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Next Time Around: 2 – (Chapter: …To check on my Stability)
The entire living room was decorated with balloons and banners. The furniture had been removed specially for the party. Music blared through the speakers as everyone did their meet and greet with the birthday twins. Everything seemed to have been fantastic over the last couple of days but it really wasn’t. Amanda and Avery were both being torn up inside.
Avery had tried to patch things up with Eric, but there was no such luck. Amanda had spent the days searching for something that was intended to not be found. But now they were expected to be in a good mood for their birthday party.
Avery sat on the couch with a large gift in front of him. It was wrapped and the card said it was from Aiden and Mandy. He shredded the paper quickly and immediately jumped up and down with joy before rushing to Aiden and Mandy to hug them. “Thank you so much, Mandy.” He said kissing her on the cheek then going to Aiden and giving him a hug. “Thank you, Aiden!” He ran back to the bow and took the black Fender electric guitar. Soon someone stood before him holding out a square, wrapped object. Avery’s eyes followed the arm up to the face of Eric.
“I figured that I should at least give you the present I bought you.” Eric said flatly. “But I uh, I can’t stay long. I have to get back to work. Just look inside the card when you’re alone.” Eric walked away but Avery was confused. He stuck the card in his back pocket and followed Eric out the door.
“Eric, wait.” He said catching Eric right on the steps. “I’m sorry. I just…I didn’t know what…”
“Avery.” A voice came from behind him. He turned to see Amanda standing there with a blank expression that was unreadable.
“Not now Amanda, I’m busy.”
“No, it’s cool I have to get to work. Just call me later okay?” Eric said to Avery before leaving.
Amanda sat on the steps and stared out into the yard. She was once again unreadable. Avery took a seat next to her. “Hey, what’s wrong?” he asked.
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Damn damn. Tease you cant do this to me. You have to fix them. I`m all sad. I feel so sorry for the kids. Ashely has to fix this some way. Wonderful update. PMS
thats was very intense
Dammit Ashley, your son is cutting himself open and you just leave the room cos he asks? You need some parenting workshop skills. Spencer, pull her into line. Oh dear, you really have to stop getting me so involved in your stories Peanut.
Damn damn. Tease you cant do this to me. You have to fix them. I`m all sad. I feel so sorry for the kids. Ashely has to fix this some way. Wonderful update. PMS
thats was very intense
Dammit Ashley, your son is cutting himself open and you just leave the room cos he asks? You need some parenting workshop skills. Spencer, pull her into line. Oh dear, you really have to stop getting me so involved in your stories Peanut.
WOW!!!! That is an intense chapter. I am glad that Avery and Amanda both know about their father and what he did to Ashley, but I wish that Ashley would have told them the truth before all of this. I just hope that the next chapter will be as good as this one was. Also, WHERE IS SPENCER and WHERE DOES SHE WORK????? Those are just 2 questions that I would like to be answered young lady, LMAO!!!!!! J/k you don’t have to answer those for me, LOL!!!! Well I hope that you PMS and have a great NEW YEARS.
WOW!!!! That is an intense chapter. I am glad that Avery and Amanda both know about their father and what he did to Ashley, but I wish that Ashley would have told them the truth before all of this. I just hope that the next chapter will be as good as this one was. Also, WHERE IS SPENCER and WHERE DOES SHE WORK????? Those are just 2 questions that I would like to be answered young lady, LMAO!!!!!! J/k you don’t have to answer those for me, LOL!!!! Well I hope that you PMS and have a great NEW YEARS.
wow, peanut, just wow. i love the layers you’re building in to this. brillance. *forgive me for not being eloqouent. but yeah. looong day*
wow, peanut, just wow. i love the layers you’re building in to this. brillance. *forgive me for not being eloqouent. but yeah. looong day*
whoa intense much. cant wait for your next udpdate!!
whoa intense much. cant wait for your next udpdate!!
so im roughly a week behind everyone else in reading this, but it is magnificent. and i love you. and all your writing..and my comments havent improved in the slightest..sorry. :]
so im roughly a week behind everyone else in reading this, but it is magnificent. and i love you. and all your writing..and my comments havent improved in the slightest..sorry. :]