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Story written on July 1, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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I loved the story, and was very happy to have seen that you had posted another chapter to this enderring story. Also I have enjoyed the “Chase as well as all your others” Will keep looking for another. Thanks for taking your time and committment i n writting these excellent stories.
NICE
Nice to have to back please contiune love your story.
Thank you soo much for continuing with this series (Umbrella)…it’s good to have a uplifting Bette and Tina story and see them happy…I love Bette and Tina in the beginning and happy. Please continue soon! Thanks again!
You tease! Gimme’ the naughty Bette/Tina Smut, PLEASE! :D
Very nice. I love the pace in this story. I’ve been anxious for another chapter. Please keep them coming.
Love your stuff!!
Loved it as always! Thanks for continuing this series! Love them both!!
wow ur timing..just yesterday was thinking about umbrella story..thank for coming back with it!..please continue
Glad to see this story again I really enjoy the girls at this time in there relationship. Please go on.
I happy that you continued with the Umbrella series. Since the beginning it’s been a great story.
Thank you Olives for the new chapter.More B&T lovely moments, please.
Yay! Umbrella is back!
Great chapter Olives. You’re so subtle and funny!
happy to see an update on this story.
Hey SNS – about a month ago, I stumbled upon the other fan fiction site. I read your “Umbrella” series – many times, actually. I completely fell in love with your writing of B&T. Until your piece, I never had read a ff in my life! It inspired me to attempt to write also. So, just wanted to thank you for sharing your gift – you’re a wonderful author!
there are so many stories written about bette/tina, and there are so many of them just so amazing and interesting and every single one of them incredible and unique and great in it’s own right…BUT this story it’s something different all together…the detail…the emotion…i truly hope you will countinue…thanks…