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11:11
She gasped.
“Oh god…”
“It’s terminal cancer. The doctors
only found it a month ago. I don’t want you to do anything. I just want
you to know that the eight years that I had the privilege of spending
with you, were the greatest eight years of my life.”
Tina sank to her knees under the weight of the emotions and memories
that came flooding back. The joy, the laughter, love passion, time
spent together alone, time spent together with friends…
“I am truly, deeply sorry for everything I did to cause you pain.”
… and the pain. It was indescribable. She had felt like her soul was
slowly being wrenched in two that fateful night. Then later, the pain
of losing her friends and her life in Los Angeles was added to that.
She thought that being with Brian would rid her of the pain. She was
wrong. It only sent it below the surface, where time made it worse.
And now, she also felt the pain of not knowing what could have been if she had only given Bette a second chance.
“But I will leave this world with
some sort of contentment, because I once had the honour of knowing
someone as kind, loving, and beautiful as you. Well, I guess this
really is goodbye. I wish you happiness and love for the rest of your
days.
*sigh* Goodbye, Tina.”
“End- of -messages.”
Tina stretched a trembling hand out to the answering machine, as if hoping to touch her lost soulmate for one last time.
“No… please… don’t go… why does it have to be this way…”
Her fingertips touched the cold plastic of the machine. She let her
hand drop to her side, and her emotions take over. Hot tears slid down
her face and sobs wracked her body.
She didn’t notice the door open and Brian rush in.
– – – – – – – – – –
Brian flung the door of the apartment open and ran in. He scanned the
room for Tina. There she was, crying, curled up in a ball on the floor
next to…
The answering machine.
“*****. I’m too late.”
He walked over to his wife, and crouched down beside her. He laid a hand on her shoulder.
“Tina, I…”
“Why?” she whimpered. “Why did you do it, Brian?”
She sat up, still sniffling, and looked deep into his eyes.
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LOL!..Brian is lukie he ran 4his fukin life..ahahaha omg!..this is SO gooD..T married Brian’z ass 4the $ he married her 4senate..LUV IT!..Alice got her sign!! Lets get the gang bak 2gether&make everybodi happie alright!? THNXlot4writing POst soon will u?!
EXCELLENT Go TK sry I haven’t commented but it is hard at work.. But I am a reader and enjoy your writing..Post soon. Have a Merry Christmas if you don’t get to post before…
Oh the drama…I love it!
Fantastic story. Go TK and run to Bette!!! Please post again soon.
I echo what others have said. This is way sad, but dammit you had to go and make me laugh with the comment that The Planet’s coffee tasted like poopy-shit. lol Brian…OMFG I don’t know if I’m capable of murder, but I think I would damn well get close to it with him if he pulled that shit with me.
give us drama…even if it breaks our hearts. I just ask that you make Bette all better, and I trust that you will, and please,please post soon
I enjoy fan fiction as an alternative to the poopy sh** Ilene feeds us. This is too much drama, death and destruction and the antithesis of the Christmas stories I’ve been reading.Hope you resurrect Bette, Tina and the framily although I’m curious about where you’re taking this.
speechless…… Wow this is good!!!!
good story so far except for bette dying –it’s christmas no sadness needed–post soon
ok my heart started beating really fast. intense, very intense.
Alot.I said a lot. not all of some are so great. of the male are assholes. Since Tina left the whole gang went to pot. Post soon. thanks
Why is life always that way. Is there any way that Tina can save Bette?
i was just thinking about this fic, you’re not really going to stop there are you? please continue, pretty please?
Damn. That’s alot of drama. Post soon.
Talk about drama! Hopefully Bette has been misdiagnosed, Kit is in rehab and Shane is alive and also in rehab. Please post soon.
Oh fuck this so sad hurt alot. If I’m Tina I will kick his ass so hard that he never walk again. Plesae let Tina be there on time and be with Bette and please dont let Bette die, just sad and you made me cry. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Tina was to nice to Brian if you ask me.Great chapter.
Sad! Everyones life went down the toilet since T left. Brian and T’s dad are creeps.
is your name Ilene? because this sounds like season 3 LOL…i hope bette’s diagnosis is wrong…and everybody will be happy again
B&TF: *cough* uh, of course not! why on earth would you think that? LOL. its olivia, btw :D (i know, just like the cruise company. shutup.)
Wow…. Way sad! I think there should be a law in fan fic that neither Tina nor Bette can have anything terminal. Besides, we have IC to provide us misery and grief! LOL
This is absolutely heartbreaking! My Tibette heart can’t take it! I can’t believe how f***** up everyone has become since Tina left. Please don’t leave us crying on our pillows for too long. Maybe even a little happiness for them in the next chapter. *wink,wink* However, I’m willing to follow whereever you take us with this story. Post soon!
Good, finally. Please post soon
“… i just make them dance like puppets” You’re not kidding! ;-)
So I guess we’ll all have to wait and see where this leaves them huh?
What a miserable life for everyone… Don’t let Bette die… But how could Tina face Bette. I mean, she never fought for their love in the last 7 or 8 years…
PLEASE LET THE GANG COME BACK TO BEING THE GANG. GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON.
Wow!! Now there’s a lot of drama!!!! Thanks…now, let’s hope that this is your version of If it’s a Wonderful Life…otherwise, it’s sounds like our girls are all screwed.
Brian is a f*cking asshole. do post soon…!!!
Damn…you weren’t kidding when you said “the shit’s gonna hit the fan.” Such DRAMA…didn’t think there would be anyone left to pick Tina up from the airport. LOL. Brian got off too easy…hopefully, Tina’ll handle that later. Thanks for the post.
Ok….you’ve left it toooo longgggggggg……….where the hell is chap 4!!! LOL….you need to get writing again babe…you can’t just leave us hanging there…
You stopped now? Really? I need the right years recap!
Great starting ooint