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    Why Superman Could Never Find a Phone Book – (Chapter: 20: Es-ki-mo)

    Story written on June 23, 2006 by peglegmeg.
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    SoN AU

    “…Eskimo…”

    Ashley’s legs dangled off the side of the rock, her right arm picking at a piece of fuzz that had become attached to the hard mesh stitching that covered her cast. The sun was barreling down upon her neck and back, and she silently cursed herself, having forgot to put suntan lotion on before she left the house.

    She squinted into the sun, using her cast to her advantage, and blocking out most of the sun. She watched Spencer balance herself unsteadily as she walked along the thin brick railing that outlined the mini pond that Ashley’s dad had built a few months back.

    “You are so gonna fall, Spence.” Ash felt tiny trails of perspiration drip down past her temples.

    “I sooo am not!” Spencer yelled, as her arms spread all the way out, teetering and giggling back and forth, trying to hold her balance.

    “I think not! You’re gonna fall, Spencer! Fall! Fall! Fall! Fall!” Ash kicked the heels of her shoes against the rock as she taunted her friend.

    “Shut up Ash, or I’ll come over there and break your other arm!” Spencer’s whole body lunged backwards, then forwards, as she spastically tried to hold her balance.

    Ashley laughed at the awkward display of coordination, or lack there of. Deep down she hoped Spence made it across, knowing how pleased Spence would be that she had beat out Ashley’s taunts.

    Thinking too soon perhaps, Spencer made it to the end of the wall, only to slip and plunge her right foot into the pond.

    “Damn!” Spencer hoped out at lightning speed, throwing off her shoe and sock which were now soaked. She hobbled over to Ashley on the rock, a huge grin on her face.

    Ashley pointed at her. “Loser!”

    Spence pouted briefly, then continued smiling. She grabbed the toes of Ashley’s shoes and began pushing the rhythmically against the rock.

    “Nice try, Spence. Better luck next time.”

    “Yah, no thanks to you. I thought you were my cheering section, not my opponent.” Spence lay her shoe and sock up on the rock to dry and then hoped up on top, next to Ashley.

    The two stared out across the lawn, both watching Ashley’s neighbor attempt to carry three bags of groceries at once and failing miserably, one bag toppling over, a cantaloupe escaping and rolling down the street.

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    3. GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT! there is really nothing more I can say. I love your work/writting more and more everyday. I do like the flashback/ this way we know how Spencer and Ashley got to the point that there at now. love it! o by the way this is me begging. lol . Please post more Please

    4. That was the most intimate, loving, sad, thing ever. Poor Ashley…this chapter actually made me kind of angry only because Spencer claims that if she could she would stand next to Ashley and fight forever. But sometime later when Ashely runs over a bird while biking with Madison and Spencer…Spencer just leaves Ashley, telling her things are going to chanage and basically I don’t want to be your friend anymore. So it just killed me to here Spencer say that right now, knowing her action later are different.

    9. GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT! there is really nothing more I can say. I love your work/writting more and more everyday. I do like the flashback/ this way we know how Spencer and Ashley got to the point that there at now. love it! o by the way this is me begging. lol . Please post more Please

    10. That was the most intimate, loving, sad, thing ever. Poor Ashley…this chapter actually made me kind of angry only because Spencer claims that if she could she would stand next to Ashley and fight forever. But sometime later when Ashely runs over a bird while biking with Madison and Spencer…Spencer just leaves Ashley, telling her things are going to chanage and basically I don’t want to be your friend anymore. So it just killed me to here Spencer say that right now, knowing her action later are different.

    15. I really, really loved the parallel of the tree in this chapter. First of all, the lemon tree being over “the shed” where they kissed was awesome. Then there’s the whole Ashley climbing the tree trying to a) make a gift for her mom and b) reaching the best lemon she can see only to get pulled down to the ground by her Dad. It’s like she was stopped from reaching something good (with the best intentions) and put back on the ground to rot with the other fallen fruit. Her Dad yanking his chest hairs and enjoying that pain while he watched the girl’s response was really hard to read I’m not quite sure what emotion I felt with that, but it was really hard for me to read. The lemon falling during that conversation was perfect especially the part where no one acknowledged it falling, but the all knew it had just like Ash. I LOVED the Viking drawing that was one of the most intimate and sweet scenes I’ve read about the girls. Finally, there’s Spencer’s admission that she wants to kiss Ashley and another lemon falls to rot with the others. It just makes sense with everything that happened later. I could be completely off base, please let me know if I am!

    16. I really, really loved the parallel of the tree in this chapter. First of all, the lemon tree being over “the shed” where they kissed was awesome. Then there’s the whole Ashley climbing the tree trying to a) make a gift for her mom and b) reaching the best lemon she can see only to get pulled down to the ground by her Dad. It’s like she was stopped from reaching something good (with the best intentions) and put back on the ground to rot with the other fallen fruit. Her Dad yanking his chest hairs and enjoying that pain while he watched the girl’s response was really hard to read I’m not quite sure what emotion I felt with that, but it was really hard for me to read. The lemon falling during that conversation was perfect especially the part where no one acknowledged it falling, but the all knew it had just like Ash. I LOVED the Viking drawing that was one of the most intimate and sweet scenes I’ve read about the girls. Finally, there’s Spencer’s admission that she wants to kiss Ashley and another lemon falls to rot with the others. It just makes sense with everything that happened later. I could be completely off base, please let me know if I am!

    19. If you live anywhere near Ohio, I would like to give you a hug. I would like to hug you in order to thank you for your great writing. *Hugs*

    20. If you live anywhere near Ohio, I would like to give you a hug. I would like to hug you in order to thank you for your great writing. *Hugs*

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