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    Story written on June 24, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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    1. Wonderful as always, Olives. Do you take a request? Could Bette and Tina have a wonderful mini vacation time next chapter? I am dying for their sweet moments.

    2. What SNS said…and chasemenow…get Bette back to the early fun-loving gal she was and give Tina the boost she needs to love her again…love this storyline too…great twists.

    6. I love this little dance Bette and Tina are doing. Two steps forward, one back. I’m glad Bette is sharing her emotions with Tina. Now Tina has to get past the hurt. Thanks for this and your other stories.

    8. Fantastic writing! It’s great that they’ve started to talk. It’s also great that Tina realises she’s become a worse person carrying around all that anger and lashing out at Bette in the most distructive ways. Will be nice to see them becoming stronger than before.

    10. so damn realistic it takes my breath away… T’s difficulties with dealing with her own emotions, looking at a side of her that she doesn’t like – as well as B’s.. and their inability to talk.. Please go on. (Yeah, I too would like a happy ending, but I’m enjoying the pace.. lol)

    11. Aww.. Olives.. I just love this soooo very much! Loved Bette’s dream, and that she’s trying to open up to Tina despite not knowing how T will react.. Thank you so much! Looking forward to the next one!

    12. Your stories are like no other. You take us to unexpected places. You create a world that we can inhabit. Sometimes when I finish, I look up and am surprised to be here, in front of my computer.
      Thank you.

    13. Oh and carrying on from my comments before…would love to see Bette become that charming yet considerate person she was in the early stages of their relationship. Bette desperately needs to get some of her spunk back :) …I am so into this story!!

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