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Marshall Daniel's Boarding School For Girls – (Chapter: Chapter 34 More Than Sure)
We had it all planned out.
To make the night special we were both going to pay extra attention to our appearances, wear lingerie, light candles, the whole nine…
Once my lips touched her’s I became lost in her kiss, however.
I was so aware of her touches, of her. Of the way her body guided mine down onto the bed as she covered me with her. How, instinctually, my hand went to the round of her shoulder to bring her closer to me. How she cupped my face softly while her other hand gripped my waist in expectation.
I tangled my free hand into her curls, moaning intensely at the feel of her soft lips on mine. She always breathed new life into me with each of our kisses, and this one was no exception. Her breath was cool and her tongue sliding against mine was quenching.
I moaned deeper, loving the slowness of each kiss. This was going to be one of those nights that we’d talk about forever, that I knew, it was evident in each touch and caress she showed me. How careful she was being; like I was breakable.
But I could also tell by each languid kiss that she was holding back; that she was just getting started.
The passion behind our kisses ignited something primal within me, something I wasn’t expecting. I knew that I was about to enter this daunting territory with her that I’ve never experienced before and I was startled in my discovery that I was beyond ready for it to happen. I wasn’t just ready, no, I was ready…
I moaned headily into her mouth at the thought of Ashley naked and thrusting inside of me. I couldn’t wait to watch her facial expressions as she hovered over me, eyes tightly shut, muscles straining, my fingertips on her bare skin…I moaned again at the thought and my whimpers continued as her tongue swirled around mine.
My eyes remained closed as she pulled away from our kiss, but her mouth stayed close to mine and a breathy groan was released from my depths when I felt her tongue trace my lips slowly.
Eventually she pulled away completely and removed herself from me. She stood next to our bed and I watched her struggle to leave my side; but after a few moments, though, she did, mouthing ‘I love you’ as she walked backwards towards her closet.
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OMG….gah im speechless. bravo
TAT WAS AWESOME !!! =]
Wow, that certainly did not disappoint. That was beautiful and scorching hot! I love the underlying trust … and the journey it took for them to get to this point. We went from bawling in the previous chapter to drooling in this one. You, Stix, most certainly get the Best Author Award!!!
Uhm. Uhm. Uhm….I’ll have to comment back later when I can think straight. XD This was fantastically amazing though.
oh.god…. umm wow k i havent been on this site in a while and now i remember why. because i get frozen and cant move and then when i move theres this squish squish feeling…. fuck. if you ever come over, EVER, for whatever reason, i will be waiting for you just like that. and you can take me just like that. i have the perfect cuffs and outfit in mind. shit
fucking A man. I’m gonna have to go with factoflife and mayagray on this one… I can’t seem to think coherently at the moment. and yea I’m glad I haven’t showered yet. you can take me any way you want to stix I give you full control! fanfuckingtastic update!
I will completely agree with everyone else. That was fucking fantastic. Very beautiful and very hot! I think I might love you…
nice :)
Well that was a fantastic treat to come home to after a long, long day at work. Wow, I’m going to have to follow their lead and go shower….then come back and read it again!…On a less horny note you conveyed the love and trust between them so well without diluting any of the passion and desire. A sensitve situation handled brilliantly with sex appeal to spare! Looking forward to whatever you can update next.
oh dear god that was amazing. i’ll admit i didn’t like this story in the beginning because i thought “oh great, lesbians at an all-girls boarding school” but you’ve shown the ups and downs beautifully. i’m hooked now! please write more soon!
Pardon me while I pick my jaw off the ground … WHOA .. and I am completely speechless .. AGAIN!! AMAZING .. and YEAH JAW STILL ON GROUND lol
ok first of all you owe me a new computer my kaptop caught on fire on how hot this was and second DAMN u are a god a beautiful greek god that i will worship if you let me “im not wrothy im not worthy” man awsome update took me too long to read since i havnt been on the site in a while but holy damn lol loved it i was listening to some pretty good songs too lol mostly magic stick lol anyways you gotta post more please i beg of you :)
holy shit.that’s all i can say. holy shit….that and umm…cold shower.holy shit, cold shower.THAT WAS HOTT.
HOT!!! but I want DRAMA!pms..
D.A.M.N.
wow :| that was amazing. so incredibly hot, yet passionate.. just really really great! the only words i can ever think of to comment with are amazing and awesome.. but it was just so amazingly awesome!! pms!
stix stix stix… what can i say that hasnt already been said? maybe i will think of something upon the 2nd or 3rd reading, because yes- it is no longer enough to read just once :)
lets just hope the soreness of tomorrow doesn’t bring back the sorness of the rape because i can see her being comfortable with ash but just the issue coming up again can bug her out pms