I’m breaking away.
I’m all dressed up, and I’m ready to play.
Seven,
Six,
Five,
Four,
And I’m all over you.
Counting
Three,
Two,
One,
And I’m having fun…
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Hey,Are you going to finish this story? Please finish because I can’t believe Ashley was so cruel. It makes you wonder if she would’ve done that if she met Spencer that way. Because she cut alot of girl’s off after sex…I think. But, please finish this or have some sweet girl kiss Spencer and make her feel better. I al most cried because this is how my first time was;(You made me wanna cry on a friday! How mean! PMS PLS
Hey,Are you going to finish this story? Please finish because I can’t believe Ashley was so cruel. It makes you wonder if she would’ve done that if she met Spencer that way. Because she cut alot of girl’s off after sex…I think. But, please finish this or have some sweet girl kiss Spencer and make her feel better. I al most cried because this is how my first time was;(You made me wanna cry on a friday! How mean! PMS PLS
OMG! You’ve got to continue. You’re going to contiue right? You’d better! =) This was a really good post. One of the better ones, actually.
you have to continue this ash that was mean longer
you have to continue this ash that was mean longer
Okay, so I left a big long comment and it got eaten. I’ll try again…. So, this was fabulous. If you choose to continue, great, but if you don’t, I understand. This fic is perfect as it stands. You capture each character and their actions perfectly. Poor Spencer – not understanding what she wants until she gets it with someone who is really perfect for her, but they’ll never know. And, though it went unspoken in this fic, poor Ashley. We know she’s hurting inside, too. If only she would’ve opened her eyes and seen Spence for what she is. Their love was so close, yet so distant. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I love it.
Hey,Are you going to finish this story? Please finish because I can’t believe Ashley was so cruel. It makes you wonder if she would’ve done that if she met Spencer that way. Because she cut alot of girl’s off after sex…I think. But, please finish this or have some sweet girl kiss Spencer and make her feel better. I al most cried because this is how my first time was;(You made me wanna cry on a friday! How mean! PMS PLS
Hey,Are you going to finish this story? Please finish because I can’t believe Ashley was so cruel. It makes you wonder if she would’ve done that if she met Spencer that way. Because she cut alot of girl’s off after sex…I think. But, please finish this or have some sweet girl kiss Spencer and make her feel better. I al most cried because this is how my first time was;(You made me wanna cry on a friday! How mean! PMS PLS
OMG! You’ve got to continue. You’re going to contiue right? You’d better! =) This was a really good post. One of the better ones, actually.
you have to continue this ash that was mean longer
you have to continue this ash that was mean longer
Okay, so I left a big long comment and it got eaten. I’ll try again…. So, this was fabulous. If you choose to continue, great, but if you don’t, I understand. This fic is perfect as it stands. You capture each character and their actions perfectly. Poor Spencer – not understanding what she wants until she gets it with someone who is really perfect for her, but they’ll never know. And, though it went unspoken in this fic, poor Ashley. We know she’s hurting inside, too. If only she would’ve opened her eyes and seen Spence for what she is. Their love was so close, yet so distant. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I love it.
pleeaasseee tell me this wasnt a one-shot..please…i really hope u continue it…
pleeaasseee tell me this wasnt a one-shot..please…i really hope u continue it…
I really like this version of how they meet! cracking one shot, and could be a brilliant start to a story. gonna carry on? I think people want you to ;-) I know I do.
I really like this version of how they meet! cracking one shot, and could be a brilliant start to a story. gonna carry on? I think people want you to ;-) I know I do.
Fantastic! I would just suggest a bit more dialogue in the next post (Because you ARE going to post AREN’T YOU?! :P)
Fantastic! I would just suggest a bit more dialogue in the next post (Because you ARE going to post AREN’T YOU?! :P)
Your going to write more to this story right? I hope you do. Wow that shocks me that ashley was mean to spencer.
Your going to write more to this story right? I hope you do. Wow that shocks me that ashley was mean to spencer.
Don’t you love it when conveniently talented writers happen to stroll on by, drop one hell of a story, and then knock you out of your socks. It’s a good thing for me that i wasn’t wearing any socks, but you left me with my jaw on the floor anyway. You need no help with your fiction. That was somewhat perfect. I’m in total agreement with goober (and not just cos she’s my friend and she’ll beat the living crap out of me if I don’t agree with her), this fic is perfect as it stands and don’t let anyone push you if you want to leave it that way. As a fellow fic writer I understand the perfection of a one parter. But if you choose, out of your own soul, to continue, I shall be first in line going “oh yeah, baby YEAH!”. In a slightly less dodgy way than it first sounds when you read it out loud. Spencer finally reaching fulfilment. Ashley cold because it was.. dare I say it, awesome and she’s scared. MMm.. more Spashley sex… and some.. oh well, we’ll see eh :) If you don’t do more of this, how about starting another? I’ll read it and i promise to comment :)
Don’t you love it when conveniently talented writers happen to stroll on by, drop one hell of a story, and then knock you out of your socks. It’s a good thing for me that i wasn’t wearing any socks, but you left me with my jaw on the floor anyway. You need no help with your fiction. That was somewhat perfect. I’m in total agreement with goober (and not just cos she’s my friend and she’ll beat the living crap out of me if I don’t agree with her), this fic is perfect as it stands and don’t let anyone push you if you want to leave it that way. As a fellow fic writer I understand the perfection of a one parter. But if you choose, out of your own soul, to continue, I shall be first in line going “oh yeah, baby YEAH!”. In a slightly less dodgy way than it first sounds when you read it out loud. Spencer finally reaching fulfilment. Ashley cold because it was.. dare I say it, awesome and she’s scared. MMm.. more Spashley sex… and some.. oh well, we’ll see eh :) If you don’t do more of this, how about starting another? I’ll read it and i promise to comment :)