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You and Me – (Chapter: Revelations Part 5)
Oh to break something, anything, everything. To act out in blind rage and dismantle the first thing that was in sight. Something ordinary, something disgusting, something beautiful. It felt so good to destroy something that’s beautiful; glass china, an intricately embroidered mirror, a face. She was filled with righteous anger, indignation, and wanted nothing more to than to drive over to that bitch’s house and annihilate her from the face of the planet; To be her negation, simply beat her until she stopped living. As far as Ashley was concerned, Madison was a living dead girl, only breathing because of the circumstances that prevented her from raining an apocalypse of unheard of proportions on the spineless cunt; the prevention was namely, Spencer.
Having her in the car was somewhat agitating her anger even more. Sitting next to her was the victim of Madison’s failure, someone who she loved and adored more than the music she used to only live for and more than the miserable life she felt she was unworthy to live. Spencer’s presence was increasing the rage yet causing it to transform, mutate into something different but familiar, channeling it from the deep and dark recesses of her heart to burn under her skin, to… ‘Oh fuck no.’
She would not, could not even possibly think of that right now. ‘What the hell is wrong with me? Is the situation and my own screwed up mind fucking around with my hormones or something?’ Whether she was right or not, it didn’t matter. The days of constant frustration both mentally, physically, and sexually were beginning to wreak havoc on her body. She needed a release, anything to get rid of the aching, the wanting, the needing.
She watched out of the corner of her eye as the foot pressed down on the pedal slightly and moved the car faster towards Ashley’s house, but still maintaining a relatively safe speed. Something really bad had happened, Spencer knew that much. But otherwise, she was in the dark, and she hated the feeling. It was that fog again, creeping up and enveloping her so that she had to step lightly in order not to fall off a cliff or trip into something sharp and dangerous.
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I thought the sex scene was good. Can’t wait to see the showdown between Ashley and Madison. Good Job.
i swear….woah!…that was some HOT stuff…and you dont like the way you write your NC-17…well i have to contest…i DO! lol…and i cant wait to see when ash is gonna rearrange madisons face…or maybe dano will come to her rescue w/e all i kno is that i can sense an ass whippin gettin ready to come…to someone…i just dont know who yet lmao. But for some reason i dont know why…when ever i read this chap..because ive read it more than 3 times…its just that great…lol..but yea when i read it…its hilarious…omg…i wanna li li lick you from your head to your toes…if i died then it’d be because of the laughter…awsome chapter though…please post more soon…i wanna see some ass beatings! :-)
WOOOHHOOO !!!!!!!! that was soOOOO HOTT!!!!!!!…totally loved it ! and you’re not happy with your love scene !?! o.0 …(rolling eyes)mann, i wonder what *your* definition of *good* is…LOL…anyway,i LOoove how you write and incorporate each characters emotions and the way they act…it’s so deep…AWSOME!!! NICE WORK !!! WOOOONNNDERFUL !!! AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING ! i know i haven’t commented a lot, but keep it up ! and did i mention that you rock ???…well, i’m sayin it now…YOU SO ROCKK !!!!!!XD…can’t wait to see what happens next ^_^ ==THANKS AGAIN==
Thanks for the length. I have to say back when you were writing about their bet, I could not stop laughing. It was excellent. Your writing of this chapter had the desired affect. keep writing !
That has to be the best sex scene I have ever read…Time to take a cold shower…
I thought the sex scene was good. Can’t wait to see the showdown between Ashley and Madison. Good Job.
i swear….woah!…that was some HOT stuff…and you dont like the way you write your NC-17…well i have to contest…i DO! lol…and i cant wait to see when ash is gonna rearrange madisons face…or maybe dano will come to her rescue w/e all i kno is that i can sense an ass whippin gettin ready to come…to someone…i just dont know who yet lmao. But for some reason i dont know why…when ever i read this chap..because ive read it more than 3 times…its just that great…lol..but yea when i read it…its hilarious…omg…i wanna li li lick you from your head to your toes…if i died then it’d be because of the laughter…awsome chapter though…please post more soon…i wanna see some ass beatings! :-)
WOOOHHOOO !!!!!!!! that was soOOOO HOTT!!!!!!!…totally loved it ! and you’re not happy with your love scene !?! o.0 …(rolling eyes)mann, i wonder what *your* definition of *good* is…LOL…anyway,i LOoove how you write and incorporate each characters emotions and the way they act…it’s so deep…AWSOME!!! NICE WORK !!! WOOOONNNDERFUL !!! AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING ! i know i haven’t commented a lot, but keep it up ! and did i mention that you rock ???…well, i’m sayin it now…YOU SO ROCKK !!!!!!XD…can’t wait to see what happens next ^_^ ==THANKS AGAIN==
Thanks for the length. I have to say back when you were writing about their bet, I could not stop laughing. It was excellent. Your writing of this chapter had the desired affect. keep writing !
That has to be the best sex scene I have ever read…Time to take a cold shower…
BEAUTIFUL…simply BEUATIFUL!! So passionate & erotic at the same time…you are the story Goddess!!;) “I wanna, lick lick lick lick you from your head to your toes and I wanna, move from the bed down to the down to the to the floor and I wanna, ah ah, you make it so good I don’t wanna leave but I gotta, kn kn kn know wha what’s your fanti ti sey!â€Haha, I love how you incorporated this song and “Closer” by NIN. Love love love these songs!Yeah, you are right, a lot of the scenarios in your story does normally take place in high schools across the nation. I guess I was just too much of the “goody good girl” in high school, trapped in my own lil’ world to not see any of these actually occurring. I know sex scandals, drugs, and fights occurred at my school, but I was just totally oblivious to them…lol.Anyways, enough of my blabbing…2 THUMBS WAAAAAY UP LOVE^_^ *kisses*
BEAUTIFUL…simply BEUATIFUL!! So passionate & erotic at the same time…you are the story Goddess!!;) “I wanna, lick lick lick lick you from your head to your toes and I wanna, move from the bed down to the down to the to the floor and I wanna, ah ah, you make it so good I don’t wanna leave but I gotta, kn kn kn know wha what’s your fanti ti sey!â€Haha, I love how you incorporated this song and “Closer” by NIN. Love love love these songs!Yeah, you are right, a lot of the scenarios in your story does normally take place in high schools across the nation. I guess I was just too much of the “goody good girl” in high school, trapped in my own lil’ world to not see any of these actually occurring. I know sex scandals, drugs, and fights occurred at my school, but I was just totally oblivious to them…lol.Anyways, enough of my blabbing…2 THUMBS WAAAAAY UP LOVE^_^ *kisses*
whoooaaa, HOT HOT HOT!!! u definitly shouldnt be worrying, u write sex scenes perfectly, spot on!
whoooaaa, HOT HOT HOT!!! u definitly shouldnt be worrying, u write sex scenes perfectly, spot on!
Will you marry me???….just joking… that was sooo hot and sweet…hope this is just a start of more to come…this would be so awesome on screen…thanks for the long and quick posts you talented thing you… LOVE & RESPECT
Will you marry me???….just joking… that was sooo hot and sweet…hope this is just a start of more to come…this would be so awesome on screen…thanks for the long and quick posts you talented thing you… LOVE & RESPECT
No, no, no, no, no….beyond good. Your writing is just…perfect. Your description, your vocabulary, your understanding of the depth of character and individual just hasn’t been matched yet. Now if you’ll excuse me, I have to change a few…uh…garments.
No, no, no, no, no….beyond good. Your writing is just…perfect. Your description, your vocabulary, your understanding of the depth of character and individual just hasn’t been matched yet. Now if you’ll excuse me, I have to change a few…uh…garments.