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“Before you say anything let me show you around ok?”
Tina led Bette by the hand to the back yard.
It was perfectly landscaped, with palm trees a rose garden and best of all a pool.
“I almost forgot about this house until James reminded me today when I told him we were interested in buying a house”
“T, this is beautiful”
“I know I had totally forgot about this property I don’t usually flip houses, that’s not what I do, I don’t like to tie up the crew on small jobs like this when I have larger jobs with deadlines, but this was such a great deal I just couldn’t pass it by”
“I bought this house from James uncle, he worked in finances and when the economy hit a rough patch, he could no longer afford to keep it so rather than lose it to the bank and ruin his credit, I decided to help him out and buy it from him, I got a great deal since the inside needed some work, I was going to renovate and sell it for a small profit, but seeing we need a place to call our own….well I thought I’d show you the place see what you thought… let me show you the inside, the guys are here already working on it, I had them totally gut it, being that this is an older more established neighborhood the wiring and plumbing needed to be updated, that’s what they are working on right now”
“Hey Paul” Tina waved to one of the workers
“Tina, what a surprise Carmen didn’t tell me you would be stopping by, If I would have known I was going to have company I would have cleaned up the place a little” Paul winked
Tina laughed
“Paul I want you to meet my girlfriend Bette Porter”
“Nice to meet you, forgive me if I don’t shake your hand” He said holding up his dirty hands for Bette and Tina to see.
“Paul I want to show Bette around I hope we don’t get in your way”
“No we’re actually almost done we just need to finish the kitchen, the drywall crew will be here on Monday, so if you feel you want to make changes to the floor plan now’s your chance”
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Most excellent story. I feel Tina’s joy. PPS.
I agree with the others. DO NOT LET JODI COME BETWEEN THEM. Besides I have faith that this Tina would take her down.
Honey We’re Home. Loved it. Thanks for the update.
This was a great chapter and I loved it. The house Tina has is perfect for them to start their lives together and establish a home for themselves. Bette has to get over the fact that Tina has more money. In time after Bette has established herself at the University or if she decides to open her own gallery they will be on a much better footing finacially. Tinas offer is more than fair and Bette needs to let go. PLEASE, PLEASE, don’t let jodi intefere with their relationship, they don’t need this bitch in their lives. She is just trouble and wants her own way. I’m just glad that Tina saw thru jodi and realized what she wanted even if Bette doesn’t realize it. Bette rarely sees what is in front of her face as we all know and she missed jodi’s intentions. Tina will protect their love and relationship from jodi in every way she can but if Bette doesn’t see what she is doing it will be harder for Tina. Since Tina is very wealthy and has contacts in New York, maybe she can have someone make jodi a deal that she can not refuse and that will get her out of their lives. They just don’t need this they are just now back together, they need peace and quiet. Thanks for posting. PPS
This was a great chapter and I loved it. The house Tina has is perfect for them to start their lives together and establish a home for themselves. Bette has to get over the fact that Tina has more money. In time after Bette has established herself at the University or if she decides to open her own gallery they will be on a much better footing finacially. Tinas offer is more than fair and Bette needs to let go. PLEASE, PLEASE, don’t let jodi intefere with their relationship, they don’t need this bitch in their lives. She is just trouble and wants her own way. I’m just glad that Tina saw thru jodi and realized what she wanted even if Bette doesn’t realize it. Bette rarely sees what is in front of her face as we all know and she missed jodi’s intentions. Tina will protect their love and relationship from jodi in every way she can but if Bette doesn’t see what she is doing it will be harder for Tina. Since Tina is very wealthy and has contacts in New York, maybe she can have someone make jodi a deal that she can not refuse and that will get her out of their lives. They just don’t need this they are just now back together, they need peace and quiet. Thanks for posting. PPS
This is just an excellent story. Thank you and wonderful update. Thank you so much for this story.
Journey1962 said it best… Honey We’re Home… loved this… great story… keep it going… on and on and on…pps
Home sweet home!!!Bette has to understand that Tina is wealth but does not base their relationship on money. Tina’s proposition is fair and she really wants to live together with Bette.Please don’t let jodi be trouble please make Bette and Tina a strong couple who would face and win over anybody and anything threw at them. What Jodi doesn’t know is who is Tina. This time won’t let anybody use Bette’s vulnerability and innocence. Pleaswe petty please don’t let that happen. PPVS
Loved this chapter and the propect of their home. Tina may have to put Jodie in check. PPS :o).
Love it ( can’t accuse these two of u-hauling it ;-)
Jodie has no chance.Another great chapter.
Tina has presented Bette with a fait accompli – the buried resentment may smolder, it may cause distance and a fortuitous opening for sneaky Jodie Lerner. …I’m just sayin’…
There is that jodi person again, bummer.
Yeah a Home and love it!