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Story written on October 3, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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(82 votes, average: 3.84 out of 5)
Yep! A long fuckin day indeed. Missed your series and always good to read.
Excellent chapter. I’m sure it’s going to be a long day… I feel bad for both Bette and Tina.. Looking forward to more, as always!! Thanks, SNS/ Olives!!
A long fucking day indeed! Its been a while so I’m glad you were able to get this out, despite writers block. Good one Olives.
Fine. Now *my* stomach’s in knots. Will we really have to wait a week to see the next move?
Oy vey, Tina! Good one Olives!
Come on Tina, lighten up. Seems like Tina can’t get over the past no matter what Bette does! Please don’t let Tina be so damn stubborn! Great chapter! Please post soon.
damn. brings back memories. damned if you do, damned if you don’t, damned if you even think about it. silence is the best move. emotions are flying all over the place. way to go olives.
Another great chapter, Olives. Thanks!
this is a rollercoaster. !!!
am so hook up, more please :D
Oy, like you said,one step forward, two steps back. Poor Bette, she has to walk on egg shells again.It’s going to be a long day. Thanks Olives for another drama.Can’t wait for the next one.
thanks for the great chapter-cant wait for next
Yeah, long fucking day…what is Tina’s problem…Bette, go home and start over…without tina.
Ah, Nothing wrong with a little Chase on a Sunday night. Great chapter Olives! Thanks.
Excellent Olives!
Just for you, Olives, I’m gonna learn another language so I can compliment you in more inventive ways. :) Can’t say it enough—one of my all-time favorite stories from one of the best writers on here. 5 stars doesn’t even come close!!
“Bette was the branch high up on the tree that most people just look at, but never dare step out onto. And now even though the limb had broken and Tina found herself on her back staring up at the sky, all she could see was the highest branch, the one she needed to climb to again.”
Beautiful. Thank you.
Missed you big time chase!!! These two give me an ulcer…no one writes their ongoing angst better than you (and of course MarieB)…Tina needs some space here and real space…Bette needs to go home and let Tina make her way back…if she stays like this then Bette’s going to really blow…I understand Tina’s pain but she has got to grow some Kahunas and make up her mind…please don’t stay away long this time Chase…pretty please!