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Foster Care Love – (Chapter: ch 15)
The minute we stepped out the door the same blinding light thing happened but before we closed our eyes Peter placed a hand on our shoulder making the head ache disappear as well as the intense light pounding on our eyes.
“Right this way,” he smiled pointing down the path. As we followed Ashley released me from her arms awkwardly walking next to me.
“What was that?” she asked nodding to our cabin.
“What was what?”
“I don’t know I felt, we…” she motioned between us.
“You kissed?” Ashley nodded making me wonder if she ever felt the same about me, “Here any emotion you feel is let out, you won’t be able to hold back. In the mortal realm you both are struggling with feelings for each other here those emotions are exposed and amplified.” So she does feel something from me but what does that mean?
“Where is here anyway?” I asked seeing Ashley’s intense thinking face but ignoring it and focusing instead on Peter.
“This place doesn’t really have a name, it’s not like a city or state in the mortal realm, basically it’s a tranquil paradise.”
“I don’t get it?” Ashley sighed rubbing her temples.
Peter blew out a deep breath stopping in his tracks outside another cabin, “Look when people get sick or hurt and end up in comas this is the place they come to. This is not heaven nor is it hell, only when it happens the person comes alone. We…the keepers help each person along whether it’s back to the mortal realm or to some other place. Your case is a bit unsettling for us.”
”Why?”
“Well Spencer like I said they come alone, some how your minds have been fused so you will go through this together. Now let’s eat.” He motioned for us to enter the cabin.
“But what are we suppose to do…” before I could finish Peter laid a hand on my shoulder cutting me off.
“In time Spencer you will know…” he laughed at his own words, “Sounds sort of sci-fi worthy doesn’t it.” We nodded smiling a bit, “Now food…”
The three of us entered into the cabin, I half expected it to look just like the one we’d come from but at the same time didn’t limit my expectations at all. Inside was a large cafeteria room, “How is all this in…here?”
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loved it! plz update soon
I love this story, so glad you posted. I really don’t think Spencer should go in there with Ash, I have a feeling something might go wrong. And how did they get there anyway? Please don’t tell me they got in an accident and now they’re in a coma. I hope they’re ok. Yea, I’m confused too but this story is great, PMASAP!!!!!!
Great Update. Keep up the good work. I Can’t wait for the next chapter. PMS Real Soon.
loved it! plz update soon
I love this story, so glad you posted. I really don’t think Spencer should go in there with Ash, I have a feeling something might go wrong. And how did they get there anyway? Please don’t tell me they got in an accident and now they’re in a coma. I hope they’re ok. Yea, I’m confused too but this story is great, PMASAP!!!!!!
Great Update. Keep up the good work. I Can’t wait for the next chapter. PMS Real Soon.
Wow, that was wow. I’m confused but I still really, really liked it. Boy do you throw in really interesting twists in your stories. I hope your writer’s block completely goes away. This story is awesome. PMASAP!!!
Wow, that was wow. I’m confused but I still really, really liked it. Boy do you throw in really interesting twists in your stories. I hope your writer’s block completely goes away. This story is awesome. PMASAP!!!
this is my favorite story! I love it to death please post more of it, when you can!!!!! great job, I’m so happy they know they like each other !!!
this is my favorite story! I love it to death please post more of it, when you can!!!!! great job, I’m so happy they know they like each other !!!
wow this story is like really intense and i love it im a little well a lot confused but i love it!! keep it up cant wait to read your next post PMS!!
wow this story is like really intense and i love it im a little well a lot confused but i love it!! keep it up cant wait to read your next post PMS!!
Fabulous…..Loved it..I am not that confused, but more so intrigued….can’t wait to read more because this is one intersting story…pms
Fabulous…..Loved it..I am not that confused, but more so intrigued….can’t wait to read more because this is one intersting story…pms