Okay so were on our way to USA Baby, and we just finished getting dressed. I ‘m wearing a short mini jeanblue skirt, a wihte abercrombie and fitch tee, with black flip-flops. Ashley is wearing Dughan 88z Diesel jeans, and they are a little bit baggy but not to baggy. With a green Hurley Tahoe T-shirt and black slip ons. As we get into USA Baby we head to the clothing section and look at clothes. And Ashley says she’s already bored out  of her mind. "Come on ashley we just got here." I tell trying to get her to be coropative."And I just got bored." She says in being a total ASS mode now. "O my gosh, you can never do anytihng that I want to do." I tell her walking, being pissed that she gets so annoying sometimes."Spe-" I cut her off with saying, "Just go look at the stupid toy section now and go make your self happy now." leaving her there going t the back of the store away from her looking at baby shoes. I see her come up behind me and put her arms around my waist kiss my neck saying.."I’m sorry spence. I was acting like a jerk towards you and I’m sorry. i turn around placing my arms around her neck and pulling her down a little to force her to look in my eyes."Do you mean that?" I ask her . "Of course I do."she reassures me. "Well stop acting that way." I tell her pecking  her lips with a kiss. "I will. Now lets go to the clothing asile." She says then grabs my hand to go back. After USA Baby Ashley took me to my house and said she’ll oic me up tomorrow.

Spencer’s pov:

          I’m laying in my bed and it’s now 7am. Today is Tuesday and that means it’s time to go back to school. Greeaatt. Well I should get up now and get dress. As I get up and walk towards my closet I start to grab clothes and head to the shower. After about 25 minutes I’m done with my shower and wearing black skirt with a light blue Aeropostale tee. I head down stairs and tell my parents I’m leaving for school. As I walk outside I see Ashley’s car out waiting for me so I hop in." Hey." Giving her soft kiss. "Hey’ she returns and starts the car and goes to school.As she pulls up we get out ssay well see eachother at lunch since we have different 1st period classes. So I see my friends by my locker and walk over towards them."Hey Spencer ." They tell me. "Hey girls." I reply. "So what’s up ?" My friend jessica asked me. "Umm there is one thing I have to tell you guys." I said with a nervous smile. " well what is it? " They all asked. "I’m pregnant." I spit out. "What?!" My friend jill asks. " Yeah." I say. "How?" Maggie aks. " Umm sex." "yeah but with who?’ Maggie asks again."Ashley." I say. "Wow spence." Riiinnnnggg!!! good, there goes to the bell to 1st period.

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