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I need your help.
So this is something that is really near and dear to my heart, so please take it seriously. Ok so for a while now I have been writing a book. Not a fan fic I mean a book with like 100+ pages and Im not even close to being done.
The short version of the story is Alicia is the presidents daughter but as you can imagine it is a life of hiding who you really are if you are the gay daughter of a republican president. She is sad but is always the perfect daughter staying to herself and the only peace she has is her secret smoking habit she does out in the back of the white house by the pond. She meets Meg a cook in the kitchen also out sneaking a smoke and they talk and instantly connect. In the beginning Meg doesn’t know who Alicia is because she tells Meg she is a clerk that works for the Department of Defense. They talk for a while and Meg asks her what she is doing tomorrow and if she would like to go see a movie. Alicia wants to go but she knows the chances of her sneaking out are hard but she promises to go. She does end up getting out and they have an uneventful night. They see each other constantly at "work." Alicia always goes and visits her in the kitchen always making sure it is when she is alone so no one spills her cover but her security detail catch them kissing and tell the first lady who forbids her to see her. When Meg tries to find Alicia in the main office of the Department of Defense they tell her they have no clue what she is talking about and the story is full of all kinds of twists and turns.
I have spent probably 600 hours writing this book so far and I am going to publish it whether or not I can sell it. It is something I have always wanted to do but I want to get some opinions on it. I want real feedback so please dig deep and tell me what needs to be improved on what is missing if you would read it so on and so forth please.
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you should publish it, i was the same way with my book that got published, always wanting opinions but the plot sounds great and i really like it so yeah just go for it, i would totally go out and read it..
you should publish it, i was the same way with my book that got published, always wanting opinions but the plot sounds great and i really like it so yeah just go for it, i would totally go out and read it..
i would totally read that! it sounds amazing! keep going with it! “]
i would totally read that! it sounds amazing! keep going with it! “]
sounds nice. I might buy it, whats the title going to be?
sounds nice. I might buy it, whats the title going to be?
i agree with dare_u_to_move u did a great job creating the story i think it would do really well if it got published!:)
i agree with dare_u_to_move u did a great job creating the story i think it would do really well if it got published!:)
i would READ that book really thats great
i would READ that book really thats great
I would love to read it when it gets published. What’s the title going to be?
I would love to read it when it gets published. What’s the title going to be?
That sounds like quite a book…heck you’ve got me hooked already. I’ll buy one;) Let me know when its publish hon.
That sounds like quite a book…heck you’ve got me hooked already. I’ll buy one;) Let me know when its publish hon.
This is my “first” feedback.. I will write another soon.. but I want to say.. I need to read YOUR book..*Nat ( Jonamo@t-online.de )maybe.. write me private..
This is my “first” feedback.. I will write another soon.. but I want to say.. I need to read YOUR book..*Nat ( Jonamo@t-online.de )maybe.. write me private..