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    My Loch Ness Monster

    Story written on August 8, 2008 by pixiemaryalice.
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    *inside, because the summary includes spoilers for Breaking Dawn*

     

    Title: My Loch Ness Monster
    Author: SnarkySweetness on LJ / SchwartzyLogainne on FanFiction.net / PixieMaryAlice at TwilightFanCenter
    Characters: Edward, Bella, Jacob, and Nessie. Each chapter is told from one of their perspectives.
    Rating: PG-13
    Warnings: Breaking Dawn book spoilers.
    Set Post: Right after the epilogue. 
    Summary: Mindless mush about everyone’s different take on love for the little ‘monster’. 
    Disclaimer: I bow down to Stephenie Meyer. 
    Author's Note: I wrote this the day of the book release, right after I finished. I was feeling gooey on the inside, and I needed to get this out. It was very hard to wait to post this, but I didn’t want to put it up the day of. There are four chapters planned for this, one from each characters perspective.

    This chapter was the hardest to write. I originally had this written as her being older, but I changed my mind (see below).

    Update: So… I’ve decided on another chapter for this, to take place a few years later, which will be from Nessie’s point of view (it was going to be a part of this one, but it just did not work), and I want to have one final chapter from either Bella, Edward, or Jacob’s point of view, so I want to take a poll to see what you guys want.

    Also, I had a few people point out the Werewolf/venom thing, but I researched it, and not only are the La Push ‘shape-shifters’ not real werewolves, but there is no mention of them being immortal. They live longer than most humans, and stop aging until they stop phasing for a long time. Also, knowing SMeyer, she made the point there are not actually werewolves for a reason, so my take is that in the Jacob/Nessie series, she’ll end up turning him, because that’s her style.

    Also, some people think Nessie’s fangs have venom? Not true, or else she would have killed/turned Jacob already, all that kid does is bite him.

    Anywho… here ya go, the final chapter that is now the middle chapter.

     

    Chapter: 4: Renesmee

     

    I sat on the floor, a smile on my face, watching my parents. They were amusing to watch, so in love, it was calming, to me. I knew I was brought into this world out of love, and everything this family went through was a reaffirmation of that love.

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